Ek gazal mahobbatt ke naam...Premdeep

by premdeep on April 28, 2014, 08:44:28 PM
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Guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa
pila de mujhko wo jaam mere pass to aa

Teri talaash mein bikhra sa hai zahan mera
udaas raat hai soona sa hain aangan mera
hawaon jaa ke mere dil ka haal keh do jara
zubaan pe hai bas tera naam mere pass to aa

guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa..

wo raat chaand ne ghoora sa tha badan mera
meri kalai pe khanka sa tha kangan mera
jahan dilon ki ek raat basar ho jaaye
Bana ke phir wo mukaam mere pass to aa

guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa..

meri nigaah mein khawabon ka ik samandar hai
Tere waadon ki hakikat mera mukkaddar hai
jala ke baithe hain  dil ki ek tamanna ko
likha hai khoon se paigaam mere pass to aa

guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa..





 


 




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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2014, 09:27:36 PM »
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bahut khoob..
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2014, 09:36:28 PM »
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wah waaah kya gazal kahi hai ji aapne
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2014, 09:36:45 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2014, 10:12:48 PM »
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gazab gazab gazab  ..................bahut khub
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2014, 10:59:05 PM »
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Guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa
pila de mujhko wo jaam mere pass to aa

Teri talaash mein bikhra sa hai zahan mera
udaas raat hai soona sa hain aangan mera
hawaon jaa ke mere dil ka haal keh do jara
zubaan pe hai bas tera naam mere pass to aa

guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa..

wo raat chaand ne ghoora sa tha badan mera
meri kalai pe khanka sa tha kangan mera
jahan dilon ki ek raat basar ho jaaye
Bana ke phir wo mukaam mere pass to aa

guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa..

meri nigaah mein khawabon ka ik samandar hai
Tere waadon ki hakikat mera mukkaddar hai
jala ke baithe hain  dil ki ek tamanna ko
likha hai khoon se paigaam mere pass to aa

guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa..





 


 






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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2014, 10:59:42 PM »
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wah wah wah bohut hi umda peshkash waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2014, 11:06:56 PM »
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Guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa
pila de mujhko wo jaam mere pass to aa
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Teri talaash mein bikhra sa hai zahan mera
udaas raat hai soona sa hain aangan mera
hawaon jaa ke mere dil ka haal keh do jara
zubaan pe hai bas tera naam mere pass to aa
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guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa..
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wo raat chaand ne ghoora sa tha badan mera
meri kalai pe khanka sa tha kangan mera
jahan dilon ki ek raat basar ho jaaye
Bana ke phir wo mukaam mere pass to aa

guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
meri nigaah mein khawabon ka ik samandar hai
Tere waadon ki hakikat mera mukkaddar hai
jala ke baithe hain  dil ki ek tamanna ko
likha hai khoon se paigaam mere pass to aa
  
guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa..
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fantastic creation premdeep ji
All the comliments are for u today....ACCEPT ONE RAU PL.

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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2014, 11:16:32 PM »
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Guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa
pila de mujhko wo jaam mere pass to aa
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Teri talaash mein bikhra sa hai zahan mera
udaas raat hai soona sa hain aangan mera
hawaon jaa ke mere dil ka haal keh do jara
zubaan pe hai bas tera naam mere pass to aa
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa..
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wo raat chaand ne ghoora sa tha badan mera
meri kalai pe khanka sa tha kangan mera
jahan dilon ki ek raat basar ho jaaye
Bana ke phir wo mukaam mere pass to aa

guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
meri nigaah mein khawabon ka ik samandar hai
Tere waadon ki hakikat mera mukkaddar hai
jala ke baithe hain  dil ki ek tamanna ko
likha hai khoon se paigaam mere pass to aa
 
guzar rahi hai jo shaam mere pass to aa..
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fantastic creation premdeep ji
All the comliments are for u today....


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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2014, 11:54:44 AM »
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वाह....वाह....वाह.....

बहुत ही प्यारे ज़ज्बात और उतनी ही उम्दा पेशकश......

ढेरों दाद और तहे दिल से मुबारकबाद.....


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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2014, 03:00:36 PM »
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Thanks a lot to everyone for the apreciation
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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2014, 03:08:02 PM »
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Wah!!! Very Beautiful And Very Very Romantic!!!Bohat Khub Radeef Chuna Hai Aap Ne!

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«Reply #12 on: April 29, 2014, 03:14:29 PM »
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thanks a lot maam
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«Reply #13 on: April 29, 2014, 04:59:18 PM »
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 Applause beautiful
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«Reply #14 on: April 29, 2014, 05:35:57 PM »
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thanks a lot sir
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