ek mehfil ~~~ Saahil:Ghazals

salil2002

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doston yeh shayad meri pehli ghazal hai koshish hai kii aapko pasand aaye,,,,,,,,,,,,,yeh bhi mere oosi andaaz mein likhi huyi kavita hai jisme maine mohabbat dard ishq aur tanhaayi ko insaani roop diya hai..........

meri tanhaiyon ne kucch is tarah sama sajaya
kii meri mehfil main har shakhs akela nazar aaya

tha jaam sab k haathon mein magar kucch is tarah
jab bhi daali sharaab toh ek ashq chaalak aaya

dard aur tanhaai kii is mehfil main mohabbat na shamil huyi
kii dard k sach k saamne ishq nanga nazar aaya

bheegti aankhon main le kar sawaal hazaar zindgi khadi thi
jab poochha oosne sawaal toh jawaab nahin aaya

kucch alfaazon ko jod kar jo sher likha karte thay
bayaan kar de jo haal "SAAHIL" ka oonhe woh alfaaz nahin aaya

khatm kar di gayi mehfil tanhaayi ne sabko rukhsat kiya
sab ne poochha ek sawaal kii mezbaan nazar na aaya


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k.shael

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Re: ek mehfil ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2009, 08:11:19 AM »

Wah Bhaut Khoob Salil, Ghazal bahut hi pyaari hai!!!..,

par jaise tumne last line me likha hai ki mejbaan nazar na aaya, waise hi tumhari 2nd last line me writter(tumhara) naam nazar nahi aaya..

Shally.


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shayara

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Re: ek mehfil ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2009, 08:18:26 AM »

Saahil Ji,

Bohot Khoob


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Sammual

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Re: ek mehfil ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2009, 10:09:48 AM »

Bahut Khoob Saahil Ji. Applause


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Talat

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Re: ek mehfil ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2009, 10:11:32 AM »

Bohot Khoob Salil


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salil2002

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Re: ek mehfil ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2009, 07:26:46 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on July 08, 2009, 08:11:19 AM

Quote from: Shayara on July 08, 2009, 08:18:26 AM

Saahil Ji,

Bohot Khoob

Quote from: Sammual on July 08, 2009, 10:09:48 AM

Bahut Khoob Saahil Ji. Applause

Quote from: Celmira on July 08, 2009, 10:11:32 AM

Bohot Khoob Salil

shally ,sammual, shayara and talat di aap sabka bahut bahut shukruya


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madhuwesh

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Re: ek mehfil ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2009, 07:35:04 AM »

Wah Saahil ji,beautiful gazal,wonderful creation,kamaal ka likha aapne. icon_thumleft


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salil2002

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Re: ek mehfil ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2009, 09:58:32 AM »

thank again laila


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aaina

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Re: ek mehfil ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #8 on: July 19, 2009, 06:49:42 AM »

good work saahil


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_Vicky_

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Re: ek mehfil ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #9 on: July 19, 2009, 09:49:52 AM »

Bahut Khoooooooob Salil Bhai.. Behad Lajawab Gazal Likhi hai Dost..

**~** Mann **~**


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salil2002

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Re: ek mehfil ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #10 on: July 19, 2009, 02:18:15 PM »

aslam and vicky bhai thanks a lot


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thegrimreaper

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Re: ek mehfil ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2009, 02:36:00 PM »

dude you wrote like a pro
who can say its your first ghazal
not at all amateurish, purely pro
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hope to see more ghazals from you


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