doosron ka ghar jalanewale

by suman59 on January 24, 2013, 04:35:03 PM
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दूसरों का घर जलने वाले खुद जल जायेंगे
दुश्मनों के सब इरादे खुद दफ़न हो जायेंगे

दोस्ती की आड़ में जो घात करते आ रहे
ऐसे दुश्मन कब हमारे सामने आ पाएंगे

बो रहे कांटे ही कांटे जो किसी की राह  में
हर तरफ कांटे ही कांटे उनके आगे आएंगे

प्यार की राहों में मजहब का ज़हर मत घोलिए
इंसान है हम दुश्मनों के भी गले लग जाएंगे

सरहदों में बंद कब होती इबादत प्यार की
जहां में प्यार का पैगाम लेकर जाएंगे
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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2013, 05:03:22 PM »
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lovely lovely lovely... bahut hi sundar suman ji..
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«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2013, 05:04:05 PM »
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ati sunder sumanji, very beautiful
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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2013, 07:00:57 PM »
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Suman Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob jee.. kafi umdaa aur gehre ahsaasoN ko khoobsurat
lafzoN meiN dhalaa hai aapne... Usual Smile

behad khoobsurat jazabaa nazar aaya aapki is kalaam meiN.. Usual Smile
Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

HaaN aapki kalaam se gair muradaf kalaam ka ilm ho raha hai..
Par matle ke dono kafiye same ho rahe haiN so matle meiN kuch
changing kar dijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez. Usual Smile                 
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«Reply #4 on: January 25, 2013, 01:35:53 AM »
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bahut khoob suman ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2013, 02:32:07 AM »
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beautiful is khoobsoorat taraane par dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2013, 03:34:04 AM »
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Bahut  khoob  suman ji ,  dheron daad .....
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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2013, 05:19:15 AM »
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dheron daad .
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«Reply #8 on: January 25, 2013, 06:19:36 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Suman Ji, dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad 
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«Reply #9 on: January 25, 2013, 11:49:32 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2013, 01:55:07 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on January 24, 2013, 04:35:03 PM
दूसरों का घर जलने वाले खुद जल जायेंगे
दुश्मनों के सब इरादे खुद दफ़न हो जायेंगे

दोस्ती की आड़ में जो घात करते आ रहे
ऐसे दुश्मन कब हमारे सामने आ पाएंगे

बो रहे कांटे ही कांटे जो किसी की राह  में
हर तरफ कांटे ही कांटे उनके आगे आएंगे

प्यार की राहों में मजहब का ज़हर मत घोलिए
इंसान है हम दुश्मनों के भी गले लग जाएंगे

सरहदों में बंद कब होती इबादत प्यार की
जहां में प्यार का पैगाम लेकर जाएंगे

very nice ma'am, jalne ki jagah jalana hoga shayad first sher mein
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«Reply #11 on: January 25, 2013, 02:01:00 PM »
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bahut hi achhi kavita kahi hai... very nice thoughts...
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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2013, 03:41:29 PM »
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Woooooooooow! so beautiful suman jee. aapki is kalam ki tareef mein alfaaz nahi. dili mubarakbad qubool kare
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Quote from: lovely_charan on January 24, 2013, 05:03:22 PM
lovely lovely lovely... bahut hi sundar suman ji..

thanks dear
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«Reply #14 on: January 27, 2013, 11:04:38 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on January 24, 2013, 05:04:05 PM
ati sunder sumanji, very beautiful
shukriya deepak jee
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