~~"Ek Din Tujhe Khona Hoga"~~ by Shally.

by k.shael on October 01, 2009, 09:47:44 AM
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Paaya hai tujhe, Chaha hai tujhe,
Aur hai yaqeen ki ek din tujhe khona hoga,

Maa bhi nahi, Roti  bhi na hai pass,
Ek masoom ko phir se bhookha sona hoga,

Nafrat kar mujhse, ya kar le bewafayi,
Aake meri kabar pe ek din tujhe rona hoga,

Betiyan hui,  to khoob roya baap,
Kehta hai jaane kab paida chand salona hoga,

Laakh paap, aur burayiya ki jo ikhatthi Shally,
Jaane se pehle khuda ke pass unhe dhona hoga,

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2009, 09:53:58 AM »
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Nice one Shally jee
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2009, 10:00:52 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Shally ji ,very touching n mindblowing gazal.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2009, 10:12:44 AM »
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Paaya hai tujhe, Chaha hai tujhe,
Aur hai yaqeen ki ek din tujhe khona hoga,


Betiyan hui,  to khoob roya baap,
Kehta hai jaane kab paida chand salona hoga,

Nice one shally ji...

jo choote haath to choot jane do,
jo kho jaye koi apna kho jaane do,
apno ki ahmiyat ka andaza ho jayega,
ek baar us beti ko vida to hone do.
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2009, 10:55:18 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on October 01, 2009, 09:47:44 AM
Paaya hai tujhe, Chaha hai tujhe,
Aur hai yaqeen ki ek din tujhe khona hoga,

Maa bhi nahi, Roti  bhi na hai pass,
Ek masoom ko phir se bhookha sona hoga,

Nafrat kar mujhse, ya kar le bewafayi,
Aake meri kabar pe ek din tujhe rona hoga,

Betiyan hui,  to khoob roya baap,
Kehta hai jaane kab paida chand salona hoga,

Laakh paap, aur burayiya ki jo ikhatthi Shally,
Jaane se pehle khuda ke pass unhe dhona hoga,

Shally.

Quote from: Vikk on October 01, 2009, 10:12:44 AM


jo choote haath to choot jane do,
jo kho jaye koi apna kho jaane do,
apno ki ahmiyat ka andaza ho jayega,
ek baar us beti ko vida to hone do.

Nice shally ji ANd vikky ji

kuch koshis humne bhi ki h

kya lekar aaye the kya lekar jayoge
Khali hath aaye the khali hi laut jayoge
Kyu krte ho betiyon se nafrat aap yaha
Bete to apko anjani raho me hi chor jayenge
Jab hogi vida apke ghar se doli me beith
To apni aankho se aansoo ko na rok payoge
Beto se jayda dulari hoti h betiya yaha
Bete ki chaht me betiyo ka pyar kaha se layoge
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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2009, 10:59:22 AM »
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Thank u rishi ji

Aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2009, 11:11:04 AM »
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Quote from: Vikk on October 01, 2009, 10:59:22 AM
Thank u rishi ji

Aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai

Thnx vikky ji
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2009, 11:36:10 AM »
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MA MA MA bahot ahche dear sis... MA sach, bahot ahchca laga padr k
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2009, 05:09:33 PM »
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Waah Bahoot Khoob Shally !

Very nice reply Vikk and Rishi ..
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«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2009, 05:14:32 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on October 01, 2009, 05:09:33 PM
Waah Bahoot Khoob Shally !

Very nice reply Vikk and Rishi ..

Thnx Divya ji
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«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2009, 05:19:03 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob dear Shally ji....last 4 lines bahut hi acchi kahi aapne
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Very nice reply Rishi ji & vikk ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 01, 2009, 05:25:30 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on October 01, 2009, 05:19:03 PM
Bahut hi khoob dear Shally ji....last 4 lines bahut hi acchi kahi aapne
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Very nice reply Rishi ji & vikk ji  Applause Applause

Thnx Nikhar ji
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«Reply #12 on: October 01, 2009, 05:41:22 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on October 01, 2009, 05:19:03 PM
Bahut hi khoob dear Shally ji....last 4 lines bahut hi acchi kahi aapne
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Very nice reply Rishi ji & vikk ji  Applause Applause


thnx nikhaar ji
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«Reply #13 on: October 02, 2009, 02:40:29 AM »
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Wonderful creation dear shally  Applause Applause

Rishi and Vikk aap dono bi bahut accha saat diya.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: October 02, 2009, 04:51:08 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on October 02, 2009, 02:40:29 AM
Wonderful creation dear shally  Applause Applause

Rishi and Vikk aap dono bi bahut accha saat diya.. Thumbs UP


Thnx Roja Ji
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