Dost Ab Etnii Wafaa........masoom

by Masoom Shahzada on November 13, 2012, 12:33:21 PM
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Log dil ko gandagii ka ghar banaate haiN.
Puraanii baato pe jhagre naye uthaate haiN.
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Milke jab baith'te haiN, galii ke nuk'kar pe.
Aeyb eske use ginaate haiN.
.
Baahar rahte haiN giidar bankar.
Ghar pe baat-baap pe chillate haiN.
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Dost ab etnii wafaa karte haiN.
Dil nahii milte par haath sab milaate haiN.
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«Reply #1 on: November 13, 2012, 12:41:49 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on November 13, 2012, 12:33:21 PM

Dost ab etnii wafaa karte haiN.
Dil nahii milte par haath sab milaate haiN.

very nice ....but take care of spellings/typings.
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«Reply #2 on: November 13, 2012, 12:53:51 PM »
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gud one check the spelling
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«Reply #3 on: November 13, 2012, 01:00:24 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on November 13, 2012, 12:33:21 PM

Log dil ko gandagii ka ghar banaate haiN.
Puraanii baato pe jhag_De naye uthaate haiN.
.
Milke jab baith'te haiN, galii ke nuk'ka_D pe.
Aeyb eske use ginaate haiN.
.
Baahar rahe haiN giidar bankar.
Ghar pe baat-baap pe chillate haiN.
.
Dost ab etnii wafaa karte haiN.
Dil nahii milte par haath sab milaate haiN.


sahi kaha Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 13, 2012, 01:02:46 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on November 13, 2012, 12:41:49 PM
very nice ....but take care of spellings/typings.
thanks sahal bhaai.
Kyaa koi spelling mistake ho gaee hai.
Plz bataa do maiN modify kar dunga.
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«Reply #5 on: November 13, 2012, 01:20:28 PM »
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 nice , masoomji . daad.
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«Reply #6 on: November 13, 2012, 02:08:02 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2012, 04:02:41 PM »
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aapke ehsaas daad dene laayak haiN
bahut bahut khoob Masoom
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«Reply #8 on: November 13, 2012, 06:56:29 PM »
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Masoom Pyaare aadaab!


Waah janab kia baat hai bade gehre khayaal kah rahe hai janab.. Usual Smile
bahut khoob jee bahut khoob.... bade achche aur umdaa khayaal
kahe haiN aapne... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #9 on: November 14, 2012, 01:15:36 AM »
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sahi kaha Applause
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«Reply #10 on: November 14, 2012, 04:17:20 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut bahut hi khoob masoom kush raho
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«Reply #11 on: November 14, 2012, 04:55:47 AM »
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hakeekat bayan ki hai Masoom Ji, bahut khoob
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wah well said lines. bahut khoob  Thumbs UP
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