eyk naya inqilaab lana hai

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on November 10, 2012, 07:37:07 AM
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Khatra kishti ka dagmagana hai
gar na sambhle tou doob jana hai

qasbe tabdeel hue shahron me
gaon jo bhi hai woh purana hai

husn, daulat ki kiya haqeeqat hay
neyk kirdaar hi khazana hai

bhook, dahshat ka zikr ker ke mujhe
waqt ko aaiyna dikhana hai

bujh gaye phir ghareeb ke chulhe
eyk naya inqilaab lana hai

yeh chamak barq ki batati hay
phir nasheman koi jalana hai

tazkira zulm ka suno pahle
qissa mazloom ka sunana hai

zabt ki mere aazmaish hay
geet teri widai ka mujhko gana hai

aaj aana to mera mushkil hay
yeh tera roz ka bahana hay

kiya pata kal kaha pe deyra ho
hum faqeero ka kiya thikana hay
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«Reply #1 on: November 10, 2012, 07:41:11 AM »
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Bahut murassa aur mukammal ghazal kahi hai Mahzar Sahab. Waise aapki sabhi ghazlein bahot achhi lagti hain. Main is koshish mein hun ke inse faizyaab hokar kuchh likun. Hazaron daad hazir hain. Ek Rau bhi.
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«Reply #2 on: November 10, 2012, 07:56:44 AM »
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mehzar ji bahut khoobsoorat peshkash.....
daad hazir hai.....
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«Reply #3 on: November 10, 2012, 07:58:54 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on November 10, 2012, 07:37:07 AM
Khatra kishti ka dagmagana hai
gar na sambhle tou doob jana hai

qasbe tabdeel hue shahron me
gaon jo bhi hai woh purana hai

husn, daulat ki kiya haqeeqat hay
neyk kirdaar hi khazana hai

bhook, dahshat ka zikr ker ke mujhe
waqt ko aaiyna dikhana hai

bujh gaye phir ghareeb ke chulhe
eyk naya inqilaab lana hai

yeh chamak barq ki batati hay
phir nasheman koi jalana hai

tazkira zulm ka suno pahle
qissa mazloom ka sunana hai

zabt ki mere aazmaish hay
geet teri widai ka mujhko gana hai

aaj aana to mera mushkil hay
yeh tera roz ka bahana hay

kiya pata kal kaha pe deyra ho
hum faqeero ka kiya thikana hay
bohut Khoob mehzar jee , mukammal ghazal kahi hai, har shair lajwab hai, sirf wah wah wah wah hi nikal raha hai...ek rau aap ke liye
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«Reply #4 on: November 10, 2012, 08:05:56 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on November 10, 2012, 07:37:07 AM
Khatra kishti ka dagmagana hai
gar na sambhle tou doob jana hai

qasbe tabdeel hue shahron me
gaon jo bhi hai woh purana hai

husn, daulat ki kiya haqeeqat hay
neyk kirdaar hi khazana hai

bhook, dahshat ka zikr ker ke mujhe
waqt ko aaiyna dikhana hai

bujh gaye phir ghareeb ke chulhe
eyk naya inqilaab lana hai

yeh chamak barq ki batati hay
phir nasheman koi jalana hai

tazkira zulm ka suno pahle
qissa mazloom ka sunana hai

zabt ki mere aazmaish hay
geet teri widai ka mujhko gana hai

aaj aana to mera mushkil hay
yeh tera roz ka bahana hay

kiya pata kal kaha pe deyra ho
hum faqeero ka kiya thikana hay


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«Reply #5 on: November 10, 2012, 08:46:55 AM »
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on November 10, 2012, 07:41:11 AM
Bahut murassa aur mukammal ghazal kahi hai Mahzar Sahab. Waise aapki sabhi ghazlein bahot achhi lagti hain. Main is koshish mein hun ke inse faizyaab hokar kuchh likun. Hazaron daad hazir hain. Ek Rau bhi.
Riyaz saheb, shukriya ki aapko ghazal pasand aayi,aapki ittela ke liye arz hay ki main shayar nahi hoon, aapko meri kisi ghazal ya nazm me makhta nahi milega, bus shayri ka shauq hay....aapka mamnoon hoon ki aapne hausla afzai ki......
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Quote from: qalb on November 10, 2012, 08:05:56 AM

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«Reply #7 on: November 10, 2012, 08:49:58 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on November 10, 2012, 07:56:44 AM
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mehzar ji bahut khoobsoorat peshkash.....
daad hazir hai.....
aapka bahut bahut shukriya......
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«Reply #8 on: November 10, 2012, 08:52:15 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on November 10, 2012, 07:58:54 AM
bohut Khoob mehzar jee , mukammal ghazal kahi hai, har shair lajwab hai, sirf wah wah wah wah hi nikal raha hai...ek rau aap ke liye
aapka mamnoon hoon ki aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi........
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«Reply #12 on: November 11, 2012, 02:55:56 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on November 10, 2012, 04:59:59 PM
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   Bahut Bahut Shukriya.........
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