doori ho gayi,,,,ghazal,,,,,,,,,,,,

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kiyon pal bhar  main hamre  bich doori ho gayi,
zindagi yeh saari  dardo,n  main poori ho gayi,

azab khel khelti  rahi aksr  zindagi mare sath,
paa kar tujh koh kho diya toh  adhoori ho gayi,

bewafaa samjh baithey log  maree chupi ko dekh,
mahfil ne kiya zaleel dil ki  be qadri ho gayi,

khizaa,n huyi zindagi main kis se khushi milti,
jafaa mili eysi tanha zindagi majboori ho gayi,

mohhobat karne ka sila to milna tha ek din jeet,
zamaane ki nazar main ye mohhobat boori ho gayi,


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बहुत खूब....

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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2015, 01:27:08 PM »
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वाह वाह बहुत खूब -लो हमारी भी इच्छा पूरी ही गई एक राऊ के साथ
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bohat shukriya ram sir ji dil se rau qabool









or haa apki dil ki ikcha main apse kal puchunga abhi duty jaa raha hoo,n
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