Ek savera hota tha aisa --- Kumaar

by kumaar on October 16, 2014, 03:42:52 PM
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Ek savera hota tha kabhi aisa jab has kar uthte ham,
Ab aksar bina muskraaye hi shaam ho jaati hai...!!!

Hoti thi sabke diloN mei mohabbat na bed-bhav ka bazar tha,
Ladko ki har bhool hoti hai ab maf bas ladki badnam ho jaati hai...!!!

Yaqeen hota tha bade bhai par bhai ko pita se jyada,
Aaj bhai bhai mei chhoti si bat par ladaayi sar-e-aam ho jaati hai...!!!

Rahte the sab milkar rookhi sookhi khakar bhi khush the,
Ban raha ameer aur ameer gareeb ki zindagi gareebi ke naam ho jaati hai..!!!

Dukh se begaanoN ke bhi aankhe bhar jaati thi ek wo zamana tha 'Kumaar',
Apnepan ko paane ko tarsata hai insaaN berukhi mei ye hi zindagi gumnaan ho jaati hai...!!

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«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2014, 04:32:14 PM »
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bahut khub icon_flower icon_flower Applause :clap:ati sunder likhte rhiye
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«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2014, 05:04:12 PM »
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Shukriya mitra
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«Reply #3 on: October 16, 2014, 09:26:05 PM »
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bahut umdah. icon_flower Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2014, 12:35:32 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2014, 11:33:03 AM »
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bohut khub  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2014, 02:54:10 PM »
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Shukriya surindarn bhai....
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«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2014, 02:55:33 PM »
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Shukriya saini ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 17, 2014, 02:57:52 PM »
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Shukriya jeet bhai...
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 25, 2014, 01:40:18 PM »
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Excellent ghazal kumaar ji..umdaa
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