*Gazal*

by Roja on September 03, 2007, 03:06:35 AM
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«Reply #45 on: March 12, 2008, 02:56:41 PM »
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Quote from: harashmahajan on March 09, 2008, 04:33:56 PM
Roja.....man ko nirmal bana ker likhne se kalam ki taseer bad.ti hai....our tum maiN ye  khasiat hai ke....use banaye rakhe ho....God bless you dost

Koshish karungi Harash ji. Jaise aapne kaha mann ko nirmal karne ka try karungi...
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«Reply #46 on: March 14, 2008, 05:53:54 AM »
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Nafrat ko nafrat se fanaah na ker
Wafa ker be-wafayi ka Gunah na ker


harash
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«Reply #47 on: March 14, 2008, 03:58:08 PM »
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Good one!
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Roja
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«Reply #48 on: April 02, 2008, 11:59:15 AM »
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Quote from: Harash Mahajan on March 14, 2008, 05:53:54 AM
Nafrat ko nafrat se fanaah na ker
Wafa ker be-wafayi ka Gunah na ker


harash

nice 1 ji
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«Reply #49 on: May 16, 2008, 04:13:08 PM »
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Besada muflison ki sada ab toh sun
Sab pata hai tujhe ye khuda ab toh sun

Luta hai zamana inhe kis tarah
Aa jara dekh tu ye sama ab toh sun

Kaun inka sunega tumare sivay
Kisliye aankh roye gila ab toh sun

Bebasi inki aa kar zara dekh le
Kar nigahe-karam, yeh dua ab to sun

Chand taare inhone na mange kabhi
De siyahi ko inke diye ab toh sun

Kya hua hai tujhe, tu bi sunta nahi
Kaun inki sune fir bata(बता) ab toh sun

Ta rahe hai kehar joh unhe de saja
Bas "Roja" ki itni dua ab toh sun

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Besada = be awaz, Sama = drushya
Nigahe-karam = kripa drishti
Kehar = atyachar
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«Reply #50 on: May 16, 2008, 04:23:41 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Roja!!!
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #51 on: May 18, 2008, 08:35:15 AM »
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Tamam gazaliyat behad umda or unche darje ki he, Roja ji aap jesi shaira ka hamare darmiyaan hona hamare liye khushi or fakhar ki baat he, bohot bohot mubarak baad, allah kare zor-e-sukhan or zyada.
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«Reply #52 on: May 18, 2008, 09:02:57 AM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on May 18, 2008, 08:35:15 AM
Tamam gazaliyat behad umda or unche darje ki he, Roja ji aap jesi shaira ka hamare darmiyaan hona hamare liye khushi or fakhar ki baat he, bohot bohot mubarak baad, allah kare zor-e-sukhan or zyada.

ooh my God.. me still in learning stage...Sayyid ji.
Aapne mujhe appreciate kiya bahut bahut dhanyawad.
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Roja
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«Reply #53 on: May 18, 2008, 09:05:24 AM »
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Bahut bahut thanks Pooja didi
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«Reply #54 on: May 18, 2008, 10:11:12 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 18, 2008, 09:02:57 AM
ooh my God.. me still in learning stage...Sayyid ji.
Aapne mujhe appreciate kiya bahut bahut dhanyawad.

Roja ji aadaab...
Mene baat ko badha chadha kar pesh nahi kiya he, Sab se badi baat he "wazan" jab tak sher me wazan naho wo "nazam" nahi "nasar" kehlata he, YO par istara sahih kalam pesh karne waale log bohot hain magar phir bhi kam hain, aksariyat iski parwah nahi karti.

Aap ke ash'aar me aksar wazan sahi hota he, jese aap ka sher:

Besada muflison ki sada ab to sun
Sab pata hai tujhe ae khuda ab to sun

Agar ye soch samajh kar wazan par likhe gae hen to bohot achhchha he or agar beirada hi wazan par sher kehdale to or bhi achhchha he, iska matlab he fitrat me shayri he, jo bohot unche maqaam tak pohonchne ki daleel he.

