Faqeer ... (by vb)

by vb on December 10, 2013, 10:32:12 PM
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Ye tajaarateN rah-e-fuqr men, meray naam par tu na kijiyay
Main hoon raaz seena-e-ishq ka, mujhay mushtahar tu na kijiyay

Jo likha tha hum ne mitta diya, kay bhattak rahay thay na raah hum
Ye tu us ki zaat ki baat hay, hamen mautabbar tu na kijiyay




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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2013, 11:50:29 PM »
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Niceee oneee...
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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2013, 02:34:08 AM »
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Incomparable !!!! Beautiful beyond description !!!
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2013, 04:28:43 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah janaab, sabse pehle matle per ek Rau. Poori ghazal shaandaar hai, mushkil behr nibhaai hai aur achhi nibhaai hai. Rawaani dekhte banti hai. Bahut bahut khoob yuN hi likhte rahiye aur apni umda sukhnawari se hameN nawaazte rahiye.
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«Reply #5 on: December 11, 2013, 08:27:45 AM »
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Bahut sundar !!
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«Reply #6 on: December 11, 2013, 08:56:59 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2013, 10:54:14 AM »
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aapki ghazalon ke lie hm bas aapko thanx kahenge
thank u so much again Sirji
apki kalaam hme bht sukoon deti hai
Usual Smile

baht saari duayen aapke lie
khush rahie
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«Reply #8 on: December 11, 2013, 12:14:48 PM »
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wow....superb....typical urdu ghazal.....lots of best wishes....god bless you...keep on writing such beautiful ghazals....
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«Reply #9 on: December 11, 2013, 12:41:57 PM »
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Main razeel-e-koocha-e-ishq hun, magar is qadar tu na kijiyay
Isi aastaaN ka faqeer hun, mujhay dar-ba-dar tu na kijiyay

Main hun naghma-gar teri chaah ka, main ghazal-sara teray husn ka
Yehi ik taqaaza-e-deed hay, meri chashm tar tu na kijiyay

Usay manzilon ki khabar kahan, wo safeer-e-dasht-e-fareb hay
Mujhay khizr-e-raah na maaniyay, usay hamsafar tu na kijiyay

Ye tu dasht-e-ishq hay manzilen na he raastay hen ehem yahan
Jo chalay hen saath tu aaiyay, ye agar-magar tu na kijiyay

Meri shayari ki hen ibteda bhe aur intehaa bhe tu aap he
Main buhat vase-o-areez hoon, mujhay mukhtasar tu na kijiyay

waah waah waah waah dheron daad
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«Reply #10 on: December 11, 2013, 01:53:20 PM »
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bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
Applause Applause
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Uffffffffffff kya kehne aapki is ghazal ke... dil jhoom utha padhkar.. dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #12 on: December 11, 2013, 05:39:01 PM »
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bahut khoooooooooooob vb ji
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«Reply #13 on: December 11, 2013, 09:23:39 PM »
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pata nahi... kisi ne isay ishq-e-haqeeqi k lehaaz say bhe parha ya nahi... lekin hum aaap sub k thankful hen... k pasand kiya aur izhaar-e-khayaal kiya...
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«Reply #14 on: December 11, 2013, 09:28:10 PM »
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ishq e haqeeqi ko koi faqeer hi samjhe gaa vb jee,..
our faqr har kisee ko nahin miltaa,.......ye to den hai jiski jholi main maalik e haqeeqi daal de woh faqeer our uska wasf faqar,.................
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