EK GHAZAL- YOINDIA SHAYARO.N KE NAAM...///...........///....IFTAKHAR

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YoIndia membaraan aur seniors ko mera aadaab!! Maine YoIndia ke shayaroN ki taa’reef meiN ye ghazal likhne ki koshish ki hai, apni jaankaari meiN unki khoobiyoN ko bayaan karne ki koshish ki hai, koi khaami ho to maa’f kareiN.
Aur haaN, mujhe pata hai k iss fehrist meiN kitne aise shayar haiN jinka naam nahiN hai, maiN fir se maa’fi chaahuNga, maiN aisa iss liye nahiN kar paaya k ghazal lambi ho rahi thi. Khayr mulaaheja farmaaiyega:


Aarish   teri    ghazal      meiN      hai    aisi   rawaangi
Maano   ghazal    na     ho       koi      behti    hui   nadi

Kehta   hai   Taish    bhi     ghazal   bilkul   hi   saaz  si
Labrez    ishq      pyaar      se     ghazleiN    janaab   ki

Parwaaz   aur   Qalb     se      raunaq    hai    bazm   ki
Mehfil   meiN   jaan    phooNk     de   bas  inki  haaziri

Krishna   Sukumaar    ka     zaraa    andaaz   dekh  lo
MaiN  to  yahi   kahuNga     inki   ghazleiN  khwaab si

Aisi  mithaas  hai  teri   ghazloN  meN   aye   Raqeeb
Maano  teri   kalam   meiN    ho   bilkul  shahad ghuli

Aisa  khumaar   hai   teri  ghazloN  meiN  aye  Hasan
Mujhko  to  lagti   haiN    teri    ghazleiN   shabaab  si

Phirta  rahe   jo     bazm     meiN    shayar  taraashta
Saini     tera      laqab     to     hai     ustaad-e-shayari

Tera    Mukesh    zikr      maiN     kaise    nahiN  karuN
Dekhi hai  maine  tujh  meiN   ek  shayar  ki tishnagi

Khwaateen jo yahaaN ki haiN sho’ara wo khoob haiN
Sheba,  Suman -wo-aqsh   ye    haiN   noor   bazm  ki

Shayar  naye  sahal,   musaahib   jo  yahaaN  ke haiN
In  meiN   bhi    hai    chupi     hui    barkhoob   shayari

Bulbul    hai      ‘Iftakhar’      hai      YoIndia      chaman
Kya  khoob  sukhnawar   yahaaN   ki   khoob  shayari
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«Reply #1 on: May 22, 2013, 10:15:44 AM »
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YoIndia membaraan aur seniors ko mera aadaab!! Maine YoIndia ke shayaroN ki taa’reef meiN ye ghazal likhne ki koshish ki hai, apni jaankaari meiN unki khoobiyoN ko bayaan karne ki koshish ki hai, koi khaami ho to maa’f kareiN.
Aur haaN, mujhe pata hai k iss fehrist meiN kitne aise shayar haiN jinka naam nahiN hai, maiN fir se maa’fi chaahuNga, maiN aisa iss liye nahiN kar paaya k ghazal lambi ho rahi thi. Khayr mulaaheja farmaaiyega:


Aarish   teri    ghazal      meiN      hai    aisi   rawaangi
Maano   ghazal    na     ho       koi      behti    hui   nadi

Kehta   hai   Taish    bhi     ghazal   bilkul   hi   saaz  si
Labrez    ishq      pyaar      se     ghazleiN    janaab   ki

Parwaaz   aur   Qalb     se      raunaq    hai    bazm   ki
Mehfil   meiN   jaan    phooNk     de   bas  inki  haaziri

Krishna   Sukumaar    ka     zaraa    andaaz   dekh  lo
MaiN  to  yahi   kahuNga     inki   ghazleiN  khwaab  si

Shukla   teri   ghazal    meiN    to    aisi   mithaas  hai
Maano  teri   kalam   meiN    ho   bilkul  shahad ghuli

Aisa  khumaar   hai   teri  ghazloN  meiN  aye  Hasan
Mujhko  to  lagti   haiN    teri    ghazleiN   shabaab  si

Phirta  rahe   jo     bazm     meiN    shayar  taraashta
Saini     tera      laqab     to     hai     ustaad-e-shayari

