*Gazal*

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«Reply #165 on: May 17, 2009, 01:00:35 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 14, 2009, 05:50:42 AM

Roja! You're lovely! The intensity of your honest feelings touches the heart right to its core! This is certainly a commendable piece of your poems!
                              - abd bundeli

Uncle ji, You appreciated my little work with yr lovely words. I am really very happy. Even now I find little difficulty in searching proper urdu/hindi words to make proper lines in gazals. When i get appreciation, I get more interest and urge to write again. Thank you onceagain Uncle ji...
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«Reply #166 on: May 17, 2009, 01:02:39 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 14, 2009, 06:16:33 AM
Roja! Tumhain, tumhaaree gazaloun mein padhh kar bahut achchhaa lagtaa hai! Tumhaaree maarmik sneyh-snigdh aankhoun mein tumhaarey dil-o-dimaag ko padhhney kaa man kartaa hai! It's a lovely creation!
                          - abd bundeli

Uncle ji I am really touched reading yr appreciation.
I feel honoured
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«Reply #167 on: May 17, 2009, 01:03:38 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 14, 2009, 02:21:39 PM
Very nice work Roja... True to Babu Ji's words, you are really amazing !!  icon_flower

Thanks dear Talat  Usual Smile
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«Reply #168 on: May 17, 2009, 01:27:02 PM »
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wah wah Roja di.....kitna achha likhti h aap....smjh nai aa rha aapki tarif me kya kahu....bahut bahut khoob  icon_salut
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«Reply #169 on: May 17, 2009, 01:36:07 PM »
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Raste hai raston ke beech yeh diwar math banvayiye
Phool mein kante chipakar haar math banvayiye..

Dharam hai toh dharam ko bas dharam rehne dijiye
Dharam ko pigla ke yu Talvar math banvayiye

Kuch chehak, kuch pyar, kuch tazi hawa aane toh de,
Kisne batlaya ki ghar mein dhwaar mat banvayiye

Phool hai, kaliyan kahi, kuch titliyan is bhag main
Aag ki basti yahan her baar math banvayiye

Aadmi sabse bada usse bada kuch bhi nahi
Aadmi ki laash per Minar math banvayiye
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«Reply #170 on: May 17, 2009, 03:21:55 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 17, 2009, 01:00:35 PM
Uncle ji, You appreciated my little work with yr lovely words. I am really very happy. Even now I find little difficulty in searching proper urdu/hindi words to make proper lines in gazals. When i get appreciation, I get more interest and urge to write again. Thank you onceagain Uncle ji...
Quote from: Roja on May 17, 2009, 01:02:39 PM
Uncle ji I am really touched reading yr appreciation.
I feel honoured
You're always welcome! I hope you'll not only write better and better with the time, but your Hindi/Urdu will also improve side by side! My Best Wishes Are Always With You! Keep it up: THE SKY IS THE LIMIT!
               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #171 on: May 17, 2009, 03:37:29 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 17, 2009, 03:21:55 PM
You're always welcome! I hope you'll not only write better and better with the time, but your Hindi/Urdu will also improve side by side! My Best Wishes Are Always With You! Keep it up: THE SKY IS THE LIMIT!
               - abd bundeli

Thanks again... Expecting yr comments for the above gazal uncle ji
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«Reply #172 on: May 17, 2009, 04:02:59 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 17, 2009, 01:36:07 PM

Raste hain raston ke beech yeh diwar mat banvayiye
Phool mein kante chhipakar haar math banvayiye..

Dharm hai to dharm ko bas dharm rahne dijiye
Dharm ko pighla ke yun Talvar mat banvayiye

Kuchh chahak, kuchh pyar, kuchh tazi hawa aane to do,
Kisne batlaya, ki, ghar mein dwaar mat banvayiye?

Phool hain, kaliyan kahin, kuchh titliyan bhi bag main
Aag ki basti yahan har baar mat banvayiye

Aadmi sab se bada us se bada kuchh bhi nahin
Aadmi ki laash par Minar mat banvayiye




Sundar hai, Roja! Dil ki baat barhey hi pyaar-o-dulaar mein ghol kar peysh ki gayee hai! Applause Clapping Smiley

Tah-e-dil tak dwaar kholey huun, jhapat kar aayiye!
Jaa rahey hain kis taraf? Rukiye! Palat kar aayiye!
Baahuoun mein pyaar kaa saagar lahartaa hai yahaan;
Aadmi har, aadmi hai; aadmi ban jaayiye!!
                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #173 on: May 18, 2009, 10:41:38 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Roja dear...achcha likha hai....!!
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«Reply #174 on: May 19, 2009, 03:04:32 PM »
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Sundar hai, Roja! Dil ki baat barhey hi pyaar-o-dulaar mein ghol kar peysh ki gayee hai! Applause Clapping Smiley

Tah-e-dil tak dwaar kholey huun, jhapat kar aayiye!
Jaa rahey hain kis taraf? Rukiye! Palat kar aayiye!
Baahuoun mein pyaar kaa saagar lahartaa hai yahaan;
Aadmi har, aadmi hai; aadmi ban jaayiye!!
                           - abd bundeli

Ahaaaa.. Uncle ji.... Bahut accha aur pyara likha hai aapne..  Applause
Thank you ...thank you very much.
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«Reply #175 on: May 19, 2009, 03:05:05 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 18, 2009, 10:41:38 AM
Bohot Khoob Roja dear...achcha likha hai....!!

