*Gazal*

by Roja on September 03, 2007, 03:06:35 AM
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«Reply #120 on: April 08, 2009, 02:29:40 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 07, 2009, 11:17:54 AM
Beautiful creations, great work Roja Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

It is only because of you dear Celmira  Winking Usual Smile  Thanks for correcting me dear.
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«Reply #121 on: April 09, 2009, 02:45:28 PM »
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Waajh Kya Khoob Mehfill, Sajaai hai Aapne Roja Sis, Nice One,.
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«Reply #122 on: April 21, 2009, 02:05:27 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem 4 Ghazals on April 09, 2009, 02:45:28 PM
Waajh Kya Khoob Mehfill, Sajaai hai Aapne Roja Sis, Nice One,.

Thank you very much Azeem brother Usual Smile
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«Reply #123 on: April 21, 2009, 02:12:56 AM »
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Tumne aane mein aakhir badi der ki
Hum toh keh kar chale they barosa nahi

Saans lene lagi thi izazat magar
Rahguzer per nazer thi lagi ki lagi

Sej-saver ker hi aana zaruri na tha
Samajte bhi nazakat kabhi waqt ki

Yaad karte huye tum ko choda hai dam
Aisi ulfat na dekhi thi humne kahi

Waqt-e-rukhsat ye kehte rahe
Aarzoo dekhne ki unhe reh gayi


Izazat : Bidayi

Rahguzer : raah

Nazakat : Najuki

Ulfat : Mohabbat

Waqt-e-rukhsat : Dunia se jaate waqt

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«Reply #124 on: April 21, 2009, 02:31:29 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 21, 2009, 02:12:56 AM
Tumne aane mein aakhir badi der ki
Hum toh keh kar chale they barosa nahi

Saans lene lagi thi izazat magar
Rahguzer per nazer thi lagi ki lagi

Sej-saver ker hi aana zaruri na tha
Samajte bhi nazakat kabhi waqt ki

Yaad karte huye tum ko choda hai dam
Aisi ulfat na dekhi thi humne kahi

Waqt-e-rukhsat ye kehte rahe
Aarzoo dekhne ki unhe reh gayi


Izazat : Bidayi

Rahguzer : raah

Nazakat : Najuki

Ulfat : Mohabbat

Waqt-e-rukhsat : Dunia se jaate waqt



WAAH ROJA JEE..
LAAJWAAB LIKHA HAI..
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«Reply #125 on: April 21, 2009, 05:21:03 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 21, 2009, 02:12:56 AM

Tumne aane mein aakhir badi der ki
Hum toh keh kar chale they bharosa nahi

Saans lene lagi thi izazat magar
Rahguzar per nazar thi lagi ki lagi

Saj-saver ker hi aana zaruri na tha
Samajte to nazakat kabhi waqt ki

Yaad karte huye tum ko choda hai dam
Aisi ulfat na dekhi thi humne kabhi

Waqt-e-rukhsat bhi kehte rahe bas yahi
Aarzoo dekhne ki unhe reh gayi


Izazat : Bidayi

Rahguzer : raah

Nazakat : Najuki

Ulfat : Mohabbat

Waqt-e-rukhsat : Dunia se jaate waqt


Waah Roja! Bahut hi khoob! Clapping Smiley

Abhi na jaanaa chorh kar;
Jaayengey ham saath!
Bhool na jaanaa, ant tak,
Rahey haath mein haath!!

        Ramwatiya/abd bundeli
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«Reply #126 on: April 21, 2009, 06:45:44 AM »
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Very nice Roja sis... :calpping: Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
SIR ji  icon_salut
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«Reply #127 on: April 21, 2009, 07:32:11 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on April 21, 2009, 06:45:44 AM
Very nice Roja sis... :calpping: Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
SIR ji  icon_salut
Thanks salma786 ji!
     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #128 on: April 21, 2009, 10:17:20 AM »
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Hello Roja Ji,
Jaise jaise is site ke features pata lag rahe hain main isme involve hota ja raha hun.  Isi silsile main aapki yeh ghazal padhi.  Beautiful.  I liked it.  Per dayadaan main mila hua hum amritpaan nahin karte - line khubsurat hai.  Congratulation.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #129 on: April 23, 2009, 01:43:09 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 21, 2009, 02:31:29 AM
WAAH ROJA JEE..
LAAJWAAB LIKHA HAI..

Bahut bahut shukriya Pandit ji
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«Reply #130 on: April 23, 2009, 01:44:58 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on April 21, 2009, 05:21:03 AM
Waah Roja! Bahut hi khoob! Clapping Smiley

Abhi na jaanaa chorh kar;
Jaayengey ham saath!
Bhool na jaanaa, ant tak,
Rahey haath mein haath!!

        Ramwatiya/abd bundeli


Thanks Uncle ji... and lovely lines  Usual Smile
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«Reply #131 on: April 23, 2009, 01:46:52 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on April 21, 2009, 06:45:44 AM
Very nice Roja sis... :calpping: Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
SIR ji  icon_salut

Thanks dear Salma  Usual Smile
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«Reply #132 on: April 23, 2009, 01:49:03 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 21, 2009, 10:17:20 AM
Hello Roja Ji,
Jaise jaise is site ke features pata lag rahe hain main isme involve hota ja raha hun.  Isi silsile main aapki yeh ghazal padhi.  Beautiful.  I liked it.  Per dayadaan main mila hua hum amritpaan nahin karte - line khubsurat hai.  Congratulation.
SARVESH RASTOGI

Thank you very much for reading me Sarvesh Rastogi ji. Yu hi aate rehna.
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«Reply #133 on: April 23, 2009, 01:54:37 PM »
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Buhat pyari ghazal aane pesh-e-qidmat ki hai
qabil-e-tareef..
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«Reply #134 on: April 23, 2009, 01:55:04 PM »
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Pass Toh Aaye Zara fir Dhur Jane Ko kahe,
Aag toh de fir bhale sab kuch jalane ko kahe

Gaov ki serhad se baher aa gaye hai hum magar,
Chahta hai mann hai ki koyi laut aane ko kahe

Is lutere waqt ki ab yeh himakat dekhiye
Lootkar sapnon ki nagri muskurane ko kahe

Aaj us badal ki niyat fir lagi hai dav per,
Aag ki kyari mein jo birva lagane ko kahe

Bhook ke is daur ka tevar naya bilkul naya
Rotiyon ke saat yeh toh zeher khane ko kahe
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