frame aaeene ka sunehra thha

by Anaarhi on February 06, 2013, 05:28:08 AM
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सोच कर यूँ भी मुस्कुराए हम,
क्या कभी ख़ुद को जान पाए हम.

सूखा दरिया था बीच में अपने,
फासला क्यूँ न लांघ पाए हम.

तितलियां तो फ़क़त बहाना थीं,
अपने बचपन को छू के आए हम.

क्यों धनक में ही रंग भरता है,  
क्या नज़र में तिरी न आए हम.

फ्रेम आईने का सुनहरा था,
अक्स पर हक जता न पाए हम.

रौशनी ढूँढते रहे बरसों,
एक जुगनू से मात खाए हम.

चाँदनी बाँटने की ख़्वाइश थी,
"उम्र भर धूप में नहाए हम".

अाज़मा कर ही आँसुओं को "परम"
ख़ून पर ऐतबार लाए हम.

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soch kar yooN bhi muskurae hum,
kya kabhi khud ko jaan paye hum.

sookha dariya tha beech mein apne,
faasla kyuN n laagh paaye hum.

titliyan to faqat bahaana thiN,
apne bachpan ko chhoo k aaye hum.

kyuN dhanak mein hi rang bharta hai,
kya nazar mein tiree n aaye hum.

frame aaeene ka sunehra thha,
aks par haq jataa n paaye hum.

roushni dhoondhte rahe barsoN,
Eik jugnu se maat khaaye hum.

chandni baantne ki khwaish thhe,
"umr bhar dhoop mein nahaye hum".

aazma kar hi aansuoN ko "param"
khoon par aitbaar laaye hum.

(dhanak = rainbow)

"परम" ०३/०२/२०१३
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2013, 06:02:23 AM »
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waah waah waah waah waah excellent
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2013, 06:04:12 AM »
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Wah wah wah wah janab bahut hee khubsurat likha aapne ...bar bar padhne ko mann kre aisi rachna h aapki...... Bht bht mubarkbaad saheb
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2013, 06:41:34 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bhut khub ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2013, 08:31:31 AM »
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bahut khoooob bahut khoooob....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2013, 08:39:42 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaah... bahut khoooob..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2013, 08:59:47 AM »
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सोच कर यूँ भी मुस्कुराए हम,
क्या कभी ख़ुद को जान पाए हम.  Applause Applause Applause

सूखा दरिया था बीच में अपने,
फासला क्यूँ न लांघ पाए हम.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

तितलियां तो फ़क़त बहाना थीं,
अपने बचपन को छू के आए हम.  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

क्यों धनक में ही रंग भरता है, 
क्या नज़र में तिरी न आए हम.  Applause Applause Applause

फ्रेम आईने का सुनहरा था,
अक्स पर हक जता न पाए हम.  Applause Applause

रौशनी ढूँढते रहे बरसों,
एक जुगनू से मात खाए हम.  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

चाँदनी बाँटने की ख़्वाइश थी,
"उम्र भर धूप में नहाए हम".  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

अाज़मा कर ही आँसुओं को "परम"
ख़ून पर ऐतबार लाए हम.  Applause Applause Applause Applause

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soch kar yooN bhi muskurae hum,
kya kabhi khud ko jaan paye hum.

sookha dariya tha beech mein apne,
faasla kyuN n laagh paaye hum.

titliyan to faqat bahaana thiN,
apne bachpan ko chhoo k aaye hum.

kyuN dhanak mein hi rang bharta hai,
kya nazar mein tiree n aaye hum.

frame aaeene ka sunehra thha,
aks par haq jataa n paaye hum.

roushni dhoondhte rahe barsoN,
Eik jugnu se maat khaaye hum.

chandni baantne ki khwaish thhe,
"umr bhar dhoop mein nahaye hum".

aazma kar hi aansuoN ko "param"
khoon par aitbaar laaye hum.

(dhanak = rainbow)

"परम" ०३/०२/२०१३

Bahut umda kalaam..
aap ke to ham qaayal hai..

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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2013, 09:21:11 AM »
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bohat khubsurat ghazl,..........bohat c daad,..........
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«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2013, 11:53:10 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut bahut hi khoob..
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2013, 12:48:01 PM »
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Paramjit jee Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab, waaH badi hi khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne...
aapke ahsaas O khayaal waqai behad gehre aur umdaa rahte hai... Usual Smile

Har ashaar meiN gazab ki gehrai hai.. behad umdaa sher haiN sabhi... Usual Smile
Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... Guzarish hai ke aap bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




सोच कर यूँ भी मुस्कुराए हम,
क्या कभी ख़ुद को जान पाए हम.

Bahut achcha matla hai daad...

सूखा दरिया था बीच में अपने,
फासला क्यूँ न लांघ पाए हम.

bahut khoob..

तितलियां तो फ़क़त बहाना थीं,
अपने बचपन को छू के आए हम.

Is sher ke kia kahne janab waah waaH aur bus waaH ...  Thumbs UP

क्यों धनक में ही रंग भरता है, 
क्या नज़र में तिरी न आए हम.

bahut umda janab behad umdaa daad daad daad..

फ्रेम आईने का सुनहरा था,
अक्स पर हक जता न पाए हम.

Kia kahne jee, is sher ke maNzar kashi karke hi dil meiN tees utha gayi... daad daad daad...  Applause Applause Applause

रौशनी ढूँढते रहे बरसों,
एक जुगनू से मात खाए हम.

Bahut khoob janab daad...

चाँदनी बाँटने की ख़्वाइश थी,
"उम्र भर धूप में नहाए हम".

yeH bhi achcah raha ..

अाज़मा कर ही आँसुओं को "परम"
ख़ून पर ऐतबार लाए हम.

Waah waaH bahut khoob daad daad daad...

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soch kar yooN bhi muskurae hum,
kya kabhi khud ko jaan paye hum.

sookha dariya tha beech mein apne,
faasla kyuN n laagh paaye hum.

titliyan to faqat bahaana thiN,
apne bachpan ko chhoo k aaye hum.

kyuN dhanak mein hi rang bharta hai,
kya nazar mein tiree n aaye hum.

frame aaeene ka sunehra thha,
aks par haq jataa n paaye hum.

roushni dhoondhte rahe barsoN,
Eik jugnu se maat khaaye hum.

chandni baantne ki khwaish thhe,
"umr bhar dhoop mein nahaye hum".

aazma kar hi aansuoN ko "param"
khoon par aitbaar laaye hum.

(dhanak = rainbow)

"परम" ०३/०२/२०१३
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«Reply #10 on: February 06, 2013, 12:53:12 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: February 08, 2013, 03:56:00 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Param ji.....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: February 13, 2013, 04:45:57 AM »
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waah waah waah waah waah excellent
शुक्रिया सैनी साहब
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