doosri kami hai tu ...

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«Reply #15 on: June 22, 2013, 05:29:36 PM »
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मेरी ज़िंदगी  है तू
फिर भी अजनबी है तू

बस नज़र नही आता
वरना आदमी है तू

एक खुद नहीं हूँ मैं
दूसरी कमी है तू

देखने से लगता है
सोचने लगी है तू

आ मेरे सफीने में
डूबती नदी है तू

तुझसे भी न पूरी हो
ऐसी क्या कमी है तू

रूह आ निकलती है
जब पुकारती है तू

एक दम ठहर जा ना
क्यूँ घड़ी-घड़ी है तू

मेरे जैसी लगती है
इतनी अजनबी है तू

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meri zindgi hai tu
phir bhi ajnabi hai tu

bas nazar nahi aata
warna aadmi hai tu

ek khud nahiN hun maiN
doosri kami hai tu

dekhne se lagta hai
sochne lagi hai tu

aa mere safeene meiN
doobti nadi hai tu

tujhse bhi na poori ho
aisi kya kami hai tu

rooh aa nikalti hai
jab pukaarti hai tu

ek dam thahar ja na
kyuN ghaDi-ghaDi hai tu


mere jaisi lagti hai
itni ajnabi hai tu








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«Reply #16 on: June 22, 2013, 06:02:01 PM »
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बस नज़र नही आता
वरना आदमी है तू

एक खुद नहीं हूँ मैं
दूसरी कमी है तू


आ मेरे सफीने में
डूबती नदी है तू

तुझसे भी न पूरी हो
ऐसी क्या कमी है तू

एक दम ठहर जा ना
क्यूँ घड़ी-घड़ी है तू

मेरे जैसी लगती है
इतनी अजनबी है तू

Wah,Wah,Wah Bahut mushkil kaam hai itni chhoti behr me apnee baat kahna,lakin aapne ye kaam bahut khoobsurti se kiya hai.Really Nice. Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #17 on: June 22, 2013, 08:08:50 PM »
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uffffffffffffffff.......... love4 love4 ek to aapka naam uspe ye gazal   love4 love4.... jaan lene ka irada hai kya janaab.....  Winking Winking

kaise kar lete hain ye mushkil kaam aap  icon_scratch icon_scratch... itne kum shabdon me itni gehri baatein  icon_salut icon_salut ... bilkul sidhe sache ehsaas.. na kum na zyada.... bas yunhi jaise keh diya jo dil me tha aur teer sidhe dil k bicho bich... khalllaaassssssss.......  notworthy notworthy notworthy
padhne wala to bas padhta reh jaye  read2 read2.... aapka yahi andaaz e bayaan hume pasand hai janumanu ji....  love4 love4


meri zindgi hai tu
phir bhi ajnabi hai tu

mashaallah kamaal ka sher....

bas nazar nahi aata
warna aadmi hai tu

aajkal har aadmi ki yahi daastaan hai

ek khud nahiN hun maiN
doosri kami hai tu

lajawaabbbbbbbbb.... kya kehne

dekhne se lagta hai
sochne lagi hai tu

haan aapko padhkar sochne pe majbur ho hi jayegi

aa mere safeene meiN
doobti nadi hai tu

ye sher kuch khas raha janu manu ji

tujhse bhi na poori ho
aisi kya kami hai tu

 notworthy notworthy

rooh aa nikalti hai
jab pukaarti hai tu

speechlessssssssssssss

ek dam thahar ja na
kyuN ghaDi-ghaDi hai tu

waahhhhh jiiiiii

mere jaisi lagti hai
itni ajnabi hai tu...

ye sher to bas utar hi gaya dil me.......

aapke kuch sher to aise hain jo bhulte nahi..  ye unme jud gaye hain...
sadabahaar sher

tujhse bhi na poori ho
aisi kya kami hai tu

mere jaisi lagti hai
itni ajnabi hai tu...

ek khud nahiN hun maiN
doosri kami hai tu
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«Reply #18 on: June 23, 2013, 02:19:53 AM »
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Bahut Khub Janumanu Ji Applause

Nusrat Saheb Ki Gayi Ik Ghazal
Yaad Aa Gayi...Khair



Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #19 on: June 24, 2013, 02:10:13 PM »
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एक खुद नहीं हूँ मैं
दूसरी कमी है तू

ye naayaab khayaal.. kya kahne. maheeno baad aise khayaal se roobarun hote hai ham aksar
Haasil-e- ghazal..bahut umda..
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«Reply #20 on: July 19, 2013, 06:05:19 AM »
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WaaH WaaH Bahut Khoob..........

thank you ji
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«Reply #21 on: July 19, 2013, 06:06:29 AM »
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Bahut Khub Janumanu Ji Applause

Nusrat Saheb Ki Gayi Ik Ghazal
Yaad Aa Gayi...Khair



Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab


shurkiaya sihaab sahab.... ji nasir sahab ki zameen pe ek jhonpDa maine bhi khada kar liya Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: July 19, 2013, 08:17:42 AM »
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मेरी ज़िंदगी  है तू
फिर भी अजनबी है तू

बस नज़र नही आता
वरना आदमी है तू

एक खुद नहीं हूँ मैं
दूसरी कमी है तू

देखने से लगता है
सोचने लगी है तू

आ मेरे सफीने में
डूबती नदी है तू

तुझसे भी न पूरी हो
ऐसी क्या कमी है तू

रूह आ निकलती है
जब पुकारती है तू

एक दम ठहर जा ना
क्यूँ घड़ी-घड़ी है तू

मेरे जैसी लगती है
इतनी अजनबी है तू

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meri zindgi hai tu
phir bhi ajnabi hai tu
haan ji zindagi ko samjhte samjhte maut aa jati hai aur ye paheli hi bani rahti hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
bas nazar nahi aata
warna aadmi hai tu
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))aaj kal bhoot ki shakl mein aadmi milta hai
ek khud nahiN hun maiN
doosri kami hai tu
aur meri kami hai tu icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
dekhne se lagta hai
sochne lagi hai tu
meri shakal aur aql mein koi taal mail nahin hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
aa mere safeene meiN
doobti nadi hai tu
aaj badla le hi liya tum ne..![/color]bina nakhuda ke tairty kashti hoon main
tujhse bhi na poori ho
aisi kya kami hai tu
waqt ki  kami hai ji
rooh aa nikalti hai
jab pukaarti hai tu
logo.n ki to jaan hi nikal jaati hai jab muskuraati hoon main Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
ek dam thahar ja na
kyuN ghaDi-ghaDi hai tu
ruk gayi to kabhi na jaa paao.n gi. bahut door manzil hai ji
icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
mere jaisi lagti hai
itni ajnabi hai tu

tujh se hoon per khud ko pahchaanti hoon.
icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower








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