Thank you very much dear Talat.  Usual Smile
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«Reply #176 on: May 19, 2009, 03:59:11 PM »
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एक भी नन्ही कली  जब तक किसी आंगन में मुस्कुराती रहेगी,
सैकडों सागर लहू के पार करके ज़िन्दगी आती रहेगी;

आह मे है असर जब तक, आग आंसू मे बची  है,
मोम की आवाज़ भी चट्टान पिगलती रहेगी;

तोड़ डाले है बहुत, फिर भी खिलोने कुछ बचे है,
उन्ही को गोद मे लेकर कोई माँ लोरियां गाती रहेगी;

हजारों बार सूरज को जनम लेकर यहाँ आना पड़ेगा ,
चुनौती बन के जब तक रात के आगे कोई बाती रहेगी ;

हमें उम्मीद है धरती हरी आकाश नीला ही रहेगा .
चीख जब तक आदमी के दिल को तडपती रहेगी ;

एक बच्चे की हस्सी सौ-सौ बमों पर भी बहुत भारी पड़ी है,
हर सदी यह भूलनेवालों को बतलाती रहेगी .


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Ek bhi nanhi kali jab tak kisi aangan mein muskurati rahegi,
Saikadon sagar lahoo ke paar karke zindagi aati rahegi;

Aah mein hai asar jab tak, aag aansoo mein bachi hai,
Mom ki awaaz bhi chattan piglati rahegi;

Tod dale hai bahut, fir bhi khilone kuch bache hai,
Unhi ko ghod mein lekar koyi Maa loriyan gaati rahegi;

Hazaron baar suraj ko janam lekar yahan aana padega,
Chunauti ban ke jab tak raat ke aage koyi bhaati rahegi;

Hame umeed hai dharthi hari aakash neela hi rahega.
Cheek jab tak aadmi ke dil ko tadpati rahegi;

Ek bacche ki hassi sau-sau bamon per bhi bahut bhari padi hai,
Her sadhi yeh bhoolnewalon ko batlati rahegi.
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«Reply #177 on: May 20, 2009, 02:21:34 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on May 19, 2009, 04:16:03 PM
Waah bahot khoob Roja ji bahot hi meethi aur sukooniyat basar karne vali ghazal pesh ki hai aapne  Applause Applause

Bahut bahut shukriya @Kaash ji aapne hame pada aur tarif ki. Thanks onceagain. Usual Smile
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«Reply #178 on: May 20, 2009, 02:21:35 PM »
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Sannate ki dharti per hum cheek ugate hai
Bhanj daliyon per sapnon ke phool khilate hai..!!

Kacchi mitti ki moorat kacchi reh jaati hai
Apnepan ki aag jala sau bar pakate hai..!!

Jab bhi muskanon per kuch hariyali aati hai,
Basti ke sab awara pashu char-char jaate hai..!!

Paka hua fhal Indradanush ka girta nahi dhara per,
Hum mausam ki daal pakad her bar hilate hai..!!

Woh badal band jaata hai banzer ki bahon mein,
Jiski rahon mein hum palke roj bichate hai..!!

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«Reply #179 on: May 20, 2009, 05:08:32 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 19, 2009, 03:59:11 PM

एक भी नन्ही कली  जब तक किसी आंगन में मुस्कुराती रहेगी,
सैकडों सागर लहू के पार करके ज़िन्दगी आती रहेगी;

आह मे है असर जब तक, आग आंसू मे बची  है,
मोम की आवाज़ भी चट्टान पिगलती रहेगी;

तोड़ डाले है बहुत, फिर भी खिलोने कुछ बचे है,
उन्ही को गोद मे लेकर कोई माँ लोरियां गाती रहेगी;

हजारों बार सूरज को जनम लेकर यहाँ आना पड़ेगा ,
चुनौती बन के जब तक रात के आगे कोई बाती रहेगी ;

हमें उम्मीद है धरती हरी आकाश नीला ही रहेगा .
चीख जब तक आदमी के दिल को तडपती रहेगी ;

एक बच्चे की हस्सी सौ-सौ बमों पर भी बहुत भारी पड़ी है,
हर सदी यह भूलनेवालों को बतलाती रहेगी .


************************************
Ek bhi nanhi kali jab tak kisi aangan mein muskurati rahegi,
Saikadon sagar lahoo ke paar karke zindagi aati rahegi;

Aah mein hai asar jab tak, aag aansoo mein bachi hai,
Mom ki awaaz bhi chattan piglati rahegi;

Tod dale hai bahut, fir bhi khilone kuch bache hai,
Unhi ko ghod mein lekar koyi Maa loriyan gaati rahegi;

Hazaron baar suraj ko janam lekar yahan aana padega,
Chunauti ban ke jab tak raat ke aage koyi bhaati rahegi;

Hame umeed hai dharthi hari aakash neela hi rahega.
Cheek jab tak aadmi ke dil ko tadpati rahegi;

Ek bacche ki hassi sau-sau bamon per bhi bahut bhari padi hai,
Her sadhi yeh bhoolnewalon ko batlati rahegi.







Kya Baat hai roja jee..

aapne bahut hi pyara likha hai..
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