Gar hame apna na bana sako..........................................Aqsh

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Gar hame apna na bana sako, to thukra do
Nigahon men basa apna chehra, bujha do

Toot jaaye saare housle, jeene ke
Aaj meri jaan, mujhe aisi saza do

Rote rahe har waqt, teri parchai se lipatkar
Ashkon ko bar bar behne ki, koi wajah do

Neendh meri aankhon se, udhakar le jao
Tum raaton ko meri, tanhai se saja do

Aankhen pyaar men, dil ki zubaan hoti hain
Faasle banate ho to inhe khamoshi thamaa do
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2012, 09:41:28 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 20, 2012, 09:37:10 AM
Gar hame apna na bana sako, toh thukra do
Nigahon me basa tumhara chehra, bujha do

Toot jaaye saare housle zindagi me, jeene ke
Aaj aisi hi meri jaan, mujhe koi saza do

Rote rahe har waqt, teri parchai se lipatkar
Ashkon ko bar bar behne ki, koi wajah do

Neendh meri aankhon se, udhakar le jao
Raaton ko meri tum, tanhai se saja do

Aankhen pyaar me, dil ki zubaan hoti hai
"Aqsh" ke sachche pyaar ko, aaj bezubaan bana do
zabardast Aqsh ji ..Awesome. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2012, 09:45:12 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut badia aqshji
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2012, 09:45:39 AM »
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Oh My God..Etni sad poetry.
Par jajbaat dil ko chu gaye.
Bahut achchaa likha hai aapne.
++1 for my dear sister.
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Quote from: sahal on November 20, 2012, 09:41:28 AM
zabardast Aqsh ji ..Awesome. Applause Applause Applause Applause
thank u sahal ji
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Quote from: azad mishra on November 20, 2012, 09:45:12 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut badia aqshji
shukriya azad ji
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on November 20, 2012, 09:45:39 AM

Oh My God..Etni sad poetry.
Par jajbaat dil ko chu gaye.
Bahut achchaa likha hai aapne.
++1 for my dear sister.

masoom bahut bahut thnx
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«Reply #7 on: November 20, 2012, 10:03:10 AM »
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maashaa aalhaa
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«Reply #8 on: November 20, 2012, 10:03:57 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 20, 2012, 09:37:10 AM
Gar hame apna na bana sako, toh thukra do
Nigahon me basa tumhara chehra, bujha do

Toot jaaye saare housle zindagi me, jeene ke
Aaj aisi hi meri jaan, mujhe koi saza do

Rote rahe har waqt, teri parchai se lipatkar
Ashkon ko bar bar behne ki, koi wajah do

Neendh meri aankhon se, udhakar le jao
Raaton ko meri tum, tanhai se saja do

Aankhen pyaar me, dil ki zubaan hoti hai
"Aqsh" ke sachche pyaar ko, aaj bezubaan bana do

good,ma'am
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 20, 2012, 10:03:10 AM
maashaa aalhaa
shukriya sirji
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on November 20, 2012, 10:03:57 AM
good,ma'am
thnx marhoom bahayaat ji
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lajavab aqsh ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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lajavab aqsh ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thnx nandbahuji
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