Door jaane se.................................Aqsh

by aqsh on February 04, 2013, 04:32:48 AM

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ParwaaZ

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«Reply #15 on: February 04, 2013, 09:22:12 AM »

Aqsh Sahibaa Aadaab!

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne badi hi khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam
kahi hai...

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.. Humaari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabull kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez..


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Re: Door jaane se.................................Aqsh

«Reply #16 on: February 04, 2013, 11:18:52 AM »

wah wah wah wah


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Re: Door jaane se.................................Aqsh

«Reply #17 on: February 04, 2013, 11:44:43 AM »

Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on February 04, 2013, 06:02:09 AM

:nice lines ji

thnx rajan jee


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Re: Door jaane se.................................Aqsh

«Reply #18 on: February 04, 2013, 11:45:17 AM »

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on February 04, 2013, 06:13:46 AM

Wah Wah!!! Bohat Khub!!! Very Nice And Emotional!!!

Clapping Smiley

thank you sooooooo much shireen jee


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Re: Door jaane se.................................Aqsh

«Reply #19 on: February 04, 2013, 11:45:48 AM »

Quote from: shara63 on February 04, 2013, 06:24:29 AM

beautiful lines of sad feelings...mubaark ho aqsh ji!

thank you shara jee


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Re: Door jaane se.................................Aqsh

«Reply #20 on: February 04, 2013, 11:46:15 AM »

Quote from: ~Aatish~ on February 04, 2013, 06:28:49 AM

thnx aatish jee


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Re: Door jaane se.................................Aqsh

«Reply #21 on: February 04, 2013, 11:46:43 AM »

Quote from: poonamA on February 04, 2013, 08:03:00 AM

nice..bahot dard hai

thnx poonama jee


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Re: Door jaane se.................................Aqsh

«Reply #22 on: February 04, 2013, 11:47:14 AM »

Quote from: laaiba on February 04, 2013, 08:20:32 AM

waah bohat khoob ,.....nyc thoughts,........bohat c daad

thnx laaiba jee


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Re: Door jaane se.................................Aqsh

«Reply #23 on: February 04, 2013, 11:47:50 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 04, 2013, 09:22:12 AM

thanks parwaaz jee


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Re: Door jaane se.................................Aqsh

«Reply #24 on: February 04, 2013, 11:48:26 AM »

Quote from: nandbahu on February 04, 2013, 11:18:52 AM

wah wah wah wah

thnx nandbahu jee


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Re: Door jaane se.................................Aqsh

«Reply #25 on: February 04, 2013, 11:50:38 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on February 04, 2013, 04:32:48 AM

Na jaane kyun rota hai dil, kisi ke door jaane se
Kyun chalakti hai aankhein, kise ki yaad aane se

Sochkar pareshaan hai ke, kis jurm ki yeh saza hai
Mil gaya aakhir unhe aisa kya, hamara dil jalaane se

Jo hua karte the kabhi, mere apnon se pyaare
Dooriyaan itni badhai ke, lagte hai begaane se

Chookar toh dekha hota, mere toote hue dil ko
Dhadkane bhi ruk jaati thi, sirf unke bulaane se

Wafa ki ummeed karte rahe, ek bewafa se “Aqsh”
Khata unki par gunahgaar hue hum, bas dil lagaane se

Bahut bahut acha likha hai aapne beta. excellant