ek muflis ki beti kitni aas lagaye baithi hai ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on August 11, 2011, 11:29:46 AM
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Yaarane Bazm aadab o tasleemat , meri ik adna si khaawish ap sub ki nazr umid hai  apni ara se nawazenge



ik deewani darwaze per aankh bichaye baithi hai
Ik deewane ke qaatir wo khud ko bhulaye baithi hai

Saath me uske tanhai hai ,aur  yaadon ki purwaaiye
Raaton  ke andhyaaron  me wo dil ko jalaye baithi hai

Mauth ne mujh ko khuch din pahele ye kahe kay zinda chora
Is bête ki bhudhiyaa maa’I haath  uthaye baithi hai

Ab ayenge jub ayenge , mere abbu sub layenge
Eak muflis ki beti kitni , aas lagaye baithi hai

Bus khuch din ki bath hai phir to mera bhai La'ot ayega
Bahena apni palkon pe khuch khawb sajaye baithi hai

Rastah takte takte Tera uski ankhen  pathraeen
Ab tasveer "Qadeer" woh Teri dil se lagaye baithi hai

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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2011, 11:58:45 AM »
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Qadeer bhai khubsoorat likha hai jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hai
isi tarah likhte rehein.Asghar
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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2011, 12:12:34 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on August 11, 2011, 11:29:46 AM
Yaarane Bazm aadab o tasleemat , meri ik adna si khaawish ap sub ki nazr umid hai  apni ara se nawazenge



ik deewani darwaze per aankh bichaye baithi hai
Ik deewane ke qaatir wo khud ko bhulaye baithi hai

Saath me uske tanhai hai ,aur  yaadon ki purwaaiye
Raaton  ke andhyaaron  me wo dil ko jalaye baithi hai

Mauth ne mujh ko khuch din pahele ye kahe kay zinda chora
Is bête ki bhudhiyaa maa’I haath  uthaye baithi hai

Ab ayenge jub ayenge , mere abbu sub layenge
Eak muflis ki beti kitni , aas lagaye baithi hai

Bus khuch din ki bath hai phir to mera bhai La'ot ayega
Bahena apni palkon pe khuch khawb sajaye baithi hai

Rastah takte takte Tera uski ankhen  pathraeen
Ab tasveer "Qadeer" woh Teri dil se lagaye baithi hai

qadeertoopchi

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khooob Mere Bhai..

bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaaso Se Bharpoor..

Kuch Jazbaaton Ko Lafz Dena Asaan Nahi Hota,Aapne Unn Jazbaton ko Bakhoobi lafzon Mein Darshaya Hai Qadeer Bhai..

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«Reply #3 on: August 11, 2011, 12:43:41 PM »
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Qadeer saheb,Kya khoobsurat ghazal hai.har she'r kahayaal aur bandish mein yakta.bahut bahut daad.Hasan
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«Reply #4 on: August 11, 2011, 02:22:13 PM »
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As Salaam walekum Bhaijaan Usual Smile

Be IntehaaN khushi hoti hai jab bhi aapka kalaam padhte hai.. Usual Smile
Behad nayi kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne Usual Smile

Aapke khayaaloN ki aur Gazal ke ashaaroN ki jitni bhi tarif
kareN kam hi hai... Usual Smile Is qadar gehre ahsaasat se labrez hai
aapki yeh kalaam ke kia kaheN Usual Smile
         


Quote from: qadeer_junaid on August 11, 2011, 11:29:46 AM
Yaarane Bazm aadab o tasleemat , meri ik adna si khaawish ap sub ki nazr umid hai  apni ara se nawazenge



ik deewani darwaze per aankh bichaye baithi hai
Ik deewane ke qaatir wo khud ko bhulaye baithi hai

Masha Allah matle ne hi tamaam manzar e haal
bayaaN kar diyaa... bahut umdaa Bhaijaan daad daad Usual Smile         

Saath me uske tanhai hai ,aur  yaadon ki purwaaiye
Raaton  ke andhyaaron  me wo dil ko jalaye baithi hai

Bahut khoob Bhaijaan Usual Smile         

Mauth ne mujh ko khuch din pahele ye kahe kay zinda chora
Is bête ki bhudhiyaa maa’I haath  uthaye baithi hai

Masha Allah Bhaijaan ... HazaaroN baar sadke jauN is umdaa khayaal par... Allah hum sab ko apni panaaH meiN rakhe Usual Smile         

Ab ayenge jub ayenge , mere abbu sub layenge
Eak muflis ki beti kitni , aas lagaye baithi hai

Waah Bhaijaan Waah kia gazab ka khayaal bayaaN
kiya hai aapne... LillaaH aapki is umdaa soch O khayaal ne
hume jazbaati kar dala Usual Smile Be ItehaaN khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile         

Bus khuch din ki bath hai phir to mera bhai La'ot ayega
Bahena apni palkon pe khuch khawb sajaye baithi hai

Masha Allah Bhaijaan gazab ke khayaal hai..
Tamaam rishtoN ko samet lete, Aik bhai ko bhi aur walid ko bhi.. Dil larajne laga hai aapke is kalaam se Usual Smile         

Rastah takte takte Tera uski ankhen  pathraeen
Ab tasveer "Qadeer" woh Teri dil se lagaye baithi hai

Waah waah waah kia sher ataa kiya hai aapne... Maqte meiN bhaijaan... HazaaroN daad behad umdaa aur gazab
ka sher hai daad Usual Smile         

qadeertoopchi

Bhaijaan tarif ke liye humare paas lafz nahi hai..
Bus dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         
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«Reply #5 on: August 11, 2011, 05:21:38 PM »
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ek muflish ki beti kitni aas lagaye baithi hai... sad10

Waaaahhhh...!!!

bahut khoob qadeer ji....

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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2011, 07:14:57 AM »
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qadeer sahab…
aapka kalaam to rula deta hai…
itne jajbati ehsaas hain ki bas…

hats off to u
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«Reply #7 on: August 12, 2011, 08:00:45 AM »
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Abdul Qadeer Sahab,

Waah waah bahut khoob...
Dili daad qubool farmaayen..

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #8 on: August 12, 2011, 08:22:58 AM »
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Wah Wah Qadeer Ji

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«Reply #9 on: August 13, 2011, 06:56:21 PM »
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Kya baat hai Qadeer Saheb..
Dil ko hila kar rakh dia iss peshkash ne..
Quote from: qadeer_junaid on August 11, 2011, 11:29:46 AM
Ab ayenge jub ayenge , mere abbu sub layenge
Eak muflis ki beti kitni , aas lagaye baithi hai
Iss shaer par anginat daad..
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Khush rahiye..!
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