*Gazal*

by Roja on September 03, 2007, 03:06:35 AM
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«Reply #255 on: September 01, 2009, 09:06:31 AM »
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Yahan bohot dinon se khaamoshi hai, Roja behen, ek or daur hojaaye... is behtareen mehfil me aysi khaamoshi achhchi nahi lagti.. crybaby2
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«Reply #256 on: September 04, 2009, 03:05:37 AM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on September 01, 2009, 09:06:31 AM
Yahan bohot dinon se khaamoshi hai, Roja behen, ek or daur hojaaye... is behtareen mehfil me aysi khaamoshi achhchi nahi lagti.. crybaby2

Mai aagayi bhaiyaa... icon_thumleft
Ab khamoshi nahi hogi...  Usual Smile
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«Reply #257 on: September 04, 2009, 03:09:07 AM »
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Dard ki dastan purani hai
Husn aur Ishq ki kahani hai

Ishq to saat zindagi bhi de
Husn do din ki ek kahani hai

Khwaab dekhe the jo jawani mein
Unki bas ek kasak nishani hai

Humne sab kuch luta diya jinper
Unke dil mein bhi badgumani hai

Jahan lage koyi kinare kismat hai
Giri tufaan mein zindagani hai

Kis ki umeed "Roja" ber aayee
Apni kya kuch alag kahani hai

Ber : Paripurna hona
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«Reply #258 on: September 04, 2009, 05:44:21 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on September 04, 2009, 03:09:07 AM
Dard ki dastan purani hai
Husn aur Ishq ki kahani hai

Khwaab dekhe the jo jawani mein
Unki bas ek kasak nishani hai

Humne sab kuch luta diya jinper
Unke dil mein bhi badgumani hai

Bohot Bohot Khoob Roja.... Kya Kamaal Ghzal Kahi.. or Ye Quote Kiye Huve Asha'ar To Zabardast Hain.. Bohot Achhe.. or Bohot Shukriya Jo Meri Darkhast Par Labbaik Kaha Aapne... Khush Rahiye.
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«Reply #259 on: September 04, 2009, 07:31:12 AM »
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Wah wah very nice and beautiful gazal Roja ji,mindblowing creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #260 on: September 07, 2009, 02:30:58 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on September 04, 2009, 05:44:21 AM
Bohot Bohot Khoob Roja.... Kya Kamaal Ghzal Kahi.. or Ye Quote Kiye Huve Asha'ar To Zabardast Hain.. Bohot Achhe.. or Bohot Shukriya Jo Meri Darkhast Par Labbaik Kaha Aapne... Khush Rahiye.

Thanks Sayyid ji  :)Aapne pada aur tarif ki mera dil sach mein bahut khush hua.
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«Reply #261 on: September 07, 2009, 02:31:43 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 04, 2009, 07:31:12 AM
Wah wah very nice and beautiful gazal Roja ji,mindblowing creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks for reading dear Madhu
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«Reply #262 on: September 07, 2009, 02:38:20 PM »
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Jung tal sake to accha,
Hal nikal sake toh accha

Bahut sataya mere humsaye ne,
Vo badal sake toh accha

Kayi galatiyan huyi humse,
Ab sambal sake toh accha

Aman bhayi-chare ke dushmanon ko,
Aar masal sake toh accha

Hamare masle ek, tehjeeb ek,
Saat chal sake toh accha...
 
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«Reply #263 on: September 11, 2009, 09:14:13 AM »
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Roja Ji ... Aap ki Sabhi GhazaleiN Nazar Huii .... Mashallah ... ik se badh kar ik .... bahut khoob .....  Jee main aata hai ke aap ki har ik Gazal pe Jawab KaruN .. Magar ... tangi-e-waqt-halat yeh izaazat nai detaa .... Bahrhaal ....  chend alfaaz pesh_e_kidmat hai .....


