*Gazal*

by Roja on September 03, 2007, 03:06:35 AM
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«Reply #150 on: May 09, 2009, 03:04:23 AM »
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Her taraf ghayal ujala raat tufanon ki hai
Aaj fir niyat buri is ghar ke darbanon ki hai

Fir gira mausam fisal ker desh ka hum kya kahe
Kuch to daldal ki hai sajish, kuch to chattanon ki hai.

Dard ki siyahi se cheron per likha pad lijiye
Ghoont ber paani ki chahat pet ber daanon ki hai

Her kadam rakhne se pehle ab izazat chahiye
Ek nirdhan desh mein yeh sadak dhanwanon ki hai

Aadmi koyi nahi hum ghoom aaye her gali,
Ya toh basti Hinduwon ki ya Musalmanon ki hai

Phool ka khilna na roko, phool ko khilne to do
Waqt ko behad zarurat aaj muskanon ki hai..


(Love You Angel... )
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«Reply #151 on: May 09, 2009, 03:12:10 AM »
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I dont know what to say after this.... really a very very good work. Applause
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«Reply #152 on: May 09, 2009, 04:24:22 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 09, 2009, 03:04:23 AM
Her taraf ghayal ujala raat tufanon ki hai
Aaj fir niyat buri is ghar ke darbanon ki hai

Fir gira mausam fisal ker desh ka hum kya kahe
Kuch to daldal ki hai sajish, kuch to chattanon ki hai.

Dard ki siyahi se cheron per likha pad lijiye
Ghoont ber paani ki chahat pet ber daanon ki hai

Her kadam rakhne se pehle ab izazat chahiye
Ek nirdhan desh mein yeh sadak dhanwanon ki hai

Addmi koyi nahi hum ghoom aaye her gali,
Ya toh basti Hindiwon ki ya Musalmanon ki hai

Phool ka khilna na roko, phool ko khilne to do
Waqt ko behad zarurat aaj muskanon ki hai..


(Love You Angel... )



great work roja bhut hi acha likha hai aakhri do shair to aapne gazab hi keh diye kya baat hai waah.......dil se daad hazir hai is paishkash ke liyn...............keep writing.........
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«Reply #153 on: May 09, 2009, 03:36:29 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 09, 2009, 03:12:10 AM

I dont know what to say after this.... really a very very good work. Applause

Tujhe padkar accha laga yehi mai chahti thi. Thanks Angel
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«Reply #154 on: May 09, 2009, 03:37:11 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on May 09, 2009, 03:20:38 AM
Waah bahot khoob Roja ji..har ash'ar ek alag rang me likha aapne..very nice.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya @kaash ji
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«Reply #155 on: May 09, 2009, 03:38:08 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 09, 2009, 04:24:22 AM
great work roja bhut hi acha likha hai aakhri do shair to aapne gazab hi keh diye kya baat hai waah.......dil se daad hazir hai is paishkash ke liyn...............keep writing.........

Bahut bahut shukriya Aslam ji.
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«Reply #156 on: May 10, 2009, 03:56:31 PM »
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Sapnon se her zameen ki behat hai dhooriyan
Dilli se deen-heen ki behat hai dhooriyan

Vishwas kya hua kahi dikhta nahi hame,
Insaan se yakeen ki behat hai dhooriyan

Ghode khule huye hai sawaron ko baandh ke,
Ghode se aaj jeen ki behat hai dhooriyan

Kehne ko bahut pass padosi hai hum magar,
Bharat se aaj Cheen ki behat hai dhooriyan

Sangeet ki talash mein nikle the hum kabhi,
Geeton se aaj been ki behat hai dhooriyan

Jeevan mila hai kuch ko tadapne ke mol per,
Paani se aaj meen ki behat hai dhooriyan

Ekkeesvi(21st) sadi ka shor hai magar yahan
Pracheen se naveen ki behat hai dhooriyan..
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«Reply #157 on: May 13, 2009, 03:53:55 PM »
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Benam dayaron ka safer kaisa laga hai
Ab laut ke aaye ho toh ghar kaisa laga hai?

Kaisa tha wahan garam dhoop mein julasna
Bersaat-ruthon ka ye nagar kaisa laga hai?

Din mein bi dehal jaati hu aabaad gharon se
Saya-sa mere saat ye darr kaisa laga hai?

Honton pe saji huyi khamosh sada(aawaz) ka
Aankhon ke dareechon se guzer kaisa laga?