Afsos he ke mene pehle aap ko kyun nahi padha shayad is liye ke ham dono ka waqt alag he YO par aane ka.
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«Reply #55 on: May 18, 2008, 01:12:08 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 06, 2008, 02:37:46 AM
Rait bhari hay in aankhoun main aanso say tum dho laina
Koi sookha pairh miley to us say lipat k ro laina

Us k baad bohat tanha hou jaisey jungle ka rasta
Jo bhi tum say pyaar say boley saath usi k hou laina

Kuch tou rait ki pyaas bujhao janam janam ki pyaasi hay
Saahil par chalney say pehlay apney paoon bhigo laina

Main nay darya say seekhi hay paani ki parda daari
Oopar oopar hunstey rehna, gehraayi main rou laina

Rotey kiyoon hou dil waaloun ki qismat aisi hoti hay
Saari raat yoonhi jaagogey din nikley to sou laina !!

Poet: BASHEER BADAR

Mailed By Roja

One of my favourites...Usual Smile
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«Reply #56 on: May 18, 2008, 01:14:13 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on February 29, 2008, 07:12:50 AM
Bohat Khoob Ji

Merii zubaa.N se merii daastaa.N suno to sahii
Yaqii.N karo na karo meherbaa.N suno to sahii


Chalo ye maan liyaa mujrim-e-mohabbat hai.n
Hamaare jurm kaa hamse bayaa.N suno to sahii


Banoge dost mere tum bhii dushmano.n ek din
Merii hayaat kii aah-o-fuGaa.N suno to sahii


Labo.n ko sii ke jo baiThe hai.n bazm-e-duniyaa me.n
Kabhii to unakii bhii Khamoshiyaa.N suno to sahii


Kahoge vaqt ko mujarim bharii bahaaro.n me.n
Jalaa thaa kaise meraa aashiyaa.N suno to sahii


Sudarshan Fakir



Nice Sharing !
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«Reply #57 on: May 18, 2008, 01:14:54 PM »
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Quote from: Harash Mahajan on March 14, 2008, 05:53:54 AM
Nafrat ko nafrat se fanaah na ker
Wafa ker be-wafayi ka Gunah na ker


harash

Do lines, magar kya khoob likha hai !!
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«Reply #58 on: May 18, 2008, 01:15:52 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 16, 2008, 04:13:08 PM
Besada muflison ki sada ab toh sun
Sab pata hai tujhe ye khuda ab toh sun

Luta hai zamana inhe kis tarah
Aa jara dekh tu ye sama ab toh sun

Kaun inka sunega tumare sivay
Kisliye aankh roye gila ab toh sun

Bebasi inki aa kar zara dekh le
Kar nigahe-karam, yeh dua ab to sun

Chand taare inhone na mange kabhi
De siyahi ko inke diye ab toh sun

Kya hua hai tujhe, tu bi sunta nahi
Kaun inki sune fir bata(बता) ab toh sun

Ta rahe hai kehar joh unhe de saja
Bas "Roja" ki itni dua ab toh sun

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Besada = be awaz, Sama = drushya
Nigahe-karam = kripa drishti
Kehar = atyachar
Bohot khoob Roja !!!
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«Reply #59 on: May 18, 2008, 01:56:37 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on May 18, 2008, 10:11:12 AM
Roja ji aadaab...
Mene baat ko badha chadha kar pesh nahi kiya he, Sab se badi baat he "wazan" jab tak sher me wazan naho wo "nazam" nahi "nasar" kehlata he, YO par istara sahih kalam pesh karne waale log bohot hain magar phir bhi kam hain, aksariyat iski parwah nahi karti.

Aap ke ash'aar me aksar wazan sahi hota he, jese aap ka sher:


Besada muflison ki sada ab to sun
Sab pata hai tujhe ae khuda ab to sun

Agar ye soch samajh kar wazan par likhe gae hen to bohot achhchha he or agar beirada hi wazan par sher kehdale to or bhi achhchha he, iska matlab he fitrat me shayri he, jo bohot unche maqaam tak pohonchne ki daleel he.

Afsos he ke mene pehle aap ko kyun nahi padha shayad is liye ke ham dono ka waqt alag he YO par aane ka.

Sayyid,

Hume bohot khushi hai ki YOIndia pe aap jaise shayar hain, Yaqeenan, aapka kalam kam nazar aata hai yahan, par bohot hi aa'ala !! Aapki shayari ke to hum qayal hain...... Usual Smile

Beshak yahan bohot log likhte hain lekin sahi maayne main urdu shayari kam hi log karte hain..magar seekhne main kaisi sharam...aur jo log seekhne main sharam mehsoos nahin karte, wohi aage badhte hain....

Aapke fan se agar meri bhi shayari durust ho, to mujhe is baat se zyada khushi aur kya hogi..Ummed hai ki aap humari islaah karte rahenge (jaise ki karte rehte hain )Usual Smile
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