Tera    Mukesh    zikr      maiN     kaise    nahiN  karuN
Dekhi hai  maine  tujh  meiN   ek  shayar  ki tishnagi

Khwaateen jo yahaaN ki haiN sho’ara wo khoob haiN
Sheba,  Suman -wo-aqsh   ye    haiN   noor   bazm  ki

Shayar  naye  sahal,   musaahib   jo  yahaaN  ke haiN
In  meiN   bhi    hai    chupi     hui    barkhoob   shayari

Bulbul    hai      ‘Iftakhar’      hai      YoIndia      chaman
Kya  khoob  sukhnawar   yahaaN   ki   khoob  shayari




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«Reply #2 on: May 22, 2013, 11:12:27 AM »
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Bahut mushkil hota hai is tarah ka kuch likh paana, par aisi kosish ke liye aapki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye kam hai, aur aapne apne is khubsurat guldaste meN mujhe bhi jagah di, iske liye aapka shukraguzaar huN... yuNhi likhte rahiye saaheb, aur mehfil ki raunak meN chaar chaand lagaate rahiye...!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 22, 2013, 11:15:40 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 22, 2013, 07:49:22 AM
YoIndia membaraan aur seniors ko mera aadaab!! Maine YoIndia ke shayaroN ki taa’reef meiN ye ghazal likhne ki koshish ki hai, apni jaankaari meiN unki khoobiyoN ko bayaan karne ki koshish ki hai, koi khaami ho to maa’f kareiN.
Aur haaN, mujhe pata hai k iss fehrist meiN kitne aise shayar haiN jinka naam nahiN hai, maiN fir se maa’fi chaahuNga, maiN aisa iss liye nahiN kar paaya k ghazal lambi ho rahi thi. Khayr mulaaheja farmaaiyega:


Aarish   teri    ghazal      meiN      hai    aisi   rawaangi
Maano   ghazal    na     ho       koi      behti    hui   nadi

Kehta   hai   Taish    bhi     ghazal   bilkul   hi   saaz  si
Labrez    ishq      pyaar      se     ghazleiN    janaab   ki

Parwaaz   aur   Qalb     se      raunaq    hai    bazm   ki
Mehfil   meiN   jaan    phooNk     de   bas  inki  haaziri

Krishna   Sukumaar    ka     zaraa    andaaz   dekh  lo
MaiN  to  yahi   kahuNga     inki   ghazleiN  khwaab  si

Shukla   teri   ghazal    meiN    to    aisi   mithaas  hai
Maano  teri   kalam   meiN    ho   bilkul  shahad ghuli

Aisa  khumaar   hai   teri  ghazloN  meiN  aye  Hasan
Mujhko  to  lagti   haiN    teri    ghazleiN   shabaab  si

Phirta  rahe   jo     bazm     meiN    shayar  taraashta
Saini     tera      laqab     to     hai     ustaad-e-shayari

Tera    Mukesh    zikr      maiN     kaise    nahiN  karuN
Dekhi hai  maine  tujh  meiN   ek  shayar  ki tishnagi

Khwaateen jo yahaaN ki haiN sho’ara wo khoob haiN
Sheba,  Suman -wo-aqsh   ye    haiN   noor   bazm  ki

Shayar  naye  sahal,   musaahib   jo  yahaaN  ke haiN
In  meiN   bhi    hai    chupi     hui    barkhoob   shayari

Bulbul    hai      ‘Iftakhar’      hai      YoIndia      chaman
Kya  khoob  sukhnawar   yahaaN   ki   khoob  shayari



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«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2013, 11:16:19 AM »
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Bahut mubarakbaad aur shukriya bhi, Iftakhar sahib.Ghazal mein bahut se shoraa aur unki shairy ke bare mein observations ko ikattha shaamil karna koi aasan kaam nahin hai. Lekin aap ne shairy ke usoolon ko malhooz rakhte hue ye kaam bahut khoobi se kiya hai. Meri taraf se dili mubarakbaad aur dheron daad .... Aapne apni khoobi ka zikr nahi kiya lekin ghazal khud aapke talent ka aitraaf kar rahi hai.Bahut duaaein.Hasan
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«Reply #5 on: May 22, 2013, 12:47:55 PM »
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bahut mushkil kaam ko anjaam diyaa hai bahut bahut daad aur mubarak baad par mere baare men jo likhaa vo thodaa ziyaadaa likh gaye
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2013, 01:52:23 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 22, 2013, 07:49:22 AM
YoIndia membaraan aur seniors ko mera aadaab!! Maine YoIndia ke shayaroN ki taa’reef meiN ye ghazal likhne ki koshish ki hai, apni jaankaari meiN unki khoobiyoN ko bayaan karne ki koshish ki hai, koi khaami ho to maa’f kareiN.
Aur haaN, mujhe pata hai k iss fehrist meiN kitne aise shayar haiN jinka naam nahiN hai, maiN fir se maa’fi chaahuNga, maiN aisa iss liye nahiN kar paaya k ghazal lambi ho rahi thi. Khayr mulaaheja farmaaiyega:


