Doobtaa jaa rahaa hai dard, sard aahoun mein!

by abdbundeli on July 25, 2009, 01:08:07 PM
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Doobtaa jaa rahaa hai dard, sard aahoun mein!
Mein beyqaraar hun, dilbar nahin hai baahoun mein!!

Raat ho, din ho; neend aaye, na aaye; har dam,
Eik cheyhraa hai musalsal meyree nigaahoun mein!

Chot khaayee hai jigar mein, na qasb-o-khoon kaheen;
Phir bhi doobey hain zeyhn-o-dil alam ki thaahoun mein!

Gaa rahee andleeb, ro rahi-si lagtee hai;
Doobtee jaa rahi hai moosiiqee karaahoun mein!

Na jaaney koun-saa gunaah huaa hai mujhsey?
Naqsh-e-paa un key kho gaye hain kaheen raahoun mein!

Chhaantaa khaak, phir rahaa hun kis wiraaney mein?
Aarjoo thee, ki, umra guzarey khwaabgaahoun mein!

Aaj is jaam-e-khaak mein, to, doosarey mein kal?
Qaid hai zindagee bey intihaa nikaahoun mein!

Haal jo bhi ho munaasib hai, bashartey, meyraa
Saaqiah ho shareek, tootatey hamraahoun mein!

Mujhko us bazm sey nisbat nahin koyee, ay 'abd',
Tabeeb meyraa nahin gar wahaan hamkhwaahoun mein!

                                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2009, 02:23:47 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2009, 02:27:32 PM »
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Uske tarze-sitam ki baat karo
Uske taza karam ki baat karo

Khushaq aankhon se ashq beh nikle
Aaj fir koyi gam ki baat karo

Tumne khayi thi pyar ki kasme
Aaj pehli kasam ki baat karo

Jiski awaaz ko hai tarse kaan
Vewafa, us Jaan ki baat karo

Sunte hai vo edhar se nikhlenge
Aaj toh nashe se pyar ki baat karo

Jinko hum mante hai apna khuda
Unke rehmo-karam ki baat karo

Todkarlaye tare amber se
Ye, Sanam, aise dam ki baat karo..
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2009, 02:36:13 PM »
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bohat bohat khoob abd ji.... Applause Applause Applause wah wah wah!

very nice reply raja ji.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2009, 02:45:13 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 25, 2009, 02:23:47 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriyah Roja!
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«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2009, 02:48:06 PM »
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Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on July 25, 2009, 02:36:13 PM
bohat bohat khoob abd ji.... Applause Applause Applause wah wah wah!

very nice reply raja ji.... Applause Applause Applause
Thanks a lot, Tanha(Saurabh) ji!
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«Reply #6 on: July 25, 2009, 02:50:10 PM »
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ur welcome...abd ji.. aap ka kalam hota hi aisa hai.. kya karein...
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«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2009, 02:50:39 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 25, 2009, 02:27:32 PM

Uske tarz-e-sitam ki baat karo
Uske taza karam ki baat karo


Khushaq aankhon se ashq beh nikle
Aaj fir koyi gam ki baat karo

Tumne khayi thi pyar ki kasmen
Aaj pehli kasam ki baat karo


Jiski awaaz ko hai tarse kaan
Vewafa, us Jaan ki baat karo

Sunte hai vo edhar se nikhlenge
Aaj toh nashe se pyar ki baat karo


Jinko ham mante hain apna khuda
Unke rahmo-karam ki baat karo

Tod kar laye arsh se taare
Ae, Sanam, aise dam ki baat karo..


Lovely Roja!
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«Reply #8 on: July 25, 2009, 05:59:19 PM »
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Wah Wah Bahut khoob, Abd Ji! Bahut achha likha hai aapne! Applause


Roja Ji... Very nice reply! Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2009, 03:00:15 AM »
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Wah Abd ji and Roja ji kamaal ki gazal likha aap dono ne.excellent,very
beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2009, 07:16:37 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 25, 2009, 01:08:07 PM

Doobtaa jaa rahaa hai dard, sard aahoun mein!
Mein beyqaraar hun, dilbar nahin hai baahoun mein!!

Raat ho, din ho; neend aaye, na aaye; har dam,
Eik cheyhraa hai musalsal meyree nigaahoun mein!

Chot khaayee hai jigar mein, na qasb-o-khoon kaheen;
Phir bhi doobey hain zeyhn-o-dil alam ki thaahoun mein!

Gaa rahee andleeb, ro rahi-si lagtee hai;
Doobtee jaa rahi hai moosiiqee karaahoun mein!

Na jaaney koun-saa gunaah huaa hai mujhsey?
Naqsh-e-paa un key kho gaye hain kaheen raahoun mein!

Chhaantaa khaak, phir rahaa hun kis wiraaney mein?
Aarjoo thee, ki, umra guzarey khwaabgaahoun mein!

Aaj is jaam-e-khaak mein, to, doosarey mein kal?
Qaid hai zindagee bey intihaa nikaahoun mein!

Haal jo bhi ho munaasib hai, bashartey, meyraa
Saaqiah ho shareek, tootatey hamraahoun mein!

Mujhko us bazm sey nisbat nahin koyee, ay 'abd',
Tabeeb meyraa nahin gar wahaan hamkhwaahoun mein!

                                    - abd bundeli


 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Vaakai yo ki khusnaseebi hai jo aap jaise digaaj yahan likhte hai aur shrotagun aanand le paate hai khubsoorat aur dumdaar rachnao ka!
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«Reply #11 on: July 26, 2009, 07:18:55 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 25, 2009, 02:27:32 PM
Uske tarze-sitam ki baat karo
Uske taza karam ki baat karo

Khushaq aankhon se ashq beh nikle
Aaj fir koyi gam ki baat karo

Tumne khayi thi pyar ki kasme
Aaj pehli kasam ki baat karo

Jiski awaaz ko hai tarse kaan
Vewafa, us Jaan ki baat karo

Sunte hai vo edhar se nikhlenge
Aaj toh nashe se pyar ki baat karo

Jinko hum mante hai apna khuda
Unke rehmo-karam ki baat karo

Todkarlaye tare amber se
Ye, Sanam, aise dam ki baat karo..




 Applause Applause


Bhaut  khoob!
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«Reply #12 on: July 26, 2009, 07:34:18 AM »
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Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on July 25, 2009, 02:50:10 PM
ur welcome...abd ji.. aap ka kalam hota hi aisa hai.. kya karein...
Thanks again for all these kind & sweet words!
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«Reply #13 on: July 26, 2009, 07:42:20 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on July 25, 2009, 05:59:19 PM
Wah Wah Bahut khoob, Abd Ji! Bahut achha likha hai aapne! Applause


Roja Ji... Very nice reply! Applause
Thanks Deepati, a lot of them!
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«Reply #14 on: July 26, 2009, 07:43:43 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 26, 2009, 03:00:15 AM
Wah Abd ji and Roja ji kamaal ki gazal likha aap dono ne.excellent,very
beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot Madhu!
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