*Gazal* -Panna 16:Ghazals

Talat

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«Reply #225 on: July 11, 2009, 11:51:24 PM »

Quote from: Roja on July 08, 2009, 04:15:52 PM

Raje-dil hum sabhi se chupane lage
Her nazer se nazer bhi churane lage

Jab bhi cheda hume aapki yaad ne
Dil ko samjha bujha ker sulane lage

Baath kerne lage chaad taaro se hum
Aapke geet unko sunane lage

Aapki baath phir aapki baath hai
Baath sab ko yahee hum batane lage

Baath dil ki nazer keh gayee aapki
Kwaab kitne sanam hum sajane lage

Raah dekha karenge sadaa aapki
Chahe milne mein hum ko zamane lage

Log kehte hain "Roja" paresha'n hai kyun
Raaj jab ye khulla ..muskurane lage

(Last line is edited by me.. )

Bohot Khoob Roja dear...par ye samajh nahin aaya "(Last line is edited by me)"


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Talat

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #226 on: July 11, 2009, 11:52:03 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on July 09, 2009, 05:18:54 AM

Simply beautiful Roja!

Ham unhain jab bhi dil kee bataaney lagey!
Muskuraaye, bahaaney banaaney lagey!!
Ishq kee kaifiyat ab sunaayen kisey;
Un ko saarey nataaij fasaaney lagey?

- abd bundeli

Bohot Khoob Babu Ji


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abdbundeli

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #227 on: July 12, 2009, 07:45:42 AM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 11, 2009, 06:34:58 PM

Waah Bohot khoob abd ji.

Quote from: Celmira on July 11, 2009, 11:52:03 PM

Bohot Khoob Babu Ji

Thanks a lot Sayyid Randeri ji/Celmira ji!
- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #228 on: July 12, 2009, 11:26:10 AM »

Raat ke andhkaar mein rehta ujala
Per savera dekhta hai sabr wala

Ho nahi vishwas gam se pooch dekho,
Kaam ki kitni hai bottal aur pyala

Dhur se sansaar lagta hai manoher
Pass se lagta ginauna aur kaala

Gher sakti hai nahi usko udasi
Ho khushi ko jisne apne dil mein paala

Agar pass ho Samajdari, sahas
Paar ho jaata hai tooti naav wala..


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Talat

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #229 on: July 12, 2009, 03:15:59 PM »

Waah bohot khoob Roja dear


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #230 on: July 14, 2009, 01:54:37 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on July 12, 2009, 03:15:59 PM

Waah bohot khoob Roja dear

Thank you so much dear Celmira


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #231 on: July 14, 2009, 02:09:22 PM »

पीने से इज्तनाब कौन करे?
दिल की मस्ती ख़राब कौन करे ?

मस्त आँखें करे इशारा जब
हुक्म उदूली जनाब कौन करे??

रिश्ता है कुछ शबाब और मय में
ऐसा रिश्ता खराब कौन करे?

दोस्तों का चुनाव करता था दिल
दिल नहीं, इन्तिखाब कौन करे?

दिल का पैमाना हो चूका लबरेज
कुलफतो का हिसाब कौन करे?

बांट ले दर्द "रोजा" गरीबों का
बिन तेरे, ये सवाब कौन करे?

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इज्तनाब = परहेज

उदूली = Aagya न मानना

इन्तिखाब = एकत्रित

लबरेज = भरपूर

कुलफतो = कष्टों अथवा विपत्तियों का

सवाब = पुण्य


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #232 on: July 22, 2009, 06:04:31 PM »

Bebaak kamsini ke tarane kider gaye
Lamse-hawas se paak zamane kider gaye

Pehle-si hai dilon mein ab betabiyan kahan
Ek jalak dekhne ke bahane kider gaye

Vo gaon-valiyon ka hame shak se gurna
Her mod per vo apne fasane kider gaye

Her nazer pareshan thi aur her saan mein dhadkan
Rumaano-shauk ke vo zamane kider gaye

Tha waqt jab khushi se khel sakte they jaan per
Jaanbazon ke ulfat ke tarane kider gaye

"Roja", Vo valihaana josh, vo betabiyan,
Vo josh aur vo valvale jaane kider gaye..

Lamse-hawas = ku-unmad ki chuwan

Rumaano-shauk = Pranaiy or Icchayein

Valihaana = Sarvottam


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abdbundeli

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #233 on: July 23, 2009, 10:03:03 AM »

Quote from: Roja on July 22, 2009, 06:04:31 PM

Guzraa hai abhi kaarwaan, furtee dikhaaiye!
Rukiye na rah mein; aur naqsh-e-paa talaashiye!
Badhhiye, qadam badhhaaiye, aawaaz deejiye:
Jaatey shabaab ko manaayiye, taraashiye!!

- abd bundeli

Deir keejiyegaa, to, jo aagey hai, wah kuchh yuun hai:

"Shabaab kho chukey hain apnaa, jo ye hazrat-e-dil:
Usee ko khoj rahey hain kamar jhukaaye huye!"
( NOT MINE!)


