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Jab RooThna Mazboorii Reh Jayegi
Dostii Naam Ki Dostii Reh Jayegi ...
Muh Se Ek Lafz Aor Kaha Toh
Duniya Baat SochTii Reh Jayegi ...
Kar Naa Tuu Intezaar Kisi Kaa
Nazar Waqt Dekhtii Reh Jayegi ...
Tark-E-Ulfat Pe Gaur Zaroor Karnaa
KahiN Zindagi Adhuurii Reh Jayegi ...
Likh Diya Jo Dil Men Aaya "Naresh"
Baad Mere Shayrii Reh Jayegi ...
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2010, 01:45:05 PM » |
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naresh ji......
bht gehri baat kahi he apne....sidhe dil me utar gayi.....muje sahyari ki jayda jaankari to nahi he but jo apne likha wo bht kam shabdo me bht kuch kah gaya.....bht bht shaandar likha he apne...
Ranjishee To Bas Khoon Me Bah Jayegi
Dosti Har Sitam Has-Kar Sah Jayegi
Har Zakham Bharti He Dosti
Aaj Mene Kaha Kal Duniya Kah Jayegi
Lagale Gale Tu Raqiboo Ko Bhi
Duniya Muh Dekhti Rah Jayegi
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2010, 01:57:15 PM » |
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behad khubsuart gazal naresh ji.....bht hi achcha likha hai aapne har ek aashar....sply last wala bht achcha laga hume
behad achcha reply mg ji...bht mast likha hai aapne bhi.....
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2010, 02:03:32 PM » |
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bahut mast Ghazal hai ji.
mast bole to superb hai superb.
kaise or kahan se words milte h ji aapko..
mujhe milta hi nai bhai.
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2010, 04:55:04 AM » |
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naresh ji......
bht gehri baat kahi he apne....sidhe dil me utar gayi.....muje sahyari ki jayda jaankari to nahi he but jo apne likha wo bht kam shabdo me bht kuch kah gaya.....bht bht shaandar likha he apne...
Ranjishee To Bas Khoon Me Bah Jayegi
Dosti Har Sitam Has-Kar Sah Jayegi
Har Zakham Bharti He Dosti
Aaj Mene Kaha Kal Duniya Kah Jayegi
Lagale Gale Tu Raqiboo Ko Bhi
Duniya Muh Dekhti Rah Jayegi
Bahut bahut shukriya Ji ..... aapki pasandegi aur ijazat afzaai ka ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath .... ! |
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2010, 03:39:23 PM » |
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behad khubsuart gazal naresh ji.....bht hi achcha likha hai aapne har ek aashar....sply last wala bht achcha laga hume
behad achcha reply mg ji...bht mast likha hai aapne bhi.....
Kasak Ji ... aapki pasandegi aur ijazat afzaai ka bahut shukriya ... aur humeshaa saath ka bhi ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2010, 10:33:14 PM » |
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bahut mast Ghazal hai ji.
mast bole to superb hai superb.
kaise or kahan se words milte h ji aapko..
mujhe milta hi nai bhai.
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thanx
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Nirala Ji ... aapki pasandegi ... hausla afzaai aur ijazat afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriya ... khush rahen ... ! duaaon ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2010, 10:53:01 PM » |
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[n]Bohat achche anshu ji
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«Reply #12 on: December 29, 2010, 03:30:01 AM » |
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«Reply #13 on: December 29, 2010, 11:51:45 AM » |
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Bahut Hi Khubsurat Likha Hai Aapne Naresh Ji  Bahut bahut shukriya ... Rishi Ji ! aapki pasandegi aur dili daad ka ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #14 on: December 29, 2010, 03:19:25 PM » |
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[n]Bohat achche anshu ji
Azeem Ji ... Aadaab ! Adnaa se ehsaasoN ko saraahane ka bahut bahut shukriya ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ... ! |
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