Ek husn fana. hai

by drpandey on February 10, 2010, 05:03:01 PM
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Khamosh parindoN ka ye talkh bayan hai!
Sahme se chanaroN pe ab berk nihan hai!

Duniya-e-adab de koi nayaab sa tohfaa,
Duniya-e-siyasat ki tareek-e-rawan hai!

Toofan-e-hawadis mein firse bahaar aaye,
Kashmir mein aai hui kuchh garm hawa hai!

Sayyad ki nisbat hai ye daagh-e-mahroomi,
Kis saaj-ae-mutrib pe nagma ye jawan hai!

Afsoos agar hai to es baat pe mujhko,
Ek gard ki chadar mein ek husn fana. hai!
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Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad
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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2010, 12:16:55 AM »
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Wah Pandey ji,very beautiful gazal.bahut khoob.lovely creation.excellent
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2010, 08:03:36 AM »
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Wah Pandey ji,very beautiful gazal.bahut khoob.lovely creation.excellent
Shukriya Madhu Ji, aapko meri creation achchhi lagi mera prayas safal hua.
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2010, 06:18:55 PM »
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KYAA KAHNEY HAIN DR SAHAB BAHUT GAHRA LIKHA HAI...!!!!!!!!!!!!!ARZ HAI....

     

      BAHUT DOOB KAR JAANA HAI ...
      AGAR RAAZ KO SAMAJHNA HAI....
      WARNA ALFAAZ TO UN HI FANAA HOTEY HAIN FIZAA MAIN...............!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2010, 07:08:31 PM »
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Pandey Ji Aadab.

Maafi Chahta Hun Mujh Na Samajh Ko Yeh Sher Ka
Matlab Bilkul Samajh Nahi Aaya...! icon_scratch
Plz Badi Meharbani Hogi Gar Aap Bata Den Ki
Is Sher Men Aap Kya Kehna Chahte Hain?
I Mean Kis Taraf Aapne Ishara Kiya Hai?
Plz Ho Sake To Bataiyega Take Men Apni Commente De Sakun
Kyun Ki Bina Samjhe Bhi Apni Raay Dena Achha Nahi Na So..Plz icon_silent

Toofan e Hawadish Mein Phir Se Bahaar Aaye
Kashmir Mein Aai Hui Kuchh Gharm Hawaa Hai.!


Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Shihab Ji adaab Arz hai,
Are sahab aap to sharminda kar rahe hain, maafi kis baat ki, ye to meri nasamjhi ki daleel ho saki hai ki main apni baat ke isare ko bakhubi aap tak nahin pahuncha paaya..khair fir koshish karta hun. sabko maloom hai ki Kashmir ka mahoul dahshatgardi se kis tarah se aaluda ho chuka hai, ise Hindostan ke chehre per ek badnuma daag sa samajhna chahiye. wahan insaniyat, jaat, majhab sab bemani ho chuka hai kya yeh HAADSON ke toofan se kam hai? har hindostani yahi sochta hai ki is mahoul mein firse bahaar aa jaye. Jahan tak garm hawa ka talluk hai dahshatgardi se iska matlab maine liya hai. Jo sher aapne quote kia hai uske explanation ke liye pahle aur baad wale sher per gaur farmayen. Aapki khidmat mein ek sher aur arz karta hun..

Chehra jhulas gaya hai Hindostan ka,
Kya haal puchhte ho jalti zubaan Ka?

Bahut bahut Shukriya Shihab Sahab
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2010, 07:16:33 PM »
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KYAA KAHNEY HAIN DR SAHAB BAHUT GAHRA LIKHA HAI...!!!!!!!!!!!!!ARZ HAI....

     

      BAHUT DOOB KAR JAANA HAI ...
      AGAR RAAZ KO SAMAJHNA HAI....


      WARNA ALFAAZ TO UN HI FANAA HOTEY HAIN FIZAA MAIN...............!!
Khamosh Ji azhad shukriya ki aapne alfaazon ko samjha aur behad umda sher kaha..aapki shaan mein aapko nazar karta hun...

Ye ehsaas ki darz-e-hararat hai,
Ye dard hai naa ki shararat hai!
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2010, 07:09:04 AM »
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Bahut Khubsurat Likha Hai Pandey Ji Aapne ApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2010, 01:53:05 PM »
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Pandey sahab aapki ye creation ek bahut achhi creation hai. Desh ke ek bade mas-ale ka bahut achhi tarah poetry ke roop mein numaya kiya hai aur nek khwahishaat ka izhaar kiya hai.Very nice creation Pandey ji.  
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2010, 12:09:03 PM »
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Pandey sahab aapki ye creation ek bahut achhi creation hai. Desh ke ek bade mas-ale ka bahut achhi tarah poetry ke roop mein numaya kiya hai aur nek khwahishaat ka izhaar kiya hai.Very nice creation Pandey ji.  
Shukriya Riyaz Sahab, jab kisi mudde par sochta hun to apne alfazon ko original form me rakh deta hun jisme wo kabhi-kabhi meter se bahar bhi ho jatey hain, lekin meri soch aap tak pahuch jaati hai...thanks a lot.
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