*Gazal*

by Roja on September 03, 2007, 03:06:35 AM
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«Reply #210 on: July 07, 2009, 03:24:17 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Roja dear Applause
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«Reply #211 on: July 07, 2009, 03:26:32 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 07, 2009, 03:23:50 PM
Bahut bahut shukriya Uncle ji...
You're welcome!
         - abd bundeli
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«Reply #212 on: July 07, 2009, 03:30:36 PM »
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Koyi aisa kahan jo na jaane mujhe
Din jo badle, lage sab bhulane mujhe

Mehek daman mein tere badan ki liye
Roj aaye hawayein jagane mujhe

Baat kaise inhe ho gayi hai pata,
Phool bhi ab lage hai satane mujhe

Kya batau lage log ab kis tarah
Naam le kar tumhara bhulane mujhe

Ishq mein tere mashur mai yu huyi
Ab nazare sitare bhi jaane mujhe

Dard "Roja" ke dil ka na dekhe koyee
Muskuraker lage sab jalane mujhe




(Last Line is edited by me with the kind advice of Sayyid bhaiya. Thanks dear Usual Smile )
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #213 on: July 08, 2009, 01:45:56 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 07, 2009, 02:59:57 PM
Thank you very much Sayyid bhaiya. Kafi dino k baad aapne mera likha pada aur tarif ki ... Me very happy  love4

Are are ye kya kehdiya.....? awwal to main khud hi bohot dinon YO se gaib raha tha behen.. or phir mujhe laga ke aap hi kam likh rahe hain, magar ab dekh liya ke jo likha hai kamaal dhamaal likha aap ne.....  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #214 on: July 08, 2009, 02:04:16 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 07, 2009, 03:10:05 PM
Apni palkon pe mujh ko sajaye rakho
Karam mujh per yu hi tum banaye rakho

Pyar gairon mein hi yu na banta karo
Kuch toh mere liye bhi bachaye karo

Naam kagaz pe mera likho na likho
Dil mein mujh ko magar tum basaye rakho

Baat dil ki na lao juba.n per kabhi
Raaj dil mein sada ye chupaye rakho

Dhooriyan hai magar illtija hai yahi
Yaad seene se meri lagaye rakho

Ye shehar chodkar mai chali jau to
Raah mein meri aankhein bichaye rakho

Gar khayal-e-haseen mein hai "Roja" to fir
Har nazar ko nazar se churaye rakho


Zabardast!! Bohot hi umda kamaal ki rawani hai...
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«Reply #215 on: July 08, 2009, 02:21:00 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 07, 2009, 03:30:36 PM
Koyi aisa kahan jo na jaane mujhe
Din jo badle, lage sab bhulane mujhe

Mehek daman mein tere badan ki liye
Roj aaye hawayein jagane mujhe

Baat kaise inhe ho gayi hai pata,
Phool bhi ab lage hai satane mujhe

Kya batau lage log ab kis tarah
Naam le kar tumhara bhulane mujhe

Ishq mein tere mashur mai yu huyi
Ab nazare sitare bhi jaane mujhe

Dard "Roja" ke dil ka na dekhe koyi
Muskuraker lage sab jalane mujhe



Bohot khoob Kitabi ash'ar kahunga ise, ayse zabardast ash'ar sirf kitabon me milte hain, Behtareen or mukammal ghazal kahi aapne Roja ji...Padhne or yaad rakhne ke laiq.......

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«Reply #216 on: July 08, 2009, 06:51:12 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 07, 2009, 03:30:36 PM

Koyi aisa kahan jo na jaane mujhe
Din jo badle, lage sab bhulane mujhe

Mehek daman mein tere badan ki liye
Roj aaye hawayein jagane mujhe

Baat kaise inhe ho gayi hai pata,
Phool bhi ab lage hai satane mujhe

Kya batau lage log ab kis tarah
Naam le kar tumhara bhulane mujhe

Ishq mein tere mashur mai yu huyi
Ab nazare sitare bhi jaane mujhe

Dard dil ka na dekhe "Roja" ka koyi
Muskuraker lage sab jalane mujhe




Bahut hi khoob Roja!

Meyree eik bahut puraanee gazal hai, jis key matley kaa eik misraa yuun hai:

Deykhnaa hai, ki, aaj un kaa bahaanaa kyaa hai?
 
Isee gazal kaa eik sheir kuchh yuun hai:

Log kahtey hain, "Tumhain bhool gayee hai duniyaa!"
Roz hotaa hai yahee: is ko bataanaa kyaa hai?

Isliye, jinhain bhoolnaa hai wo bhool jaayen: par, yaad rakhney waaley to bhoolney sey rahey!

                               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #217 on: July 08, 2009, 04:10:03 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 08, 2009, 02:04:16 AM
Zabardast!! Bohot hi umda kamaal ki rawani hai...

