Fana kahete hain kisko kya baqa hai ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on September 12, 2013, 01:30:09 PM
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Ik filbadeeh Ghazal Yarane bazm ki nazr..

Ye kaisa zabt hai kaisi ana hai
Koi sahil pe tashna mar gaya hai

Alag manzil alag hi raasta hai
Ye duniya se hame kab waasta hai

Hukumat sub ki hai bus chand roza
Jahan me kaun hai jo derpaa hai

Ibadat habshe dam ki karke jaanu
Fana kahete hain kisko kya baqa hai

Bhatak kar umr saari dar ba dar ab
Hamara dil bhi banjara hua hai

Labo'n per muskurahat Hai hamare
agarche ru bu ru apne qaza hai

Hai tera aarsa tu hi bacha le
Hawa ki zad me nanha sa diya hai

Musalsal hijr me chahra tumhara
Wazu Ashqo’n se kar ke khil gaya hai

Lo ghoome shahr me majnu ki manind
Qadeer ab ishq me pagla gaya hai

Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2013, 01:50:57 PM »
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Wwwwaaahhhhhhh Qadeer ji ..... Sach maaniye, kis qadar lutf aaya aapki ghazal parh ke aur dil kis qadar jhoom utha .... Bayaan ke baahar hai ..... Aapke aashaar behad shaandaar hain aur matla to maano  pooree tarah hosh urhaane waala hai .... Apko sad hazaar lakhon karodon daad !!!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2013, 01:56:39 PM »
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Waah-Waah BehtreeN,Qadeerji.
Quote from: qadeer_junaid on September 12, 2013, 01:30:09 PM
Ik filbadeeh Ghazal Yarane bazm ki nazr..

Ye kaisa zabt hai kaisi ana hai
Koi sahil pe tashna mar gaya hai

Alag manzil alag hi raasta hai
Ye duniya se hame kab waasta hai

Hukumat sub ki hai bus chand roza
Jahan me kaun hai jo derpaa hai

Ibadat habshe dam ki karke jaanu
Fana kahete hain kisko kya baqa hai

Bhatak kar umr saari dar ba dar ab
Hamara dil bhi banjara hua hai

Labo'n per muskurahat Hai hamare
agarche ru bu ru apne qaza hai

Hai tera aarsa tu hi bacha le
Hawa ki zad me nanha sa diya hai

Musalsal hijr me chahra tumhara
Wazu Ashqo’n se kar ke khil gaya hai

Lo ghoome shahr me majnu ki manind
Qadeer ab ishq me pagla gaya hai

Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2013, 02:18:50 PM »
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Ye kaisa zabt hai kaisi ana hai
Koi sahil pe tashna mar gaya hai


Hai tera aarsa tu hi bacha le
Hawa ki zad me nanha sa diya hai

Musalsal hijr me chahra tumhara
Wazu Ashqo’n se kar ke khil gaya hai

WAAH WAAH QADEER SAHAB BOHUT UMDA KALAAM PESH KIYA HAI,
TOPCHEEN HAI ,,,WAISE IN ASHAARON KA KYA KEHNA ,
LAJAWAAB

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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2013, 02:53:19 PM »
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har sher lajawaab...
Musalsal hijr me chahra tumhara
Wazu Ashqo’n se kar ke khil gaya hai
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2013, 03:19:32 PM »
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MAHABAA  MARHABAA MARHABAA
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«Reply #6 on: September 12, 2013, 05:22:59 PM »
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dil ko lubhaye jo ghazal wo kuchh aisi ho...

waaaaaaah waaaaaaaaah qaadeer sahab..

lajawab peshkash rahi.. dhero daad kubul kare.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #7 on: September 12, 2013, 05:30:52 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on September 12, 2013, 01:30:09 PM
Ik filbadeeh Ghazal Yarane bazm ki nazr..

