Dushmani qaandani Karna hai ( Qadeertoopchi)

by qadeer_junaid on April 29, 2010, 01:20:01 AM
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Ab usolon se mujh ko baimaani karna hai !!
Jab bhi sach kahon , tarjumani karna hai !!

Tum apne hi gulistan ko sajana yaaron !!
Mujhe to ye gulshaan hi faani karna hai !!

tumhe mubarak ye raaton ki rangeeniyaan !!
hame dil jalana hai khoofishaani karna hai !!

Manaa ke sub ne usko dekh liya ab talak !!
Mujhe bhi eak baar aisi naadani karna hai !!

Raqeeb nazar na aye to qath bhejo qadeer !!
Ye dushmani bhi tumhe qaandani karna hai !!


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«Reply #1 on: April 29, 2010, 03:45:24 PM »
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Subhan_allah Abdul Qadeer bhai aapke matle ne majboor kar diya aur khud ko rok nahi paya.........meri haisiyat to nahi par 2 sher aapki ghazal ki zameen par keh raha hu.....

Kasoor mera kahu yeh rehmat teri
Kaam mera faqat, meharbani karna hai

Ab bosa mile ya path_thar koi
Apni aage hame peshani karna hai

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«Reply #2 on: April 29, 2010, 07:37:43 PM »
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bahoth bahoth shukriya sajid sahab ,, bahoth qoob kaha hai apne .. allah apko khush rakhe ..

bus eak matla apni hi ghazal yaad aa gaya sajid miyan ..lijiye apki nazar..


Mahefil ki Nazaqath ko Bhaanp Liya karo !!
Sach Kahene se Pahele Naap Liya Karo !!


Duwa go ..

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«Reply #3 on: April 29, 2010, 09:20:21 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 29, 2010, 07:37:43 PM
bahoth bahoth shukriya sajid sahab ,, bahoth qoob kaha hai apne .. allah apko khush rakhe ..

bus eak matla apni hi ghazal yaad aa gaya sajid miyan ..lijiye apki nazar..


Mahefil ki Nazaqath ko Bhaanp Liya karo !!
Sach Kahene se Pahele Naap Liya Karo !!


Duwa go ..

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Kya khoob kaha aapne Abdul Qadeer Bhai........aapka ishara mere liye aapka hukm hai.........aapka yeh sher main hamesha yaad rakhuga aur us par amal karne ki poori koshish karuga.
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2010, 01:52:05 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 29, 2010, 01:20:01 AM
Ab usolon se mujh ko baimaani karna hai !!
Jab bhi sach kahon , tarjumani karna hai !!

Tum apne hi gulistan ko sajana yaaron !!
Mujhe to ye gulshaan hi faani karna hai !!

tumhe mubarak ye raaton ki rangeeniyaan !!
hame dil jalana hai khoofishaani karna hai !!

Manaa ke sub ne usko dekh liya ab talak !!
Mujhe bhi eak baar aisi naadani karna hai !!

Raqeeb nazar na aye to qath bhejo qadeer !!
Ye dushmani bhi tumhe qaandani karna hai !!


qadeertoopchi

Waah..bohot khoob Qadeer Bhai.....bohot achcha likha hai aapne......!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2010, 01:56:57 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2010, 12:01:24 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 30, 2010, 01:52:05 PM
Waah..bohot khoob Qadeer Bhai.....bohot achcha likha hai aapne......!!


talat bahen bahoth bahoth shukriya ,, allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2010, 12:23:43 AM »
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bahot khoob abdul qadeer sahaab ..wah kya kehne..

Tum apne hi gulistan ko sajana yaaron !!
Mujhe to ye gulshaan hi faani karna hai !!

Manaa ke sub ne usko dekh liya ab talak !!
Mujhe bhi eak baar aisi naadani karna hai !!

Raqeeb nazar na aye to qath bhejo qadeer !!
Ye dushmani bhi tumhe qaandani karna hai !!


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«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2010, 12:24:17 AM »
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Wah WAh Qadeer ji Bhut ache

very very gud!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2010, 05:36:58 PM »
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QADEER SAHAB  MAAFI CHAHUNGA...PER MAIN YE KAHNA CHAHATA HOON  KE

 AAP URDU KEY 'KH' KA PRONOUNCE 'Q' KEY HAWALE SE NA LIKHAIN....AAPKA HER SHER BAHUT UMDA AUR MANIKHEZ HOTA HAI....!!!
BUSS ZARA ISS TARF TAWAJJO DAIN....MAIN JANTA HOON KE ENGLISH MEIN URDU KO SPELL KARNA KABHI KABHI BAHUT MUSHKIL HOTA HAI...! Applause Applause Applause Applause

ALLAH HAFIZ
 
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2010, 11:41:44 PM »
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Wah WAh Qadeer ji Bhut ache

very very gud!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!

neel saheba ,,nazarra nawazi apki ,,dad ke liye mumno hon,,apki inayath ka shukriya ,,yunhi hausla afzai karte rahen..allah apko khush rakhe..

