Gar hame apna na bana sako..........................................Aqsh

by aqsh on November 20, 2012, 09:37:10 AM
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gaytri gupta
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«Reply #15 on: November 20, 2012, 11:00:28 AM »
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AQSH JI bahut khoob likha aap ne ...waah waah waah
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«Reply #16 on: November 20, 2012, 11:06:28 AM »
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Quote from: gaytri gupta on November 20, 2012, 11:00:28 AM
AQSH JI bahut khoob likha aap ne ...waah waah waah
thnx gayatriji
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«Reply #17 on: November 20, 2012, 11:11:19 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #18 on: November 20, 2012, 11:24:49 AM »
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Quote from: friendyz on November 20, 2012, 11:11:19 AM
waah waah bahut khoob
thank you friendyz
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«Reply #19 on: November 20, 2012, 12:19:14 PM »
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Laajavaab.. jitni bhi tareef kee jaye kam hai..
behatreen ghazal..
dhero daad
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«Reply #20 on: November 20, 2012, 02:01:46 PM »
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Bahut khub likha he..
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«Reply #21 on: November 20, 2012, 02:16:12 PM »
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wah aqsh sahab, maza aa gaya, bahut umda jazbaat aur alfaaz rahe, umeed rahegi ki aap  apne hunar se yuNhi bazm ko sajaate raheNge...
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«Reply #22 on: November 21, 2012, 12:55:04 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #23 on: November 21, 2012, 01:22:28 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 20, 2012, 09:37:10 AM
Gar hame apna na bana sako, to thukra do
Nigahon men basa apna chehra, bujha do

Toot jaaye saare housle, jeene ke
Aaj meri jaan, mujhe aisi saza do

Rote rahe har waqt, teri parchai se lipatkar
Ashkon ko bar bar behne ki, koi wajah do

Neendh meri aankhon se, udhakar le jao
Tum raaton ko meri, tanhai se saja do

Aankhen pyaar men, dil ki zubaan hoti hain
Faasle banate ho to inhe khamoshi thamaa do
Bohut khoob aqsh jee bohut pur sauz ghazal hai, sabhi ashar lajwab rahe. daad qubool karen
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«Reply #24 on: November 21, 2012, 01:52:36 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on November 20, 2012, 12:19:14 PM
Laajavaab.. jitni bhi tareef kee jaye kam hai..
behatreen ghazal..
dhero daad
thnx so much mukesh ji
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«Reply #25 on: November 21, 2012, 01:54:41 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on November 20, 2012, 02:16:12 PM
wah aqsh sahab, maza aa gaya, bahut umda jazbaat aur alfaaz rahe, umeed rahegi ki aap  apne hunar se yuNhi bazm ko sajaate raheNge...
thnx taish ji
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«Reply #26 on: November 21, 2012, 01:55:38 PM »
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Quote from: Khamosh.. on November 20, 2012, 02:01:46 PM
Bahut khub likha he..
shukriya khamosh ji
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«Reply #27 on: November 21, 2012, 01:56:22 PM »
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Quote from: prashad on November 21, 2012, 12:55:04 AM
bahut khoob
shukriya prashad ji
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«Reply #28 on: November 21, 2012, 01:59:06 PM »
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Quote from: Aarish on November 21, 2012, 01:22:28 AM
Bohut khoob aqsh jee bohut pur sauz ghazal hai, sabhi ashar lajwab rahe. daad qubool karen
thnx aarishji
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«Reply #29 on: November 21, 2012, 02:07:45 PM »
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Wah wah wah !!! Bahaut khoobsurat Aqsh ji ...dheron daad !!!
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