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abdbundeli

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #234 on: July 23, 2009, 02:24:04 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on July 23, 2009, 10:48:08 AM

very nice lines Abd ji

Thanks @kaash ji!
- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #235 on: July 23, 2009, 02:36:06 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on July 23, 2009, 10:03:03 AM

aha bahut khoob uncle ji


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abdbundeli

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #236 on: July 23, 2009, 02:41:11 PM »

Quote from: Roja on July 23, 2009, 02:36:06 PM

aha bahut khoob uncle ji

Thanks Roja!
- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #237 on: July 26, 2009, 03:36:17 AM »

Tod de manhusiyat, manhusiyat mein kya dhara?
Ghar se daftar aa gaya hai ab toh pagle muskura..

Tere saheb aur tujhme ek maulik farak hai,
Ofceri bhati hai usko, aur tujhko Apsara..

Mere her arman per bhi is tarah fera gaya -
Jis tarah Chanakya ke sir per fira hai Ustara

Byaah mein iske bache hai kul milakar char din,
Ye toh pehle se dara hai aur isko mat dara..

Baal aur nakoon toh banmanushon-se ho gaye,
Ab miya jungle mein jaake dhoond lo ek kandra..

Lautkar vanvas se jab paav choone ko jukhe,
Matha kaushalya ne jhat aage bada di mantra..

Santri ke aakhri alfaaz they jab bam fata
"Mufat mein bhi de toh mat lena kisi se Santra"..

Vo bola, "Mai uchalta-khood.ta rehta hu herdam Doctor,
Jaane kis bandar ka tumne khoon boltal mein bhara"?

Ek tifin, sabji ka thaila, files ka bhoj le,
Lautkar daftar se aayee, ho chuki hu mai adhmara..

Shayari karna nahi hai her kisii ke haat mein,
Seekhni hai tujko to kar "Roja" se Mashwara..

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तोड़ दे मनहूसियत, मनहूसियत में क्या धरा?
घर से दफ्तर आ गया है अब तो पगले मुस्करा !

तेरे साहेब और तुझमे एक मौलिक फर्क है,
अफसरी भाती है उसको, और तुझको अप्सरा !

मेरे हर अरमान पर भी इस तरह फेरा गया -
जिस तरह चाणक्य के सीर पे फिर है उस्तरा

ब्याह में इसके बचे है कुल मिलाकर चार दिन,
ये तो पहले से डरा है और इसको मत डरा !

बाल और नखून तो बनमानुषों-से हो गए,
अब मिया जंगल में जाके ढूँढ लो एक कंदरा !

लौटकर वनवास से जब पाँव छूने को झुके,
मातु कौशल्या ने झट आगे बड़ा दी मंथरा !

संतरी के आखरी अल्फाज़ थे जब बम फटा
"मुफ्त में भी दे तो मत लेना किसी से संतरा" !

वो बोला, "मै उछालता- कूदता रहता हू हरदम डॉक्टर,
जाने किस बंदर का तुमने खून बोतल में भरा"?

एक टिफिन, सब्जी का थैला, फइलों का बोज ले ,
लौटकर दफ्तर से आयी, हो चुकी हू मै अधमरा !

शायरी करना नहीं है हर किसी के हाथ में,
सीखनी है तुझको तो कर "रोजा" से मशवरा ..


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abdbundeli

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #238 on: July 26, 2009, 07:12:30 AM »

Quote from: Roja on July 26, 2009, 03:36:17 AM

Tod de manhusiyat, manhusiyat mein kya dhara?
Ghar se daftar aa gaya hai, ab to pagle muskura..

Tere saheb aur tujhme ek maulik fark hai,
Afsari bhati hai usko, aur tujhko Apsara!

Mere har arman par bhi is tarah fera gaya -
Jis tarah Chanakya ke sir par fira ho ustara

Byaah mein iske bache hain kul milakar char din;
Ye to pehle se dara hai, aur isko mat dara!!

Baal aur nakhoon to banmanushon-se ho chuke;
Ab miyan jungle mein jaake dhoond daalo kandra!

Lautkar vanvas se jab paav choone ko jukhe,
Maat Kaushalya ne jhat aage bada di Manthra!!

Santri ke aakhri alfaaz they, jab bam fata,
"Mufat mein bhi de, to mat lena kisi se santra!"

"Mai uchalta-khood.ta rehta hun hardam, Doctor!
Kyaa kisee bandar ka, tumne, khoon botal mein bhara"?

Ley tifin, sabji ka thaila, failon ka bhoj le;
Lautkar daftar se aa, ho chuka hun main adhmara!

Shayari karna nahin hai har kisii ke haat mein!
Seekhni hai tujko, to kar "Roja"bi se mashwara!!

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Kyaa hi zordaar 'mazaaqiyah jalwahgari', which is full of irony (tanzaameiz), paidaa kar dee hai Roja bi key dil-o-dimaag ney!
- abd bundeli


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #239 on: July 28, 2009, 12:23:06 AM »

Quote from: Roja on July 14, 2009, 02:09:22 PM

Waah!.. Bohot achhe ashar hain, chhoti si beher me badi baaten kehdi aap ne, bohot khoob...


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