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 08, 2009, 02:21:00 AM
Bohot khoob Kitabi ash'ar kahunga ise, ayse zabardast ash'ar sirf kitabon me milte hain, Behtareen or mukammal ghazal kahi aapne Roja ji...Padhne or yaad rakhne ke laiq.......

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____________sayyid randeri____


oooh bhaiya ... bahut bahut shukriya aapne itni tarif kar diya k mai kya kahu....Thanks once again. I am really happy that I am improving day by day...Nice na?  Winking
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«Reply #218 on: July 08, 2009, 04:14:26 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 08, 2009, 06:51:12 AM

Bahut hi khoob Roja!

Meyree eik bahut puraanee gazal hai, jis key matley kaa eik misraa yuun hai:

Deykhnaa hai, ki, aaj un kaa bahaanaa kyaa hai?
 
Isee gazal kaa eik sheir kuchh yuun hai:

Log kahtey hain, "Tumhain bhool gayee hai duniyaa!"
Roz hotaa hai yahee: is ko bataanaa kyaa hai?

Isliye, jinhain bhoolnaa hai wo bhool jaayen: par, yaad rakhney waaley to bhoolney sey rahey!

                               - abd bundeli

Thanks thanks Uncle ji.... and mast likha hai... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #219 on: July 08, 2009, 04:15:52 PM »
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Raje-dil hum sabhi se chupane lage
Her nazer se nazer bhi churane lage

Jab bhi cheda hume aapki yaad ne
Dil ko samjha bujha ker sulane lage

Baath kerne lage chaad taaro se hum
Aapke geet unko sunane lage

Aapki baath phir aapki baath hai
Baath sab ko yahee hum batane lage

Baath dil ki nazer keh gayee aapki
Kwaab kitne sanam hum sajane lage

Raah dekha karenge sadaa aapki
Chahe milne mein hum ko zamane lage

Log kehte hain "Roja" paresha'n hai kyun
Raaj jab ye khulla ..muskurane lage


(Last line is edited by me..  Usual Smile )
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«Reply #220 on: July 09, 2009, 05:18:54 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 08, 2009, 04:15:52 PM

Raj-e-dil ham sabhi se chhupane lage
Har nazar se nazar bhi churane lage

Jab bhi chheda hame aapki yaad ne
Dil ko samjha bujha kar sulane lage

Baat kerne lage chaand taaron se ham
Aapke geet unko sunane lage

Aapki baat phir aapki baat hai
Baat sab ko yahee ham batane lage

Baat dil ki nazar kah gayee aapki
Khwaab kitne sanam ham sajane lage

Raah dekha karenge sadaa aapki
Chahe milne mein ham ko zamane lage

Log kehte hain "Roja" paresha'n hai?
Raaj jab ye khula ..muskurane lage


(Last line is edited by me..  Usual Smile )
Simply beautiful Roja!

Ham unhain jab bhi dil kee bataaney lagey!
Muskuraaye, bahaaney banaaney lagey!!
Ishq kee kaifiyat ab sunaayen kisey;
Un ko saarey nataaij fasaaney lagey?

                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #221 on: July 09, 2009, 04:05:26 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 09, 2009, 05:18:54 AM
Simply beautiful Roja!

Ham unhain jab bhi dil kee bataaney lagey!
Muskuraaye, bahaaney banaaney lagey!!
Ishq kee kaifiyat ab sunaayen kisey;
Un ko saarey nataaij fasaaney lagey?

                           - abd bundeli

Shukriya.... and nice lines  Thumbs UP  Usual Smile
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«Reply #222 on: July 09, 2009, 05:27:54 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 09, 2009, 04:05:26 PM
Shukriya.... and nice lines  Thumbs UP  Usual Smile
Thanks Roja!
    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #223 on: July 11, 2009, 06:32:54 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 08, 2009, 04:15:52 PM
Raje-dil hum sabhi se chupane lage
Her nazer se nazer bhi churane lage

Jab bhi cheda hume aapki yaad ne
Dil ko samjha bujha ker sulane lage

Baath kerne lage chaad taaro se hum
Aapke geet unko sunane lage

Aapki baath phir aapki baath hai
Baath sab ko yahee hum batane lage

Baath dil ki nazer keh gayee aapki
Kwaab kitne sanam hum sajane lage

Raah dekha karenge sadaa aapki
Chahe milne mein hum ko zamane lage

Log kehte hain "Roja" paresha'n hai kyun
Raaj jab ye khulla ..muskurane lage


(Last line is edited by me..  Usual Smile )

Bohot khoob roja zabardast...
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«Reply #224 on: July 11, 2009, 06:34:58 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 09, 2009, 05:18:54 AM
Simply beautiful Roja!

Ham unhain jab bhi dil kee bataaney lagey!
Muskuraaye, bahaaney banaaney lagey!!
Ishq kee kaifiyat ab sunaayen kisey;
Un ko saarey nataaij fasaaney lagey?

                           - abd bundeli


Waah Bohot khoob abd ji.
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