*Gazal* -Panna 14:Ghazals

Roja

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«Reply #195 on: June 07, 2009, 08:18:37 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on May 28, 2009, 05:25:01 PM

Sundar hai Roja! Sach bahut sundar hai!! Satyam! Shivam!! Sundaram!!!
- abd bundeli

Shukriya Uncle ji...


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #196 on: June 07, 2009, 08:22:13 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on May 28, 2009, 07:03:45 PM

Waah bahot khoob ghazal likhi hai aapne Roja ji, bahot achhe sher likhe aapne

Quote from: @kaash on June 05, 2009, 12:14:01 PM

Roja ji i said the same thing aapki khud ki likhi
hui ghazals ke collections. bahot hi achi ghazals likhi hain aapne Usual Smile

Bahut bahut shukriya @Kaash ji.... Yu hi saat dete rehna Usual Smile

(Plz No Hardfeelings dear)


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #197 on: June 11, 2009, 02:27:29 PM »

बड़ा जो काम करता है, बड़ा वह नाम पाता है
ज़माना पूजता उसको उसी के गीत गाता है

बुरा मानव नहीं होता, भला मानव नहीं होता,
उसी का काम ही उसको बुरा, अच्छा बनाता है

नहीं कोई कमी जग में किसी भी चीज़ की, लेकिन,
करे जो कर्म जीवन में वही हर चीज़ पाता है

उसे मंजिल सफलता की, कभी भी मिल नहीं सकती,
जिसे चलना नहीं भाता, जिसे आराम भाता है

नहीं अधिकार जीने का, उसे "रोजा" दुनिया में
कि मानव के न मानव जो किसी भी काम आता है.

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Bada jo kaam karta hai, bada woh naam pata hai
Zamana poojta usko usee ke geet gaata hai

Bure manav nahi hota, bhala manav nahi hota,
Usee ka kaam hi usko bura, accha banata hai

Nahi koyi kami jag mein kisi bhi cheez ki, lekin,
Kare jo karm jeevan mein vohi her cheez paata hai

Usse manzil safalta ki, kabhi bhi mil nahi sakti
Jisse chalna nahi bhata, jise araam bhata hai

Nahi adhikar jeene ka, usse "Roja" dunia mein
Ki Manav ke na manav jo kisii bhi kaam aata hai..


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Dr Maqsood Hasni

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #198 on: June 13, 2009, 11:36:28 AM »

bohat khoob


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shab

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #199 on: June 13, 2009, 11:58:46 AM »

bahut khoob Maqsood ji


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Talat

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #200 on: June 16, 2009, 09:40:53 AM »

Waah...Bohot Khoob Roja dear


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #201 on: June 17, 2009, 05:38:15 PM »

Quote from: Dr Maqsood Hasni on June 13, 2009, 11:36:28 AM

bohat khoob

Quote from: shab on June 13, 2009, 11:58:46 AM

bahut khoob Maqsood ji

Thanks for reading me Dr Maqsood ji....

@Shabana sis aapne mera naam k badle Dr. sb ka naam likh diya galati se..
Thanks for reading dear.


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #202 on: June 17, 2009, 05:39:01 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on June 16, 2009, 09:40:53 AM

Waah...Bohot Khoob Roja dear

Thanks dear Talat


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shab

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #203 on: June 20, 2009, 01:37:21 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB ROJA JI


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #204 on: June 25, 2009, 04:48:07 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on June 19, 2009, 10:50:45 PM

Waah bahot khoob likha hai aapne Roja ji,very nice ghazal

Thank you @kaash ji

Quote from: shab on June 20, 2009, 01:37:21 AM

BAHUT KHOOB ROJA JI

Thanks Shabana ji.


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #205 on: June 25, 2009, 06:43:29 PM »

Bohot khoob roja bahen Umda kawish hai...


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #206 on: July 07, 2009, 02:59:57 PM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 25, 2009, 06:43:29 PM

Bohot khoob roja bahen Umda kawish hai...

Thank you very much Sayyid bhaiya. Kafi dino k baad aapne mera likha pada aur tarif ki ... Me very happy


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #207 on: July 07, 2009, 03:10:05 PM »

Apni palkon pe mujh ko sajaye rakho
Karam mujh per yu hi tum banaye rakho

Pyar gairon mein hi yu na banta karo
Kuch toh mere liye bhi bachaye rakho

Naam kagaz pe mera likho na likho
Dil mein mujh ko magar tum basaye rakho

Baat dil ki na lao juba.n per kabhi
Raaj dil mein sada ye chupaye rakho

Dhooriyan hai magar illtija hai yahi
Yaad seene se meri lagaye rakho

Ye shehar chodkar mai chali jau to
Raah mein meri aankhein bichaye rakho

Gar khayal-e-haseen mein hai "Roja" to fir
Har nazar ko nazar se churaye rakho

illtija = binti

(Last line is edited by me with the kind advice of dear Sayyid bhaiya )


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abdbundeli

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #208 on: July 07, 2009, 03:20:58 PM »

Quote from: Roja on July 07, 2009, 03:10:05 PM

Apni palkon pe mujh ko sajaye rakho
Karam mujh per yu hi tum banaye rakho

Pyar gairon mein hi yu na banta karo
Kuch toh mere liye bhi bachaye rakho

Naam kagaz pe mera likho na likho
Dil mein mujh ko magar tum basaye rakho

Baat dil ki na lao juba.n par kabhi
Raaj dil mein sada ye chupaye rakho

Dhooriyan hai magar illtija hai yahi
Yaad seene se meri lagaye rakho

Ye shahar chhodkar main chali jaun to
Raah mein meri aankhein bichaye rakho

Gar khayal-e-haseen mein hai "Roja" to fir
Nazar har ek nazar se churaye rakho

illtija = binti

Kyaa baat hai Roja! Bahut khoob!

Milo, mat milo, hai tumhain
Yah pooraa adhikaar!
Bahney do; roko naheen,
Par, pyaar kee bayaar!

- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #209 on: July 07, 2009, 03:23:50 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on July 07, 2009, 03:20:58 PM

Kyaa baat hai Roja! Bahut khoob!

Milo, mat milo, hai tumhain
Yah pooraa adhikaar!
Bahney do; roko naheen,
Par, pyaar kee bayaar!

- abd bundeli

Bahut bahut shukriya Uncle ji...


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