Ek Ghazal Yamak alankaar ke saath

by @kaash on March 04, 2010, 12:24:12 PM
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doston as we all know that har kavita/ghazal me alankaar hote hain,Yamak alankaar aisa alankaar hai jisme shabd vahi rahte hain par mayne badal jate hain,ek koshish ki hai ghazal ke zariye yamak alankaar
ko bhi darshane ki,isme sher ke dono misre ek hain bus unke arth badal gaye hain kabhi shabdo ki jagah bina change kare hue kabhi shabdo ko vaise ke vaise hi rakhe hue(as emmotions of lines get changed),it can be another new type of ghazal as well

zeregaur chahunga

kadarshinasi is jahan me bhi hoti hai ?
kadarshinasi is jahan me bhi hoti hai!

kadarshinasi- kadar karna

motbar karne me manahi nahi hoti hai
motbar karne me mana hina hi hoti hai

hina - mehndi

shab ki tabeer shabnam si hoti hai
shab ki tabeer shab nam si hoti hai

tabeer - poora hona


khamoshi ki sada kahan nashaad hoti hai
khamoshi ki sada kaha na! shaad hoti hai

nashaad - sad

shayri tasavvur ko jalane se hoti hai
shayri tasavvur ko ja lane se hoti hai
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2010, 12:33:56 PM »
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Wah wah Kaash ji badi achhi jaankari di hai aapne. Alankaron ka prayog karke kavita aur bhi sunder banaya ja sakta hai. Iska bahut achha udaharan bhi aapne dia. Thanks for the same.
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«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2010, 01:13:53 PM »
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BAHUT ACHCHI MALOOMAAT DIYAA HAI BHAI...THANX
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