Doobne wala tha lekin ubhar gaya hoon main

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on April 17, 2013, 06:40:33 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 18, 2013, 02:08:53 PM »
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bahut khoob , mahzar sahib.badi achchi ghazal se nawaza hai.
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«Reply #16 on: April 18, 2013, 02:14:18 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 18, 2013, 02:08:53 PM
bahut khoob , mahzar sahib.badi achchi ghazal se nawaza hai.
F.H.SIDDIQUI SAHEB,

              ZARRANAWAZI HAI AAPKI, BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA
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«Reply #17 on: April 18, 2013, 02:21:45 PM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on April 17, 2013, 06:40:33 PM
Lage hain kitne hi pahrey, magar gaya hoon main
teri gali me to shaam o sahar gaya hoon main

apni aaghosh me dariya bhi mujhe le na saka
laash ki shakl me mar ke ubhar gaya hoon main

ameer kunbe ki bigri hui aulaad hoon main
thokrein waqt ki kha kar sudhar gaya hoon main

mujhko kahne na lage ab yeh zamana majnoo
junoon e ishq me wo kaam ker gaya hoon main

usne sahil se di awaaz pukaara mujhko
doobne wala tha lekin ubhar gaya hoon main

qadam qadam pe chubhan ban ke dil me uthti hai
tumhari yaad ko lekar jidhar gaya hoon main

koi aahat bhi jo mahsoos hui hai mujhko
raah chalte hue aksar thahar gaya hoon main

            ............S.M.Mahzar
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«Reply #18 on: April 19, 2013, 12:10:10 AM »
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waah waah behad umda mahzar bhai
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«Reply #19 on: April 20, 2013, 06:11:55 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on April 18, 2013, 02:21:45 PM

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adil bechain saheb,
                      shukrguzaar hoon aapka ki aapko ghazal achchi lagi.........................
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«Reply #20 on: April 20, 2013, 06:14:57 PM »
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waah waah behad umda mahzar bhai
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                     Bahut shukrguzaar Hoon Aapka..........
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«Reply #21 on: April 27, 2013, 05:08:06 PM »
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Mazhar Sahaab Aadaab!



WaaH waaH waaH janab kia kahne behad khoob... badi hi umdaa aur behad khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne... gazab ke umdaa khayaaloN ko khoob ashaaroN meiN baNdha hai janab...Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...


Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile



Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on April 17, 2013, 06:40:33 PM


ameer kunbe ki bigri hui aulaad hoon main
thokrein waqt ki kha kar sudhar gaya hoon main

qadam qadam pe chubhan ban ke dil me uthti hai
tumhari yaad ko lekar jidhar gaya hoon main


            ............S.M.Mahzar
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«Reply #22 on: April 27, 2013, 05:11:03 PM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on April 17, 2013, 06:40:33 PM
Lage hain kitne hi pahrey, magar gaya hoon main
teri gali me to shaam o sahar gaya hoon main

apni aaghosh me dariya bhi mujhe le na saka
laash ki shakl me mar ke ubhar gaya hoon main

ameer kunbe ki bigri hui aulaad hoon main
thokrein waqt ki kha kar sudhar gaya hoon main

mujhko kahne na lage ab yeh zamana majnoo
junoon e ishq me wo kaam ker gaya hoon main

usne sahil se di awaaz pukaara mujhko
doobne wala tha lekin ubhar gaya hoon main

qadam qadam pe chubhan ban ke dil me uthti hai
tumhari yaad ko lekar jidhar gaya hoon main

koi aahat bhi jo mahsoos hui hai mujhko
raah chalte hue aksar thahar gaya hoon main

            ............S.M.Mahzar
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«Reply #23 on: April 27, 2013, 05:12:35 PM »
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 Rarwaaz Saheb,
             walaykumassalaam
   AApki nawazish hai, shukrguzar hoon ki aapne ghazal ko tareef ke qabil samjha..........
               Khudahafiz
Niyazmand
        S.M.Mahzar
        

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«Reply #24 on: May 04, 2013, 12:46:57 AM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on April 27, 2013, 05:11:03 PM
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marhoom bahyaat,
                   bahut bahut shukriya...................
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