*Gazal* -Panna 6:Ghazals

abdbundeli

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«Reply #75 on: February 21, 2009, 04:17:50 PM »

Quote from: Roja on February 21, 2009, 03:32:48 PM

Gam Ki Dawa Toh Sharab Nahi
Haan Ye Zehar Sahi Per Karaab Nahi

Pyar Ke Naam Per Loot.te Ho
Yaaron Tumhara Bhi Jawab Nahi

Joh Apni Hararat Se Pigla Na De
Woh Shabab Koyi Shabab Nahi

Tumhe Lagta Pyar Ke Badle Pyar Mile
Tumhare Liye Ye Dunia Janab Nahi

Sabhi Apni-Apni Fithrat Ke Fakir
Saccha Dil Ka Koyi Nawab Nahi

Humne toh Bas Aankon Se Ishara Kiya
Badle Mein Unka Pyar Ka Jawab Nahi

Bhalayi Ki Toh Ginthi Hai "Roja", Magar
Pass Apne Gunahon Ke Hisab Nahi

It's lovely!
Khushk gouhar* pai abhi aab naheen!
Us ney jaanaa hai iztraab# naheen!
Ham ko jeenaa hai shab-o-roz, 'abd',
Zindagee, zindagee hai; khwaab naheen!

* Pearl, Motee,
# Beytaabee, beychainy

- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #76 on: February 23, 2009, 02:47:22 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on February 21, 2009, 04:17:50 PM

Thanks ji..

Zindagi jeena mushkil hai, aasaan nahi
Tera pyar paya hai, dil mein basna aasaan nahi

Raah ke her mod pe hai kante, phool nahi
Humsafar bina tanha jeena aasaan nahi


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abdbundeli

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #77 on: February 23, 2009, 03:56:20 AM »

Quote from: Roja on December 19, 2007, 03:30:26 AM

Friends... mujhe aaj pata nahi kyu darr sa lag raha hai k meri hindi
kamjor hai aur yeh gazal pe kahi hindi wordings galati ki hu. Kahi galati
nazar aaya to kehna... plz.
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शब्द झूठे है सभी सत्य कथाओं की तरह
वक़्त बेशर्म है वेश्या की अदाओं की तरह

जाने वो किसका था साया की जिसे छूने को,
हम भटकते रहे आवारा हवाओं की तरह

प्यार के वास्ते प्यासा है ये दिल सदियों से
अब तो बरसे कोई सावन की घटाओ की तरह

हर अंधेरे से सुबह बन के गुज़र ज़ाऊगी
जो तेरा हाथ रहे सर पर दुआओं की तरह

आज पलकों में सनम ख्वाब बनाकर रख लो
कल मै खो ज़ाऊगी, गुमनाम गुफ़ाओं की तरह

मुझको सुलझाने में तुम ख़ुद ही उलझ जाओगे
ज़िंदगी है मेरी साधु की जटाओ की तरह

जी हां .. "रोज़ा" में बहुत दोष है लेकिन फिर भी
माफ़ कर दो उसे बच्चों की खताओं की तरह[/size]

It's really superb! I've corrected most of the important Hindi spellings! Roja, you're an adorable person: rather a highly adorable one! You certainly possess huge poetic brains behind your head! I'll be happy to read a lot more of you!
- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #78 on: February 25, 2009, 03:23:06 AM »

aaaw... I am really honoured ABD ji really honoured.


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pandit

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #79 on: February 25, 2009, 03:59:38 AM »

Quote from: Roja on February 21, 2009, 03:32:48 PM

marvellous roja...


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #80 on: February 25, 2009, 04:21:25 AM »

Thank you Pandit


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abdbundeli

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #81 on: February 25, 2009, 05:13:02 AM »

Quote from: Roja on February 25, 2009, 03:23:06 AM

aaaw... I am really honoured ABD ji really honoured.