Ye kaisa zabt hai kaisi ana hai
Koi sahil pe tashna mar gaya hai--------wondeful

Alag manzil alag hi raasta hai
Ye duniya se hame kab waasta hai

Hukumat sub ki hai bus chand roza
Jahan me kaun hai jo derpaa hai

Ibadat habshe dam ki karke jaanu
Fana kahete hain kisko kya baqa hai

Bhatak kar umr saari dar ba dar ab
Hamara dil bhi banjara hua hai

Labo'n per muskurahat Hai hamare
agarche ru bu ru apne qaza hai---------excellent

Hai tera aasra tu hi bacha le
Hawa ki zad me nanha sa diya hai

Musalsal hijr me chahra tumhara
Wazu Ashqo’n se kar ke khil gaya hai

Lo ghoome shahr me majnu ki manind
Qadeer ab ishq me pagla gaya hai ---------ha ha very nice

Qadeertoopchi


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«Reply #8 on: September 12, 2013, 07:02:12 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: September 12, 2013, 10:34:55 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on September 12, 2013, 01:30:09 PM
Ik filbadeeh Ghazal Yarane bazm ki nazr..

Ye kaisa zabt hai kaisi ana hai
Koi sahil pe tashna mar gaya hai     *Ghazab ka sher

Alag manzil alag hi raasta hai
Ye duniya se hame kab waasta hai     *Bahut bahut khoob

Hukumat sub ki hai bus chand roza
Jahan me kaun hai jo derpaa hai

Ibadat habshe dam ki karke jaanu
Fana kahete hain kisko kya baqa hai    *Bahut khoob

Bhatak kar umr saari dar ba dar ab
Hamara dil bhi banjara hua hai    * waah waah

Labo'n per muskurahat Hai hamare
agarche ru bu ru apne qaza hai    *Excellent

Hai tera aarsa tu hi bacha le
Hawa ki zad me nanha sa diya hai   *Aameen, excellent

Musalsal hijr me chahra tumhara
Wazu Ashqo’n se kar ke khil gaya hai   * Laajawaab

Lo ghoome shahr me majnu ki manind
Qadeer ab ishq me pagla gaya hai    * Ha ha haaaaaaaaa

Qadeertoopchi
Waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Qadeer saheb, kya ghazab ki ghazal kahi hai, dil jhoom utha padh ke, laajawaab, bemissaal jitni taareef karuN kam hai.
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Waaaaaaaah ghazab ki peshkash qadeer ji..kya kehne is ghazal ke.. behad umda aur bahut pasand aayi.. hazaron dili daaaaaaaad qubool kijiye..

Hai tera aarsa tu hi bacha le
Hawa ki zad me nanha sa diya hai

Musalsal hijr me chahra tumhara
Wazu Ashqo’n se kar ke khil gaya hai

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Quote from: zarraa on September 12, 2013, 01:50:57 PM
Wwwwaaahhhhhhh Qadeer ji ..... Sach maaniye, kis qadar lutf aaya aapki ghazal parh ke aur dil kis qadar jhoom utha .... Bayaan ke baahar hai ..... Aapke aashaar behad shaandaar hain aur matla to maano  pooree tarah hosh urhaane waala hai .... Apko sad hazaar lakhon karodon daad !!!!

Mahutram zaara Sahab ..Apse Ameeq fikr wa daqeeq nazar rakhne wale adab nawaz wa munkasirul mizaj hazraat sub is tarhan se paziraee karte hain to mujh se talib e ilm ko jawab shukriyah ada karne me badi mushkil pesh aatee hai ...Apka behad shukriyah ke aapne ghazal ko sanad aata ki ..Allah apko umre nuh ata kare ..

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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on September 12, 2013, 01:30:09 PM
Ik filbadeeh Ghazal Yarane bazm ki nazr..

Ye kaisa zabt hai kaisi ana hai
Koi sahil pe tashna mar gaya hai

Alag manzil alag hi raasta hai
Ye duniya se hame kab waasta hai

Hukumat sub ki hai bus chand roza
Jahan me kaun hai jo derpaa hai

Ibadat habshe dam ki karke jaanu
Fana kahete hain kisko kya baqa hai

Bhatak kar umr saari dar ba dar ab
Hamara dil bhi banjara hua hai

Labo'n per muskurahat Hai hamare
agarche ru bu ru apne qaza hai

Hai tera aarsa tu hi bacha le
Hawa ki zad me nanha sa diya hai

Musalsal hijr me chahra tumhara
Wazu Ashqo’n se kar ke khil gaya hai

Lo ghoome shahr me majnu ki manind
Qadeer ab ishq me pagla gaya hai

Qadeertoopchi

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«Reply #14 on: April 19, 2014, 09:35:31 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 12, 2013, 01:56:39 PM
Waah-Waah BehtreeN,Qadeerji.

Ravi Sahab Shukriyah ..
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