Door sey hee nigaaheyn milaayaa karo!!

by abdbundeli on September 09, 2010, 01:29:43 PM
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Mat zamaaney ki nazaroun mein aayaa karo!
Door sey hee nigaaheyn milaayaa karo!!

Doob jaatey hain fir-fir paseenoun mein ham:
Baarahaa, paas itney na aayaa karo!

Roz chhup kar galee sey guzartey ho kyoun?
Kyaa bajaa hai, ki, yuun zulm dhhaayaa karo?

Thheek kahtey hain maan-baap tumsey, sanam!
Husn ko doosaroun sey chhupaayaa karo!!

Moosiiqee kee lahar aashiyaan mein jagey:
Bulbulon kee tarah khoob gaayaa karo!

Deed sey bhee hamain hai sukoon, jaan-e-man!
Ho galee mein khadey muskuraayaa karo!!

Ham na aayengey ab baam par baarahaa;
Baarahaa gungunaa, mat bulaayaa karo!

Paas aa paaye na ab khizaan fir kabhee:
Mat bahaaroun sey nazareyn churaayaa karo!

Jaan nikaltee hai ab, tumko deykhey binaa:
Chhup hijaaboun mein, mat dil dukhaayaa karo!

Khaak ho jaayegaa baag-e-bulbul, 'abd',
Diljaloun sey nasheyman bachaayaa karo!

                      - abd bundeli

मत  ज़माने  की  नज़रौं  में  आया  करो !
दूर  से  ही  निगाहें  मिलाया  करो !!

डूब  जाते  हैं  फिर -फिर  पसीनों   में   हम :
बारहा , पास  इतने  न  आया  करो !

रोज़  छुप  कर  गली  से  गुज़रते  हो  क्योँ ?
क्या  बजा  है , कि , यूं  ज़ुल्म  ढहाया  करो ?

ठीक  कहते  हैं  माँ -बाप  तुमसे , सनम !
हुस्न  को  दूसरौं  से  छुपाया  करो !!

मूसीकी  की  लहर  आशियाँ  में जगे :
बुलबुलों  की  तरह  खूब  गाया  करो !

दीद  से  भी  हमें  है  सुकूं , जाने मन !
हो  गली  में  खड़े   मुस्कुराया  करो !!

हम  न  आयेंगे  अब  बाम  पर बारहा ;
बारहा  गुनगुना , मत  बुलाया  करो !

पास  आ  पाए  न  अब  खिजां  फिर  कभी :
मत  बहारौं  से  नज़रें  चुराया  करो !

जां  निकलती  है  अब , तुमको  देखे  बिना :
छुप  हिजाबौं  में , मत  दिल  दुखाया  करो !

ख़ाक  हो  जाएगा  बागे बुलबुल , 'अबद ',
दिलजलों   से  नशेमन  बचाया  करो !

                 - अबद  बुन्देली
                  
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«Reply #1 on: September 09, 2010, 08:26:04 PM »
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Janab Abd Bundeli Sahab Aadaab!

Kia umdaa Gazal pesh ki hai janab..... yahaaN Dard dard ke post padhkar dil ghamgiM ho raha tha humara....

Par aapki is kalaam ke ishqiyaaN ashaar padhker bahut khushi mehsus kar raheN hai Bahut umdaa Jee Daad Daad Daad     



Mat zamaaney ki nazaroun mein aayaa karo!
Door sey hee nigaaheyn milaayaa karo!!

Kia Baat hai .... Bahut sahiN janab, Tajurbe ki baat kahi hai daad ... Usual Smile     


Doob jaatey hain fir-fir paseenoun mein ham:
Baarahaa, paas itney na aayaa karo!

Kia khoob kaha hai... Bahut umdaa Daad..     


Roz chhup kar galee sey guzartey ho kyoun?
Kyaa bajaa hai, ki, yuun zulm dhhaayaa karo?

Hmmm sher achcha hai.... Puchna padeNga kia wajaaH hai so.. tongue3     


Thheek kahtey hain maan-baap tumsey, sanam!
Husn ko doosaroun sey chhupaayaa karo!!

Bahut khoob..... per Maan baap aise bhi kahte hai... :O sher behad khoob hai     


Moosiiqee kee lahar aashiyaan mein jagey:
Bulbulon kee tarah khoob gaayaa karo!

bahut achche ..... achcha sher hai.. amal karke dekhna padeNga Usual Smile     


Deed sey bhee hamain hai sukoon, jaan-e-man!
Ho galee mein khadey muskuraayaa karo!!