Aarish   teri    ghazal      meiN      hai    aisi   rawaangi
Maano   ghazal    na     ho       koi      behti    hui   nadi

Kehta   hai   Taish    bhi     ghazal   bilkul   hi   saaz  si
Labrez    ishq      pyaar      se     ghazleiN    janaab   ki

Parwaaz   aur   Qalb     se      raunaq    hai    bazm   ki
Mehfil   meiN   jaan    phooNk     de   bas  inki  haaziri

Krishna   Sukumaar    ka     zaraa    andaaz   dekh  lo
MaiN  to  yahi   kahuNga     inki   ghazleiN  khwaab  si

Shukla   teri   ghazal    meiN    to    aisi   mithaas  hai
Maano  teri   kalam   meiN    ho   bilkul  shahad ghuli

Aisa  khumaar   hai   teri  ghazloN  meiN  aye  Hasan
Mujhko  to  lagti   haiN    teri    ghazleiN   shabaab  si

Phirta  rahe   jo     bazm     meiN    shayar  taraashta
Saini     tera      laqab     to     hai     ustaad-e-shayari

Tera    Mukesh    zikr      maiN     kaise    nahiN  karuN
Dekhi hai  maine  tujh  meiN   ek  shayar  ki tishnagi

Khwaateen jo yahaaN ki haiN sho’ara wo khoob haiN
Sheba,  Suman -wo-aqsh   ye    haiN   noor   bazm  ki

Shayar  naye  sahal,   musaahib   jo  yahaaN  ke haiN
In  meiN   bhi    hai    chupi     hui    barkhoob   shayari

Bulbul    hai      ‘Iftakhar’      hai      YoIndia      chaman
Kya  khoob  sukhnawar   yahaaN   ki   khoob  shayari





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boss!!!!!!! agar mere naam ka zikr nahin bhee karte toh bhee main ek rau deta aap ke iss kalaam ko kyon kee aisa likh pana mushkil hee nahin bahut mushkil hai jaisa aap ne likhaa. meree mubarak baad aap ko boss!!!!!!!!!!!!
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kya baat hai iftakharji. Bahut hi mushkil kaam ko anjaam diya hai aapne. Mujhe bhi apne ghazal mein shaamil karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya. Bahut bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne. Meri taraf se ek rau qubool kijiye. Bahut bahut mubarak ho.
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«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2013, 02:20:09 PM »
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IFTIKHAR   SAHAB   APKI  LIKHI  GHAZAL  KI  TAREEF  LAFZON  MEIN  NAHI  BAYAN  
HO  SAKTI,APNE  IS  NACHEEZ  TO  KO  YAAD  RAKHA  YE  MERE  LIYE  BADE  AZAZ  KI BAAT  HAI.IS  KALAAM  KI  TAREEF  ZABANI  TO  NAHI  KAR  SAKTA  IS  KA  EHTERAAM DIL  ME RAKHUNGA  HAMESHA... .AP  KO  AUR  SAB  KO  MUBARAKBAAD.  
JAZAKALLAH HU KHAIR.