Aangan mein lagaya tha shezer(ped) chaav se maine
Fhalne pe jo aaya toh fhal (fruit) kaisa laga hai?
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«Reply #158 on: May 14, 2009, 05:50:42 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 09, 2009, 03:04:23 AM

Har taraf ghayal ujala, raat tufanon ki hai!
Aaj fir niyat buri in ghar ke darbanon ki hai!!

Fir gira mausam fisal kar desh ka, ham kya kahen?
Kuch to hai daldal ki sajish, kuch to chattanon ki hai!

Dard ki syahi se chehron par likha padhh lijiye;
Ghoont bhar paani ki chahat, pet bhar daanon ki hai!

Har kadam rakhne se pehle ab izazat chahiye;
Ek nirdhan desh mein, yeh sadak dhanwanon ki hai!

Aadmi koyi nahin, ham ghoom aaye har gali,
Ya to basti Hindiwon ki, ya Musalmanon ki hai!

Phool ka khilna na roko, phool ko khilne to do;
Waqt ko behad zarurat aaj muskanon ki hai!!


(Love You Angel... )



Roja! You're lovely! The intensity of your honest feelings touches the heart right to its core! This is certainly a commendable piece of your poems!
                              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #159 on: May 14, 2009, 06:16:33 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 13, 2009, 03:53:55 PM

Benam dayaron ka safer kaisa laga hai?
Ab laut ke aaye ho toh ghar kaisa hai?

Kaisa tha wahan garm hawaaoun mein jhulasna?
Barsaat-ruton ka ye nagar kaisa laga hai?

Din mein bhi dahal jaati hun aabaad gharon se!
Saya-sa mere saath ye dar kaisa laga hai?

Honton pe saji yaar ki khamosh sada sun,
Aankhon ke dareechon se guzar kaisa laga hai?

Aangan mein lagaya tha shazar chaav se maine;
Phalne pe jo aaya hai wo phal kaisa laga hai?


Roja! Tumhain, tumhaaree gazaloun mein padhh kar bahut achchhaa lagtaa hai! Tumhaaree maarmik sneyh-snigdh aankhoun mein tumhaarey dil-o-dimaag ko padhhney kaa man kartaa hai! It's a lovely creation!
                          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #160 on: May 14, 2009, 02:21:39 PM »
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Very nice work Roja... True to Babu Ji's words, you are really amazing !!  icon_flower
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«Reply #161 on: May 16, 2009, 12:07:09 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 10, 2009, 03:56:31 PM
Sapnon se her zameen ki behat hai dhooriyan
Dilli se deen-heen ki behat hai dhooriyan

Vishwas kya hua kahi dikhta nahi hame,
Insaan se yakeen ki behat hai dhooriyan

Ghode khule huye hai sawaron ko baandh ke,
Ghode se aaj jeen ki behat hai dhooriyan

Kehne ko bahut pass padosi hai hum magar,
Bharat se aaj Cheen ki behat hai dhooriyan

Sangeet ki talash mein nikle the hum kabhi,
Geeton se aaj been ki behat hai dhooriyan

Jeevan mila hai kuch ko tadapne ke mol per,
Paani se aaj meen ki behat hai dhooriyan

Ekkeesvi(21st) sadi ka shor hai magar yahan
Pracheen se naveen ki behat hai dhooriyan..



very nice roja bhut hi achal likha hai aapne............
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«Reply #162 on: May 17, 2009, 12:52:01 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 09, 2009, 03:12:10 AM

I dont know what to say after this.... really a very very good work. Applause

Thanks dear angel. Usdin tum bahut upset thi. bas tujhe dedicate kardiya tha. Thanks onceagain for reading dear.
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«Reply #163 on: May 17, 2009, 12:55:32 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on May 09, 2009, 03:20:38 AM
Waah bahot khoob Roja ji..har ash'ar ek alag rang me likha aapne..very nice.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Quote from: @kaash on May 14, 2009, 06:59:23 PM
Waah kitna acha is ghazal ka title dia hai Roja Benaam dayaron se guzar kaisa laga hai..behad khoob..har ash'aar is ghazal ka  gahrai se likha aapne...aakhiri dono ashaar bahot ache lage n particularly this one ..Honthon me saji hui khamosh sada ka benaam dareechon se guzar kaisa laga hai..mind blowing thrd wid masterpiece creations   Applause Clapping Smiley kosish karenge kuch jawaab me likhne ki..i m inspired by yr collection..bahot acha likhti hain aap

Thanks for reading @Kaash ji. Those are not my collections.
ALL GAZALS ARE MY OWN.
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«Reply #164 on: May 17, 2009, 12:56:25 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 16, 2009, 12:07:09 PM
very nice roja bhut hi achal likha hai aapne............

Bahut bahut shukriya dear Aslam ji
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