Fizayein baat karti hai............................Aqsh.

by aqsh on March 04, 2014, 12:31:59 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 05, 2014, 02:49:49 PM »
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 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:waaaaah waaaah lajawaaaaab peshkash aqsh ji rau is due
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«Reply #16 on: March 05, 2014, 03:52:57 PM »
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Milte the ham jahaN aksar, aaj wahan ki fizayeiN baat karti hain
Beshak laboN ko toh see liya, par ab bhi hawayeiN baat karti hain

Rozana mulaqatoN ka, wohi lamha aakar guzar hi jaata hai
Dil ko jaise bhi samjha lete haiN, par tamannayeiN baat karti hain

Tumse juda hote hue, kitna dard aankhoN mein chhupa liya tha
Behte hue ashkoN ke sang, bebas dil ki duaayeiN baat karti hain

Raat ke andhere mein jab bhi, tumhe talash karti hai meri nazar
Chahat ke is tadap ke sang, chaand ki adaayeiN baat karti hain

Bhala aur kitna aazmaoge tum, “Aqsh” ki muhabbat ko jaana
DooriyoN meiN bhi dhadkanoN se, aati sadaayeiN baat karti hain..




Waah waah Waah.....

Kya Kehne Aqsh jee..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Dil Ko Chuu Jaane Wale jazbaat..

Bahut Bahut Khoob

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«Reply #17 on: March 05, 2014, 07:36:10 PM »
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Tumse juda hote hue, kitna dard aankhoN mein chhupa liya tha
Behte hue ashkoN ke sang, bebas dil ki duaayeiN baat karti hai

Raat ke andhere mein jab bhi, tumhe talash karti hai meri nazar
Chahat ke is tadap ke sang, chaand ki adaayeiN baat karti hai

Bhala aur kitna aazmaoge tum, “Aqsh” ki muhabbat ko jaana
DooriyoN meiN bhi dhadkanoN se, aati sadaayeiN baat karti hai

Wah wah wah Aqsh jee
Bahut behatreen likha hai aapne..
lajavaab..bas yun hi likhte rahiye
aapka bahut bahut bahuttttttttttt shukriya mukesh ji...
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«Reply #18 on: March 05, 2014, 07:36:46 PM »
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wah wah bahoot umda ma'am
thank you soooooooooo much rajan ji...
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«Reply #19 on: March 05, 2014, 07:37:24 PM »
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wah wah wah bohut umda likhiya ap ne
bahut bahut shukriya jeet ji...
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«Reply #20 on: March 05, 2014, 07:37:59 PM »
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Bahut khub aqsh ji..
thank you soooooooooo much ekta ji...
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«Reply #21 on: March 05, 2014, 07:38:30 PM »
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waah waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaah Aqsh ji.. Usual Smile

bahut hi pyari peshkash... dhero daaaad ... Usual Smile

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thnxxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttttt touhid...
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«Reply #22 on: March 05, 2014, 07:39:01 PM »
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bahut khoob
aapka bahut bahut shukriya nand ji...
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«Reply #23 on: March 05, 2014, 07:39:52 PM »
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Milte the ham jahaN aksar, aaj wahan ki fizayeiN baat karti hai
Beshak laboN ko toh see liya, par ab bhi hawayeiN baat karti hai

Rozana mulaqatoN ka, wohi lamha aakar guzar hi jaata hai
Dil ko jaise bhi samjha lete haiN, par tamannayeiN baat karti hai

Tumse juda hote hue, kitna dard aankhoN mein chhupa liya tha
Behte hue ashkoN ke sang, bebas dil ki duaayeiN baat karti hai

Raat ke andhere mein jab bhi, tumhe talash karti hai meri nazar
Chahat ke is tadap ke sang, chaand ki adaayeiN baat karti hai

Bhala aur kitna aazmaoge tum, “Aqsh” ki muhabbat ko jaana
DooriyoN meiN bhi dhadkanoN se, aati sadaayeiN baat karti hai..

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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Aqsh ji.Behad khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai.Really Nice.Aik RAU ke saath dili daad qabool kijiye.
bahut bahut bahut shukriya sudhir ji...aise hi saath dete rahiyega aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut thnxxxxxxxxxxxx...
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«Reply #24 on: March 05, 2014, 07:40:33 PM »
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beautiful ghazal rau shaam ko
sirji aapka bahut bahut shukriya aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut thnxxxxxxxxxx...
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«Reply #25 on: March 05, 2014, 07:41:19 PM »
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Saru ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut thnxxxxxxxxxxx...
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«Reply #26 on: March 05, 2014, 07:41:51 PM »
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Hats off to you!
Ravi ji aapka bahut bahut bahut shukriya..
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«Reply #27 on: March 05, 2014, 07:43:07 PM »
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aqsh sahiba,
umda kalaam likha hai...... kuch zyada hil taweel misro'n ka istemal kiya hai, jo ek mushkil karnama hai, sirf ayse hi kisi misre me ghazal hoti to mazeed lutf aata................ .............................................
"jaha'n milte the hum aksar, fizayein baat karti hain"
ye meri ray hai, eytraaz ya islaah nahi,bura na maniyega , ray aur mashwira apno'n ko hi diya jata hai

Mazhar saab aapka mashwara sir aankhon par... is mein bura maanne waali koi baat nahin hai... aapne bilkul durust farmaya hai... aapka bahut bahut bahuttttttttttttt shukriya..aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahiyega...
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«Reply #28 on: March 05, 2014, 07:44:07 PM »
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वाह....वाह.....वाह....बहुत ही शानदार पेशकश....ढेरों ढेरों दाद और तहे दिल से मुबारकबाद....
thnxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttt amit ji...
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«Reply #29 on: March 05, 2014, 07:44:39 PM »
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Wah. Kya baat !
bahut bahut shukriya zaif saab...
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