Bahut umdaa.... Dil ki baat behad sade lafzoN meiN adaa kii hai achcha laga hume.. Usual Smile     


Ham na aayengey ab baam par baarahaa;
Baarahaa gungunaa, mat bulaayaa karo!

Hmmm Sher ka khayaal thik se samjh nahi paye... Shayad sher aur bhi achcha ban sakta tha humari nazar meiN..     


Paas aa paaye na ab khizaan fir kabhee:
Mat bahaaroun sey nazareyn churaayaa karo!

Kia baat hai Janab.... bahut umdaa massage hai... Daad     


Jaan nikaltee hai ab, tumko deykhey binaa:
Chhup hijaaboun mein, mat dil dukhaayaa karo!

Kia baat hai bahut umdaa... Daad Daad Daad... Usual Smile     


Khaak ho jaayegaa baag-e-bulbul, 'abd',
Diljaloun sey nasheyman bachaayaa karo!

Waah Jee kia baat hai Dil ko lag gayi .... Bahut khoob... Daad     


                    - abd bundeli


Abd Sahab is purlutf pur kashish gazal per dil se daad hazir hai.....

Aise hi umdaa gazaloN ke saath bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Khush o aabdaad rahiye.....
Khuda hafez.... Usual Smile     

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«Reply #2 on: September 10, 2010, 03:17:01 PM »
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Janab Abd Bundeli Sahab Aadaab!

Kia umdaa Gazal pesh ki hai janab..... yahaaN Dard dard ke post padhkar dil ghamgiM ho raha tha humara....

Par aapki is kalaam ke ishqiyaaN ashaar padhker bahut khushi mehsus kar raheN hai Bahut umdaa Jee Daad Daad Daad    



Abd Sahab is purlutf pur kashish gazal per dil se daad hazir hai.....

Aise hi umdaa gazaloN ke saath bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Khush o aabdaad rahiye.....
Khuda hafez.... Usual Smile    



Bahut-bahut shukriyah ParwaaZ ji! Aapney itnee gahraayee sey gazal ko padhhaa, mujhey khushee huyee!
Ham na aayengey ab baam par baarahaa;
Baarahaa gungunaa, mat bulaayaa karo!

Iskaa ma'aanee seedhaa-saadaa hai: 'Ham baar-baar baam par naheen aayengey, (aap)hameyn baar-baar gungunaa kar(gungunaaney key ishaarey sey)mat bulaayaa keejiye (yaani, aap baar-baar gungunaa kar hameyn ishaarey sey bulaatey hain, aur ham aaney ko majboor ho jaatey hain, aisaa mat kiyaa keejiye).
Khush rahiye!
 Eid Mubarak Ho!
                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2010, 02:10:06 AM »
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  Waah waah bahut behatareen peshkash hai Abd ji, maza aagaya padh kar. bahut khoob. icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2010, 02:36:51 AM »
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  Waah waah bahut behatareen peshkash hai Abd ji, maza aagaya padh kar. bahut khoob. icon_thumleft

Lots of thanks, tamanna.pt ji! Eid Mubarak Ho!

                              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2010, 08:34:50 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Abd ji.... bahut bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 12, 2010, 08:42:31 AM »
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wowwwwww...so romantic ...

abd ji aapne to isme bhi kamaal kar diya... kya khubbb sama bandha hai aapne apni nazm se...sara scene jaise ankhon me utar aaya.....

mast ji....aur mujhe aapka ye likhne ka style to bht hi achcha lagta hai...
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«Reply #7 on: September 12, 2010, 11:05:27 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Abd ji.... bahut bahut khoob...!!!


Lots of thanks, 'klaskar' ji!

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«Reply #8 on: September 12, 2010, 11:08:24 AM »
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wowwwwww...so romantic ...

abd ji aapne to isme bhi kamaal kar diya... kya khubbb sama bandha hai aapne apni nazm se...sara scene jaise ankhon me utar aaya.....

mast ji....aur mujhe aapka ye likhne ka style to bht hi achcha lagta hai...

Thanks a lot, *KasaK* ji! Aapkee duaa hai!

                     - abd bundeli
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