ehsaan chukayein na jaye

by saahill on March 19, 2012, 07:33:43 AM
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diye the lamhe jo ulfat mein woh bhulayein na jayein ,
tere ehsaan hain jo mujhpar woh chukayein na jayein .

Raaton ko karke bandh aankhein intzaar karna ,
tere liye khud ko bekrar karna .
Woh tera khawabon mein aana  bhulayein
na jayein.
Tere ehsan hain jo mujhpar woh chukayein na jayein.

Yeh maana ke ab tum dil torh gaye .
Tanha is jaan ko tum chorh gaye .
Ban kar rehta tha jo sath kabhi .
Ab woh khoya hua saaya layein na jayein
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2012, 08:58:21 AM »
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akhiree line men bhee na jaayen hee honaa chahiye aur 4th line men bhulaayen se pahle na faaltoo hai baqqee bahut achhaa hai isee trah koshish jaaree rakkho
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2012, 11:09:02 AM »
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ok and thx guru ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2012, 04:31:30 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2012, 01:26:30 AM »
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