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«Reply #11 on: May 04, 2010, 03:23:03 AM »
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bade bhai ek aur beshkeemti nagina rakh diya hai aapne bazaar main jise sab pasand na kare toh kya kare.....
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«Reply #12 on: May 04, 2010, 09:01:19 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 29, 2010, 01:20:01 AM
Ab usolon se mujh ko baimaani karna hai !!
Jab bhi sach kahon , tarjumani karna hai !!

Tum apne hi gulistan ko sajana yaaron !!
Mujhe to ye gulshaan hi faani karna hai !!

tumhe mubarak ye raaton ki rangeeniyaan !!
hame dil jalana hai khoofishaani karna hai !!

Manaa ke sub ne usko dekh liya ab talak !!
Mujhe bhi eak baar aisi naadani karna hai !!

Raqeeb nazar na aye to qath bhejo qadeer !!
Ye dushmani bhi tumhe qaandani karna hai !!


qadeertoopchi

Qadeer sahab mashallah kya baat hai bhut acha kehte hain aap, sar se pa tak aapki ghazal bhut hi khoob rahi khaas kar ke aapne maqte ne bhut muta'asir kia, uske alawa ye sher bhi bhut acha laga

tumhe mubarak ho.N ye raato.N ki rangeeniyaa.N
hame dil jalana hai, khoo.Nfishaani karna hai
aapki is lab o lehje par qateel shifaaii sahab ki ghazal ka ek shar yaad aa rhaa hai
tumhe kya aaj ki raat bhi hamse koi milne nahi aaya
ye baazi hamse naari hai sitaaro.N tum to so jaao (agr mein kuch bhool nahi rah to) daad hazir hai aapki is shaandaar takhleeq ke liy.N, umeed hai ki aapke qalam se kuch aur bhut acha padne ko milega jisse hame bhi kuch seekhne ko milega.


aslam

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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2010, 02:26:22 PM »
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Quote from: nazar ghouri on May 01, 2010, 12:23:43 AM
bahot khoob abdul qadeer sahaab ..wah kya kehne..

Tum apne hi gulistan ko sajana yaaron !!
Mujhe to ye gulshaan hi faani karna hai !!

Manaa ke sub ne usko dekh liya ab talak !!
Mujhe bhi eak baar aisi naadani karna hai !!

Raqeeb nazar na aye to qath bhejo qadeer !!
Ye dushmani bhi tumhe qaandani karna hai !!


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nazar sahab apki mahubbath aur inayath ka shukriya janab..apki dad sar ankhon pe .. hausla dete rahiyega janab .. allah apko hamesha khuch rakhe..


apka bhai

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«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2010, 02:29:15 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 04, 2010, 09:01:19 PM
Qadeer sahab mashallah kya baat hai bhut acha kehte hain aap, sar se pa tak aapki ghazal bhut hi khoob rahi khaas kar ke aapne maqte ne bhut muta'asir kia, uske alawa ye sher bhi bhut acha laga

tumhe mubarak ho.N ye raato.N ki rangeeniyaa.N
hame dil jalana hai, khoo.Nfishaani karna hai
aapki is lab o lehje par qateel shifaaii sahab ki ghazal ka ek shar yaad aa rhaa hai
tumhe kya aaj ki raat bhi hamse koi milne nahi aaya
ye baazi hamse naari hai sitaaro.N tum to so jaao (agr mein kuch bhool nahi rah to) daad hazir hai aapki is shaandaar takhleeq ke liy.N, umeed hai ki aapke qalam se kuch aur bhut acha padne ko milega jisse hame bhi kuch seekhne ko milega.


aslam



aslam bhai salamwalekum..

amma yaar hamari kya bisaath apke aage ..bhaijaan cycle chahe jitna bhi zoor laga le ,,magar hawai jahaz ke aage khuch nahi bhai ..ap kahan aur hum kahan ,,ye apka badtpan hai aur mahubbath hai jo istarhan se nawazte ho app ..dad ke liye mashkoor o mamno hon ..inayath banaye rakhen ..allah apko khush rakhe..


apka bhai

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