Gam se mera rishta..................................................Aqsh.

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«Reply #45 on: October 18, 2013, 11:09:28 PM »
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Waah bahaut khoob ! Ek khoobsurat khalish se bhare aashar ! Daad Aqsh ji !
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«Reply #46 on: October 19, 2013, 03:35:58 PM »
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Waah bahaut khoob ! Ek khoobsurat khalish se bhare aashar ! Daad Aqsh ji !
thnxx a lotttttt zarra ji..
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«Reply #47 on: October 19, 2013, 07:41:38 PM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab...!

WaaH waaH waaH jee kia kahne bahut khoob... Badi ghamsaar kalaam kahi hai jee sab khairiyat toH hai...

waise aapki kalaam ke ahsaas O khayaal humare behad kareeb rahe.. is khoobsurat aur dilfareb kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #48 on: October 21, 2013, 12:42:48 PM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab...!

WaaH waaH waaH jee kia kahne bahut khoob... Badi ghamsaar kalaam kahi hai jee sab khairiyat toH hai...

waise aapki kalaam ke ahsaas O khayaal humare behad kareeb rahe.. is khoobsurat aur dilfareb kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

Alhamdulillah sab khairiyat hai parwaaz ji...Bas aise hi zara alag likhne ka mann hua toh likhe dee thi.. thnxxxxxxx a lotttttt for reading and appreciation...
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«Reply #49 on: October 21, 2013, 05:44:22 PM »
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Aqsh ji bahot achey lajawaab,,, dard achey hote hain kyonke ye dil pe apni chap chod jaate hain so kabhi kabhi aesi ghazlen bhi likha kijiye...
dheron daaaad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #50 on: October 22, 2013, 01:49:05 PM »
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Aqsh ji bahot achey lajawaab,,, dard achey hote hain kyonke ye dil pe apni chap chod jaate hain so kabhi kabhi aesi ghazlen bhi likha kijiye...
dheron daaaad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
hmmm dard se mai bahut darti hoon aur koshish karti hoon door rahne ki .. by the way thnxxxxxxxx a lotttttt iqtedar ji...
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«Reply #51 on: October 24, 2013, 03:48:15 PM »
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shiddat'e'dard 'درد' may aai na kami mere kabhi
dard 'درد' phir dard 'درد' raha ultha likha ya seedha...
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«Reply #52 on: October 25, 2013, 10:28:48 PM »
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روشن کے جو دل نے کبھی دن ڈھلے چراغ
اپنے اجاڑ گھر میں لگے کیا بھلے چراغ

شاید میرا وجود ہی سورج تھا شہر میں
میں بجھہ گیا تو کتنے گھروں میں جلے چراغ

دریا کی تہہ میں کتنے ستاروں کا عکس تھا
پانی کے ساتھہ ساتھہ کہاں تک چلے چراغ

اے صبح کی شریر کرن ان کا احترام
طے کر گئے ہیں شب کے سبھی مرحلے چراغ

کیوں کر نہ ہم بجھیں تجھے مل کر کہ بزم میں
سورج تیرا بدن ہے تو ہم دل جلے چراغ

محسن وہ ڈھونڈھتا تھا کیسے پچھلی رات کو
آنکھیں ہوا کی زد میں تھیں ،دامن تلے چراغ
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«Reply #53 on: October 28, 2013, 03:36:11 PM »
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روشن کے جو دل نے کبھی دن ڈھلے چراغ
اپنے اجاڑ گھر میں لگے کیا بھلے چراغ

شاید میرا وجود ہی سورج تھا شہر میں
میں بجھہ گیا تو کتنے گھروں میں جلے چراغ

دریا کی تہہ میں کتنے ستاروں کا عکس تھا
پانی کے ساتھہ ساتھہ کہاں تک چلے چراغ

اے صبح کی شریر کرن ان کا احترام
طے کر گئے ہیں شب کے سبھی مرحلے چراغ

کیوں کر نہ ہم بجھیں تجھے مل کر کہ بزم میں
سورج تیرا بدن ہے تو ہم دل جلے چراغ

محسن وہ ڈھونڈھتا تھا کیسے پچھلی رات کو
آنکھیں ہوا کی زد میں تھیں ،دامن تلے چراغ

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thnxxxxxxx a lottttttt for sharing this beautiful ghazal with me.. maine ise Roman mein bhi likha hai.. bahut hi pyaaaaaaari ghazal... bahut bahut shukriya aapka...

Roshan kiye jo dil ne kabhi din dhale chiraag
Apne ujhaad ghar mein lage kya bhale chiraag

Shayad mera wajood hi suraj tha shehar mein
Main bujh gaya toh kitne gharoN mein jale chiraag

Dariya ki tah mein kitne sitaaron ka aks tha
baati ke saath saath kahan tak chale chiraag

Ae subah ke shareer kiran in ka ehtaraam
Taye kar gaye hain shab ke sabhi marhale chiraag

kyun kar na hum bujhe tujhe milkar ke bazm mein
suraj tera badan hai toh hum dil jale chiraag

Mohsin woh doondhta tha kise peechli raat ko
Aankhein hawa ki zadd mein thi daaman tale chiraag..

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«Reply #54 on: October 28, 2013, 03:40:53 PM »
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shiddat'e'dard 'درد' may aai na kami mere kabhi
dard 'درد' phir dard 'درد' raha ultha likha ya seedha...
waaaaaaaah.. iqtedar bahut khoooooob...
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«Reply #55 on: October 28, 2013, 05:10:26 PM »
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waaaaaaaah.. iqtedar bahut khoooooob...
ye sher mera nahi par dard zaroor mera hai  Shocked Even More
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«Reply #56 on: October 28, 2013, 07:14:53 PM »
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ye sher mera nahi par dard zaroor mera hai  Shocked Even More
phir not mine kyun nahi likha aapne   Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
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«Reply #57 on: October 29, 2013, 06:22:02 PM »
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phir not mine kyun nahi likha aapne   Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!

N.M is liye nahi likhe kyonke is may chupa dard mera hai  Laughing hard
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«Reply #58 on: October 30, 2013, 09:24:53 PM »
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N.M is liye nahi likhe kyonke is may chupa dard mera hai  Laughing hard
yeh aap kaise kah sakte ho aapka dard aap apni zubaan se kaho na..
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«Reply #59 on: October 30, 2013, 11:37:28 PM »
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yeh aap kaise kah sakte ho aapka dard aap apni zubaan se kaho na..
تمہارے بِن میری سانسیں بھی چلتی ہیں رُک رُک کر
دھـڑکتا دِل تَبھی اب جب بھی دردِ ہِجــر سہتــا ہــــے
خُــدارا کُـچـھ رحــم کــردو چلــــے آو سُـکــوں دے دو
تمہـارے بِـن میں مَــر جـاونـگا یــہ ہر ایک کہتــا ہـــــے
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