ehsaas huaa hai,,,,,,ghazal,,,jeet jainam saini

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takdeer kee thokar se majboor hone kaa ehsaas hua hai,
aksr zehn main tootti ja rahi umeed ka ehsaas hua hai,

manjil kee talaash main itne  dur aa gaye chalte huye,
din ba din apno,n se bhadtee doori kaa ehsaas hua hai,

hum yuhin hukk jatate rahe us par jo mera tha hi nahi,
woh to behta paani tha aaj is baat kaa ehsaas hua hai,

kiss soch main pade shamma se shamma ko bujhane chale,
hatheliye jalne lagee to dard hone kaa ehsaas hua hai,

tamaasha bana zamaane main hamra aankhe nam hone lagi,
kal bhee akele ajj bhee akele hone kaa ehsaas hua hai,

saanse thamne lagee  hai ekk ekk pal ko gujaarte huye,
rab kee dee huee zindagi ke mitne  kaa ehsaas hua hai,


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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2015, 06:09:48 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob kyaa kahne
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2015, 10:29:22 PM »
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Bahut hee umdah peshkash hai Jeet Jee dheroooooon daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad.
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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2015, 05:29:44 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2015, 07:40:20 AM »
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takdeer kee thokar se majboor hone kaa ehsaas hua hai,
aksr zehn main tootti ja rahi umeed ka ehsaas hua hai,

manjil kee talaash main itne  dur aa gaye chalte huye,
din ba din apno,n se bhadtee doori kaa ehsaas hua hai,

hum yuhin hukk jatate rahe us par jo mera tha hi nahi,
woh to behta paani tha aaj is baat kaa ehsaas hua hai,

kiss soch main pade shamma se shamma ko bujhane chale,
hatheliye jalne lagee to dard hone kaa ehsaas hua hai,

tamaasha bana zamaane main hamra aankhe nam hone lagi,
kal bhee akele ajj bhee akele hone kaa ehsaas hua hai,

saanse thamne lagee  hai ekk ekk pal ko gujaarte huye,
rab kee dee huee zindagi ke mitne  kaa ehsaas hua hai,




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Shukriya surinder sir ji daaaddd kabool
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jeet jainam saini ji,
                 wah waaaaaah kiya baaaat kahi hai, bahut khoooooooob.
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