*Gazal* -Panna 21:Ghazals

Roja

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«Reply #300 on: October 16, 2009, 04:47:11 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on October 15, 2009, 07:22:44 AM

Waah bhaii Roja!

Dhwani hotee hai pratidhwanit,
Spandan gaatey geet!
Meyrey antar mein sadaa,
Preeti badhhaatey meet!

- 'Ramwatiya'

Khud unse poocha kayi bar unke ghar ka pata
Kuch unse baat badane ka ek bahana tha

Daleel aqqal ki dil ko na jer kar paayi
Roja shuru se chalan uska gayabana tha


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abdbundeli

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #301 on: October 18, 2009, 07:42:11 AM »

Quote from: Roja on October 16, 2009, 04:47:11 PM

Khud unse poocha kayi bar unke ghar ka pata
Kuch unse baat badane ka ek bahana tha

Daleel aqqal ki dil ko na jer kar paayi
Roja shuru se chalan uska gayabana tha

Bahut achchhey, Roja!

Chaah, chaah hai: aql kee
Naheen usey parwaah!
Yuun to, raaheyn laakh hain;
Eik, talab kee raah!!

- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #302 on: October 18, 2009, 03:37:21 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on October 18, 2009, 07:42:11 AM

Bahut achchhey, Roja!

Chaah, chaah hai: aql kee
Naheen usey parwaah!
Yuun to, raaheyn laakh hain;
Eik, talab kee raah!!

- abd bundeli

Tum they to meri shaam mein tha subah ka aalam
tum jab se gaye, sham jhalakti hai sehar mein..


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #303 on: October 18, 2009, 03:47:46 PM »

Aage ka gazal kuch is tarah hai ....

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Kal jo aaye the bade fakr se sooraj lekar
Aaj khud unke bhi aangan mein aasmaan nahi

Vo jo katputliyon ka naach leke aate hai
Vo bhash-ur hai lekin vo ba-imaan nahi

Mere bhi pet hai jis mein ki bhook ka ghar hai
Suno ye arz-e-adab hai koyi farmaan nahi

Jispe mil jaye tabassum kiraye per yaaron
Ab shehar mein rahi aisi koyi dukaan nahi..


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spicyanki

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #304 on: October 24, 2009, 08:12:30 AM »

roja sahiba...bahot mubarak...kalam aapka achha laga..or kya khoob kaha ke...
Jo pyaar se koi vish bhe de
Hum haste haste pee jate,
Par daya daan mien mila hua
Hum amrit paan nahi karte !!!


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abdbundeli

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #305 on: October 24, 2009, 04:23:10 PM »

Quote from: Roja on October 18, 2009, 03:37:21 PM

Tum they to meri shaam mein tha subah ka aalam
tum jab se gaye, sham jhalakti hai sehar mein..

Waah Roja! Waah!!

Tum bin, meyrey liye hai
Anudin kaalii rain!
Pal-pal ghumarhey megh-sey,
Akulaatey hain nain!!

- 'Ramwatiya'


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Roja

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«Reply #306 on: October 25, 2009, 02:44:06 PM »

Quote from: spicyanki on October 24, 2009, 08:12:30 AM

roja sahiba...bahot mubarak...kalam aapka achha laga..or kya khoob kaha ke...
Jo pyaar se koi vish bhe de
Hum haste haste pee jate,
Par daya daan mien mila hua
Hum amrit paan nahi karte !!!

Bahut bahut shukriya Spicyanki ji aapne hame pada aur tarif ki. Thank you onceagain


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waquif ansari

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #307 on: October 28, 2009, 10:39:45 AM »

Dear Roja! Ye to kahiN se bhi Ghazal nahiN hai. Na bahr hai, na rawaani hai. HaaN ye aik kavita zaroor hai. Ye kya hai zara aap bataayeN.


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #308 on: November 01, 2009, 07:57:39 AM »

Quote from: waquif ansari on October 28, 2009, 10:39:45 AM

Dear Roja! Ye to kahiN se bhi Ghazal nahiN hai. Na bahr hai, na rawaani hai. HaaN ye aik kavita zaroor hai. Ye kya hai zara aap bataayeN.

Dear Waquif Ansari ji, Kaunsa shayari ko keh rahe hai ke Ghazal nahi aur rawani nahi? mai samjhi nahi.


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madhuwesh

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #309 on: November 01, 2009, 08:26:04 AM »

Bahut bahut khoob Roja dear n Abd ji,very beautiful gazal.keep it up. icon_thumleft


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guhar

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #310 on: November 01, 2009, 08:57:48 AM »

roza ,,this piece is really nice,,,,keep on treading ..going right way... icon_flower


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abdbundeli

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #311 on: November 01, 2009, 01:02:30 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on November 01, 2009, 08:26:04 AM

Bahut bahut khoob Roja dear n Abd ji,very beautiful gazal.keep it up. icon_thumleft

Thanks Madhu!
- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #312 on: November 01, 2009, 10:31:35 PM »

Unki fitrat hai zulm taane ki
Apni aadat hai muskurane ki

Ishq mein hai kashish toh aayenge
Kya zarurat hai dar pe jaane ki?

Meri kismat hi mujh se rooti hai
Kaun soche isse manane ki

Humne bhi sapne pyar ke dekhe
Aayi hai raas hawa zamane ki

Hai abhi inqalab ka her husn
Ishq buniyaad her fasane ki

Unke wadon pe aitbar vo hai
Unki aadat hai bhool jane ki


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Roja

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«Reply #313 on: November 01, 2009, 10:38:34 PM »

Thaam lo haat is saudayi ka
Luft aa jaye aashnayi ka

Log kerte hai ishq per ilzam
Hum ko mauka to de safayi ka

Bewafayi bhi ek rishta hai
Kya gila teri bewafayi ka

Meri rag-rag mein dard behta hai
Tadpati hai gam judayi ka

Fikr ke dunia se ho gaye azaad
Jikr kyu ishq se judayi ka?

Tere rehm-o-karam ki hai mohtaz
Jisth kaasa hai ek gadayi ka

Zulm sehne mein bhi maza hai "Roja"
Rangeen rishta hai aashnayi ka..

Aashnayi = Parichai
Kaasa = katora
Gadayi = bheek


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #314 on: November 01, 2009, 10:50:00 PM »

Ye bijli der na kar aashiyan jalane mein
Milega lufth bahut fir se ghar banane mein

Nahi naseeb mein apne bahar fir aaye
Gulon ki yaad madat degi jee lagane mein

Kisi ki pyas mitana hai kaar-e-nek agar
Li-toh-laal ho kyu saaqiya pilane mein

Tumhari chashm hai ser chasm-e-nishate-hayaat
Na daali bhoond bhi tumne mere paimane mein

Rah-e-wafa pe chalenge to jaan bi jaye
hamare kisse kahe jaayenge, zamame mein

Talash, farz hai manzil hame mile na mile
Khushi milegi "Roja" farz ke nibane mein

Kaar-e-nek = Nek kaam
Li-toh-laal = Aana kaani
Chasm-e-nishate-hayaat = Jeevan-aanand ki berpoor drishti


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