Door jaane se.................................Aqsh

by aqsh on February 04, 2013, 04:32:48 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 04, 2013, 09:22:12 AM »
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Aqsh Sahibaa Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne badi hi khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam
kahi hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.. Humaari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabull kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: February 04, 2013, 11:18:52 AM »
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wah wah wah wah
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«Reply #17 on: February 04, 2013, 11:44:43 AM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on February 04, 2013, 06:02:09 AM
icon_flower :nice lines ji
thnx rajan jee
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«Reply #18 on: February 04, 2013, 11:45:17 AM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on February 04, 2013, 06:13:46 AM
Wah Wah!!! Bohat Khub!!! Very Nice And Emotional!!!

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thank you sooooooo much shireen jee
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«Reply #19 on: February 04, 2013, 11:45:48 AM »
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Quote from: shara63 on February 04, 2013, 06:24:29 AM
beautiful lines of sad feelings...mubaark ho aqsh ji!
thank you shara jee
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«Reply #20 on: February 04, 2013, 11:46:15 AM »
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Quote from: ~Aatish~ on February 04, 2013, 06:28:49 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: February 04, 2013, 11:46:43 AM »
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Quote from: poonamA on February 04, 2013, 08:03:00 AM
nice..bahot dard hai
thnx poonama jee
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«Reply #22 on: February 04, 2013, 11:47:14 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on February 04, 2013, 08:20:32 AM
waah bohat khoob ,.....nyc thoughts,........bohat c daad
thnx laaiba jee
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«Reply #23 on: February 04, 2013, 11:47:50 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 04, 2013, 09:22:12 AM
Aqsh Sahibaa Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne badi hi khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam
kahi hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.. Humaari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabull kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile

thanks parwaaz jee
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«Reply #24 on: February 04, 2013, 11:48:26 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on February 04, 2013, 11:18:52 AM
wah wah wah wah
thnx nandbahu jee
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«Reply #25 on: February 04, 2013, 11:50:38 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on February 04, 2013, 04:32:48 AM
Na jaane kyun rota hai dil, kisi ke door jaane se
Kyun chalakti hai aankhein, kise ki yaad aane se

Sochkar  pareshaan hai ke, kis jurm ki yeh saza hai
Mil gaya aakhir unhe aisa kya, hamara dil jalaane se

Jo hua karte the kabhi, mere apnon se pyaare
Dooriyaan itni badhai ke, lagte hai begaane se

Chookar toh dekha hota, mere toote hue dil ko
Dhadkane bhi ruk jaati thi, sirf unke bulaane se

Wafa ki ummeed karte rahe, ek bewafa se “Aqsh”
Khata unki par gunahgaar hue hum, bas dil lagaane se

Bahut bahut acha likha hai aapne beta. excellant  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #26 on: February 04, 2013, 01:34:15 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on February 04, 2013, 11:50:38 AM
Bahut bahut acha likha hai aapne beta. excellant  Thumbs UP
thnx suman jee soooo much
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«Reply #27 on: February 04, 2013, 01:52:44 PM »
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 Applause Applause
 Nice,Aqsh.Beautiful lines.
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«Reply #28 on: February 04, 2013, 03:05:42 PM »
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bahut khoob   Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: February 04, 2013, 03:14:01 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 04, 2013, 01:52:44 PM
Applause Applause
 Nice,Aqsh.Beautiful lines.
thank you soooooooooo much hasan jee
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