Gazal Phool Banna Chaahtii Hai......masoom

by Masoom Shahzada on November 09, 2012, 03:31:30 AM
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KyoN nayaa naam ab diyaa jaaye.
Bewafaa hai to kah diyaa jaaye.
.
Ek mulaakaat aakhiree kar le.
Apna hissa liyaa diyaa jaaye.
.
Bebasii, bekasii ya tanhaai.
Ghar sajaane ko kyaa diyaa jaaye.
.
Ma.ngta aornaa-bichaana hai.
Dard hai, bol de diyaa jaaye.
.
Aa.nsu'ao ab kamar kas lo.
Jo bachaa hai, bahaa diyaa jaaye.
.
Chaahe tum jitne aa_iine de do.
Apna chehra nahii diyaa jaaye.
.
Kabool haar chaa.nd ne kar lii.
Chalo koi diiya jalaa diyaa jaaye.
.
Ab Gazal phool banna chaahtii hai.
Koi konaa haraa diyaa jaaye.
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«Reply #1 on: November 09, 2012, 03:45:53 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut hee laajawaab matlaa masoom beta jio
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«Reply #2 on: November 09, 2012, 04:31:37 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 09, 2012, 04:32:25 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on November 09, 2012, 03:31:30 AM

KyoN nayaa naam ab diyaa jaaye.
Bewafaa hai to kah diyaa jaaye.
.
Ek mulaakaat aakhiree kar le.
Apna hissa liyaa diyaa jaaye.
.
Bebasii, bekasii ya tanhaai.
Ghar sajaane ko kyaa diyaa jaaye.
.
Ma.ngta aornaa-bichaana hai.
Dard hai, bol de diyaa jaaye.
.
Aa.nsu'ao ab kamar kas lo.
Jo bachaa hai, bahaa diyaa jaaye.
.
Chaahe tum jitne aa_iine de do.
Apna chehra nahii diyaa jaaye.
.
Kabool haar chaa.nd ne kar lii.
Chalo koi diiya jalaa diyaa jaaye.
.
Ab Gazal phool banna chaahtii hai.
Koi konaa haraa diyaa jaaye.

Kya baat hai masssom jee nihayat umda ghazal hai, matalaa to kamal hai.. marhaba.marhaba. dherroon daad qubool karen.....
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«Reply #4 on: November 09, 2012, 05:33:05 AM »
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Ma.ngta aornaa-bichaana hai.
Dard hai, bol de diyaa jaaye.

Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 09, 2012, 05:39:49 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: November 09, 2012, 07:31:41 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waaah masoom bahut bahut hi umda likha hai tumne bahut khoob kush raho
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«Reply #7 on: November 09, 2012, 08:06:23 AM »
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bahut khoob bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: November 09, 2012, 12:57:23 PM »
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bahut hi badia aur umda rachna masoomji
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«Reply #9 on: November 09, 2012, 07:15:12 PM »
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Masoom Sahaab aadaab!


Janab aapkimasoomiyat par shak ho raha hai ab... tongue3
Itne gehre khayaal kahe hai ke kia kaheN...Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
HaaN shaayri ki buniyaadi baateN hoti hai usse hat kar
agar shayri ho toH woH shayri nahi rahti ... par aapke
khayaal behad khoob rahe so dil se daad de raha huN .. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #10 on: November 17, 2012, 02:26:26 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
very nice creation beta. i liked it  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2012, 09:27:30 AM »
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