First feeling

by merideewanagi on July 18, 2016, 02:49:02 PM
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e-dil-e-zid , teri harkato se paresha  hai hum ,
teri sararato se naraz hai hum.

tu zab chahe khush rahe ,  udas rahe chahe jab,
bepak irade humare bhi nahi, jo tuje aisa kane na de,
Par phir bhi , hume sateye tadapaye, rulaye kyu,
badi ulajan hai, teri shararato ko kise bataye hum ,
usi k liye har waqt betab  hum,
teri harkato se paresha hai hum.

Narazagi mujase hai to bata to de, ya fir koi aur hai gunehgar inaka,
mera irada samaz jaalar, yeh khushnuma ehashash hai jinaka,
bewaqt tu roya mat kar, Baat jante hue bhi us bat se anjan hai Hum,
teri shararato se paresha hai hum.






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«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2016, 08:53:36 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2016, 06:30:03 PM »
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heart touching
am read one one word again nd again

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«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2016, 09:05:34 AM »
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