Doobtaa jaa rahaa hai dard, sard aahoun mein! -Panna 2:Ghazals

abdbundeli

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«Reply #15 on: July 26, 2009, 07:52:47 AM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 26, 2009, 07:16:37 AM

Vaakai yo ki khusnaseebi hai jo aap jaise digaaj yahan likhte hai aur shrotagun aanand le paate hai khubsoorat aur dumdaar rachnao ka!

Prateek Mardia ji!
I've no other words except a lot of 'Haardik Dhanyawaads' for expressing my heart-felt gratitude for all your sweet words!
- abd bundeli


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Re: Doobtaa jaa rahaa hai dard, sard aahoun mein!

«Reply #16 on: July 26, 2009, 11:28:53 AM »

kya baat hai abd ji........

ZINDAGI JEE NAHIN PAAOUN MEIN,
KI DILBAR NAHIN HAI BAAHOUN MEIN.

RAAT DIN DOOBAA RAHETAHUN UNKE KHYALLON MEIN,
KI USI KA CAHERA RAHETA HAI IN NIGAAOUN MEIN.

CHALLI GAYI HAI BAHUT HI DOOR MUJHSEY,
KI MUSHKIL HAI AB AANA,USKA MERI RAHOUN MEIN.

AB JEE NAHIN KARTA,JAANA KISI BHI MAHEFILON MEIN,
KI DILBAR NAHIN HAI MERI BAAHOUN MEIN.

HAR ROJ PEE-PEEKAR JAAM USKE GUM MEIN,
MAARTA JAA RAHAHUN KHUD KO MEIN.

HAR SHART USKE SAATH JEENE KO HAI MANJOOR,
BAR-SHART WOH KABHI NA JAAEY MUJHSE DOOR.

YEH JEENA BHI KYA JEENA HAI MERA,
JAB DILBAR NAHIN HAI BAAHOUN MEIN.

ROJA JI AAPNE BHI BAHUT BADIYA LIKHA HAI.


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abdbundeli

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Re: Doobtaa jaa rahaa hai dard, sard aahoun mein!

«Reply #17 on: July 26, 2009, 11:45:23 AM »

Quote from: cara on July 26, 2009, 11:28:53 AM

Thanks cara!

Duniyaa mein kyaa dharaa hai, agar too hi naheen hai!
Too hai to, zameen par hain jannatoun key khwaab sab!
Aab-e-kousar hai khumoun mein teyrey: ataa kar too!
Too hai, to, kyaa kareygaa yahaan maahtaab ab?

- abd bundeli


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Re: Doobtaa jaa rahaa hai dard, sard aahoun mein!

«Reply #18 on: July 26, 2009, 11:50:39 AM »

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob Abd saheb ji...

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash..

Bahut Khoob Caraji & Roja..


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abdbundeli

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Re: Doobtaa jaa rahaa hai dard, sard aahoun mein!

«Reply #19 on: July 26, 2009, 12:15:36 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on July 26, 2009, 11:50:39 AM

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob Abd saheb ji...

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash..

Bahut Khoob Caraji & Roja..

Bahut-bahut shukriyah khwaish ji!
- abd bundeli


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Rikta

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Re: Doobtaa jaa rahaa hai dard, sard aahoun mein!

«Reply #20 on: July 27, 2009, 06:07:34 PM »

very nice shayari........bohot ache hello2


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abdbundeli

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Re: Doobtaa jaa rahaa hai dard, sard aahoun mein!

«Reply #21 on: July 30, 2009, 12:09:14 PM »

Quote from: Rikta on July 27, 2009, 06:07:34 PM

very nice shayari........bohot ache hello2

Thanks a lot, Rikta ji! Mujhey khushee hai, ki, aapney meyree 'gazal' padhney ki takleef gawaarah kee; aur usey saraahaa bhee!

- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: Doobtaa jaa rahaa hai dard, sard aahoun mein!

«Reply #22 on: July 31, 2009, 02:27:42 PM »

Thanks Uncle ji, Deepati, Madhu, Cara ji, Khwaish bhaiya, Rikta ..


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