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«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2013, 02:35:12 PM »
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Iftakhar bhai--
aapne ek baar fir se Yoindia Shayariadab ke members par kalaam likh kar iss mehfil ki shaan ko badhaya hai Usual Smile

baht hi khubsoorat aur ekdm sateek bayaani har ek members ke
janaab aap akele shakhs hain iss bazm ke jinhone 2-2 bar iss topic par likha hai aur woh bhi behad se bhi jada umdaa

aapko humara salaam hai bhai
hats off to you

be-shak iss bazm me aur bhi kai aalaa darze ke shayr hain jinka naam aapke kalaam me nhi hai fir bhi ye ghazal ekdm complete hai bhai Usual Smile

bhaut mubarakbaad aur daad
khus rahie
muskurate rahie
aate rahie
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«Reply #10 on: May 22, 2013, 03:39:04 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 22, 2013, 07:49:22 AM
YoIndia membaraan aur seniors ko mera aadaab!! Maine YoIndia ke shayaroN ki taa’reef meiN ye ghazal likhne ki koshish ki hai, apni jaankaari meiN unki khoobiyoN ko bayaan karne ki koshish ki hai, koi khaami ho to maa’f kareiN.
Aur haaN, mujhe pata hai k iss fehrist meiN kitne aise shayar haiN jinka naam nahiN hai, maiN fir se maa’fi chaahuNga, maiN aisa iss liye nahiN kar paaya k ghazal lambi ho rahi thi. Khayr mulaaheja farmaaiyega:


Aarish   teri    ghazal      meiN      hai    aisi   rawaangi
Maano   ghazal    na     ho       koi      behti    hui   nadi

Kehta   hai   Taish    bhi     ghazal   bilkul   hi   saaz  si
Labrez    ishq      pyaar      se     ghazleiN    janaab   ki

Parwaaz   aur   Qalb     se      raunaq    hai    bazm   ki
Mehfil   meiN   jaan    phooNk     de   bas  inki  haaziri

Krishna   Sukumaar    ka     zaraa    andaaz   dekh  lo
MaiN  to  yahi   kahuNga     inki   ghazleiN  khwaab  si

Shukla   teri   ghazal    meiN    to    aisi   mithaas  hai
Maano  teri   kalam   meiN    ho   bilkul  shahad ghuli

Aisa  khumaar   hai   teri  ghazloN  meiN  aye  Hasan
Mujhko  to  lagti   haiN    teri    ghazleiN   shabaab  si

Phirta  rahe   jo     bazm     meiN    shayar  taraashta
Saini     tera      laqab     to     hai     ustaad-e-shayari

Tera    Mukesh    zikr      maiN     kaise    nahiN  karuN
Dekhi hai  maine  tujh  meiN   ek  shayar  ki tishnagi

Khwaateen jo yahaaN ki haiN sho’ara wo khoob haiN
Sheba,  Suman -wo-aqsh   ye    haiN   noor   bazm  ki

Shayar  naye  sahal,   musaahib   jo  yahaaN  ke haiN
In  meiN   bhi    hai    chupi     hui    barkhoob   shayari

Bulbul    hai      ‘Iftakhar’      hai      YoIndia      chaman
Kya  khoob  sukhnawar   yahaaN   ki   khoob  shayari





Bahut Bahut Khooob Ifthakar Ji..

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«Reply #11 on: May 22, 2013, 07:38:17 PM »
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Iftakhar Bhai
Aapke jazbe ko dhyaan me rakhte hue..
jyada kuch dekhne ki zaroorat nahee..
kisi ke munh se bhi sirf wah wah niklegi..
acchi behr pakdee aapne aur takreeban accha nibhaya hai aapne.
mai jaanta hun..naam ko dhyaan me rakhkar ghazal kahna..aasaan nahee.
meri dil daad mubarakbaad..
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«Reply #12 on: May 22, 2013, 07:53:20 PM »
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dhero mubarakbad hamare taraf se bhi kubool kare iftekhar bhai... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2013, 08:21:26 PM »
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Waaah waah Janab...bahut khoob

kya umda experiment kiya hai

very nice....kya yeh she'r mere

liye hee hai yaa aur koyee Shukla

hai...

"Shukla   teri   ghazal    meiN    to    aisi   mithaas  hai
Maano  teri   kalam   meiN    ho   bilkul  shahad ghuli"

bahut shukriya aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayen...


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«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2013, 08:38:58 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on May 22, 2013, 08:21:26 PM
Waaah waah Janab...bahut khoob

kya umda experiment kiya hai

very nice....kya yeh she'r mere

liye hee hai yaa aur koyee Shukla

hai...

"Shukla   teri   ghazal    meiN    to    aisi   mithaas  hai
Maano  teri   kalam   meiN    ho   bilkul  shahad ghuli"

bahut shukriya aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayen...


Raqeeb


Sir, sorry maiN likhna bhool gaya, ye aapke liye hi hai.
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