Ek Khilona toot jaye ga

by Lovely-Prince on March 08, 2013, 05:17:39 PM
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Ik khilona toot jaye ga naya mil
jaye ga,
Main nahi to koi tujhko dosra mil
jaye ga, Bhagta hun har taraf esey hawa
kay sath sath,
Jis tarha sach much mujhey us ka
pata mil jaye ga, Kis tarha roko gey ashkon ko pas e
dewar e chasham,
Ye to pani hai isey to rasta mil jaye
ga, Ja raha hun is yaqeen sey us kay
chorey ghar ki simat,
Jesey wo bahir gali me jhankta mil
jaye ga, Tez hoti ja rahi hain dharkanien
esey,
Jesey agley morr par wo bewafa mil
jaye ga.
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«Reply #1 on: March 08, 2013, 05:26:41 PM »
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nice one
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«Reply #2 on: March 08, 2013, 06:14:38 PM »
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Nice Keep it up,,,,  bas zara sheer ka pehla misra pehli line main aur dosra misra dosri line main alag alag likha karain ta k kalam main nikhar aye aur log ko dilkash lagay,,,,


Thanks aap ka mukhlis


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«Reply #3 on: March 08, 2013, 08:07:10 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob...
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«Reply #4 on: March 08, 2013, 08:25:46 PM »
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Ik khilona toot jaye ga naya mil jaye ga,
Main nahi to koi tujhko dosra miljaye ga,
Bhagta hun har taraf esey hawakay sath sath,
Jis tarha sach much mujhey us kapata mil jaye ga,
Kis tarha roko gey ashkon ko pas e
dewar e chasham,Ye to pani hai isey to rasta mil jayega,
Ja raha hun is yaqeen sey us kaychorey ghar ki simat,
Jesey wo bahir gali me jhankta miljaye ga,
Tez hoti ja rahi hain dharkanien esey,
Jesey agley morr par wo bewafa mil jaye ga.
BAHUT KHOOB
LOVELY JI MAINE ZARA SA KUCHH KAR DIYA HAI BURA MAT MANIYEGA
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«Reply #5 on: March 08, 2013, 09:54:29 PM »
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beautiful
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boht khub janab
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bahut khoob
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