Door jaane se.................................Aqsh

by aqsh on February 04, 2013, 04:32:48 AM
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«Reply #30 on: February 04, 2013, 03:14:26 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on February 04, 2013, 03:05:42 PM
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thnx amit prakash jee
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«Reply #31 on: February 04, 2013, 05:48:42 PM »
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Na jaane kyun rota hai dil, kisi ke door jaane se
Kyun chalakti hai aankhein, kise ki yaad aane se

Sochkar  pareshaan hai ke, kis jurm ki yeh saza hai
Mil gaya aakhir unhe aisa kya, hamara dil jalaane se

Jo hua karte the kabhi, mere apnon se pyaare
Dooriyaan itni badhai ke, lagte hai begaane se

in lines me ek alag tadap hai...jaise seedhe dil se nikli hai..
bahut badhiya ..likhte rahiye
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«Reply #32 on: February 05, 2013, 03:36:52 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on February 04, 2013, 05:48:42 PM
Na jaane kyun rota hai dil, kisi ke door jaane se
Kyun chalakti hai aankhein, kise ki yaad aane se

Sochkar  pareshaan hai ke, kis jurm ki yeh saza hai
Mil gaya aakhir unhe aisa kya, hamara dil jalaane se

Jo hua karte the kabhi, mere apnon se pyaare
Dooriyaan itni badhai ke, lagte hai begaane se

in lines me ek alag tadap hai...jaise seedhe dil se nikli hai..
bahut badhiya ..likhte rahiye



thank you sooo much mukesh jee meri ghazal ko pasand karne ke liye aur housla afzai ke liye
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«Reply #33 on: February 05, 2013, 04:16:03 AM »
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thnx himanshu jee
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«Reply #35 on: February 05, 2013, 02:26:49 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa baat hai Aqsh ji.. bahut bahut sundar rachna , bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #36 on: February 19, 2013, 10:26:31 AM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa baat hai Aqsh ji.. bahut bahut sundar rachna , bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
thnx hriday ji
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