Lga Ke Aaya Hoon Aag Apne ArmaanooN Mein
SainkdoN ZazerieN Doob Gaye TufanoN Mein

Na Chod Aana Meri Laash Ko VeeranoN Mein
PaimanoN Mein Dal Dafna Dena MaikhanoN Mein

Tera Kuccha Teri Gali Tera Shehar HumDum
Ab Kucch Naa Rha Mera In TikaanooN Mein

Unko ZameeN Ki Khaak Se Bhalla Kya Wasta?
Jinko Shonq Ka Udne Ka AasmanooN Mein !!

HumTum
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«Reply #264 on: September 13, 2009, 12:26:33 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Roja dear.....Humtum Ji, very nice ghazal.
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«Reply #265 on: September 13, 2009, 01:50:14 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on September 03, 2007, 03:06:35 AM
Ek koshish... apni dil ki bath kehne ka.. Hope k meri ye koshish kamyab hoga.

Zindagi main Kabhi koyee is tarah dil ko kuchal jate k aisa lagta k kya unhe pata hota ke
hamara dil pe kya guzra unke aisi herkatonse??.!!

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Hum kabhi kisii ki bhool ke bhi
Cheena muskan nahi karte
Hum sakht-tabiyat hai lekin
Bin bath tufan nahi karte..!!

Hum andkaar main reh sakte
Uski tokkar bhi seh sakte
Per kiranraaj ke dhar per jaa
Hum manga daan nahi karte..!!

Jo pyar se koyee vish bhi de
Hum haste-haste pee jate
Per daya-daan main mila hua
Hum amrit paan nahi karte..!!

Auron ki bath nahi kehte
Hum apni baat batate hai
Apna apmaan nahi sehte
Apmaan auron ka bhi nahi karte..!!

"Roja" ka dil jahan mil jaye
Pehchan usee se kar lete
Jis.se dil nahi mile apna
Usse pehchan nahi karte..!!

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roja ji bahut hi badhiya likha hai apne..abhi tou koi ghazal dhayan mein nhi arhi hai but likhte hi yahan share zarur karungi..bahut achi rachna hai apki..to gud...ApplauseApplause
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«Reply #266 on: September 13, 2009, 03:37:12 PM »
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Quote from: HumTum on September 11, 2009, 09:14:13 AM
Roja Ji ... Aap ki Sabhi GhazaleiN Nazar Huii .... Mashallah ... ik se badh kar ik .... bahut khoob .....  Jee main aata hai ke aap ki har ik Gazal pe Jawab KaruN .. Magar ... tangi-e-waqt-halat yeh izaazat nai detaa .... Bahrhaal ....  chend alfaaz pesh_e_kidmat hai .....


Lga Ke Aaya Hoon Aag Apne ArmaanooN Mein
SainkdoN ZazerieN Doob Gaye TufanoN Mein

Na Chod Aana Meri Laash Ko VeeranoN Mein
PaimanoN Mein Dal Dafna Dena MaikhanoN Mein

Tera Kuccha Teri Gali Tera Shehar HumDum
Ab Kucch Naa Rha Mera In TikaanooN Mein

Unko ZameeN Ki Khaak Se Bhalla Kya Wasta?
Jinko Shonq Ka Udne Ka AasmanooN Mein !!

HumTum

Wonderful gazal  Applause Applause

Bahut bahut shukriya Humtum aapne hame pada aur tarif bi kiya aur ek zabardast gazal bi likha. Bahut khoob  Applause Applause

Aate rehna  Usual Smile
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«Reply #267 on: September 13, 2009, 03:39:19 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 13, 2009, 12:26:33 PM
Bohot Khoob Roja dear.....Humtum Ji, very nice ghazal.

Thank you very much dear Celmira
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«Reply #268 on: September 13, 2009, 03:43:07 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on September 13, 2009, 01:50:14 PM


roja ji bahut hi badhiya likha hai apne..abhi tou koi ghazal dhayan mein nhi arhi hai but likhte hi yahan share zarur karungi..bahut achi rachna hai apki..to gud...ApplauseApplause

bahut bahut thanks dear Geet. Aapne hame pada aur itni tarif ki. bahut bahut shukriya  Usual Smile
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«Reply #269 on: September 13, 2009, 09:13:12 PM »
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ur welcome roja ji..
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