gamo,n key qafas ,,,jeet jainam saini

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maree  zindagi  akser  badnaam see rahee,
gamo,n key  qafas  main  gulam see rahee,

chraag jal rahe fir dil main andhera hai,
lou bujhte hi hastee shamshaan see rahee,

tanha mahsoos karta hoon har mahfil main,
yuh apnon main ajnabi pahchaan see rahee,

aansu bhee dheere dheere sukh gaye jaise,
zindagi  bhee  banzar  maidaan see rahee,

kaise  bhool  jaao,n  gunaah  uske saare,
fakt  karke  fareb woh  anjaan see rahee,

kisto,n main bati zeest kiska karz doo,n,
ye saanse khuda kee dee lagaan see rahee,

dil lekar tod dena  mazaak ho gaya  jeet,
ishq key viyapaar  kee  dukaan see rahee,
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«Reply #2 on: July 05, 2015, 11:45:10 PM »
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waah bahut bahut khoob waaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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वाह वाह क्या बात है अति सुंदर पेश है : जिन्दगी को जिसने जैसे देखा,उसको वैसी ही दिखाई दी| श्री जीत जी ,जो मेरा राऊ देय था उसे कृपया मेरे खाते में जोड़ दीजियेगा शायद आप जोड़ना भूल गये है -धन्यवाद -आर के रस्तोगी
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bahut khoob Jeet ji....!!!
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shukriya ram sir ji ap apni rau dakh lijiye humne add kardiya
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bohat bohat shukriya hriday ji
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Quote from: jeet jainam on July 07, 2015, 04:34:39 AM
shukriya ram sir ji ap apni rau dakh lijiye humne add kardiya
shri jeet jainam ji rau jodne ke liye shukrya
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apka tah dil se suvaagat hai ram sir ji
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