Thanks! You're welcome, Roja ji!
- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #82 on: March 15, 2009, 09:43:34 AM »

Sach koi kisi ko batlata nahi,
Waise bhi yeh logon ko aata nahi

Kehna toh hai aasaa.bn, magar fir bhi
Mushkil hai ki jubaan pe aata nahi

Poochkar humse hamara pata,
Naam tak vo apna batata nahi

Muskuraya karo apne her game pe
Rone walon ko koyi hasata nahi

Patharon ke shehar mein jaa toh rahe ho,
Wahan se lautkar koyi aata nahi

Doondte ho khuda kis jahan mein,
Insaan toh koyi nazar aata nahi

Pee jate hai dawa jaan ke kuch log
Merne ko zehar koyi khata nahi


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #83 on: March 15, 2009, 10:00:50 AM »

Good Gazals Roja Ji


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divyam

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #84 on: March 16, 2009, 02:34:08 PM »

Quote from: Roja on December 19, 2007, 03:30:26 AM

Friends... mujhe aaj pata nahi kyu darr sa lag raha hai k meri hindi
kamjor hai aur yeh gazal pe kahi hindi wordings galati ki hu. Kahi galati
nazar aaya to kehna... plz.
***************************************************************************
शब्द झूठे है सभी सत्या कथाओं की तरह
वक़्त बेशर्म है वेश्या की अदाओं की तरह

जाने वो किसका था साया की जिसे छूने को,
हम भटकते रहे आवारा हवाओं की तरह

प्यार के वास्ते प्यासा है ये दिल सदियों से
अब तो बरसो कोई सावन की घटाओ की तरह

हर अंधेरे से सुबह बन के गुज़र ज़ाऊगी
तेरा हाथ जो रहे सर पर दुआओं की तरह

आज पलकों में मुझे ख्वाब बनाकर रख लो सनम
कल मै खो जौंगी, गुमनाम गुफ़ाओं की तरह

मुझको सुलझाने में तुम ख़ुद ही उलझ जाओगे
ज़िंदगी है मेरी साधु की जाताओं की तरह

जी हां .. "रोज़ा" में बहुत दोष है लेकिन फिर भी
माफ़ कर दो उसे बच्चों की खताओं की तरह[/size]

Shabd jhute hai sabhi satya kathawon ki tarah
Waqt beshrm hai veshya ki adawon ki tarah

Jane wo kiska tha saya ki jise chune ko,
Hum bhatakte rahe aawara hawawon ki tarah

Pyar ke wasthe pyasa hai yeh dil sadiyon se
Ab to barso koyi sawan ki ghatao ki tarah

Her andhere se subah ban ke guzar JaaU.gii
Tera haat jo rahe ser per duawon ki tarah

Aaj palkon mein mujhe khwaab banakar rakh lo sanam
Kal mai kho jaungi, gumnam gufawon ki tarah

Mujhko suljane mein tum khud hi ulajh jaoge
Zindagi hai meri sadhu ki jatawon ki tarah

Ji haan "Roja" main bahut dosh hai lekin fir bi
Maaf kar do use bachchon ki khatawon ki tarah

beautiful! Applause

behad achchhe khayaal hai.n roja jee, yuu.n hi likhti raho..

-Mayank


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #85 on: March 16, 2009, 02:36:31 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on March 15, 2009, 10:00:50 AM

Good Gazals Roja Ji

Thanks Rajesh Harish ji


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #86 on: March 16, 2009, 02:42:06 PM »

Quote from: Ghaafil on March 16, 2009, 02:34:08 PM

beautiful! Applause

behad achchhe khayaal hai.n roja jee, yuu.n hi likhti raho..

-Mayank

Mayank ji, aapne mera likha pada aur tarif ki... bahut bahut shukriya...
( malli ke likhayi mein kuch improvement nazar aayi k nahi? )


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salma786

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #87 on: March 16, 2009, 02:45:40 PM »

Are waah waah Roja dear apne to mera dil jeet liya
bahoot bahoot khoob.... maaf karna pehle dekha nahi maine ....
Out standing!


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #88 on: March 16, 2009, 02:50:50 PM »

Quote from: salma786 on March 16, 2009, 02:45:40 PM

Are waah waah Roja dear apne to mera dil jeet liya
bahoot bahoot khoob.... maaf karna pehle dekha nahi maine ....
Out standing!

Thank you very much dear Salma... Aate rehna


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Roja

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Re: *Gazal*

«Reply #89 on: March 18, 2009, 12:00:49 PM »

Raah andha dikha raha hai mujhe
Swaad ghoonga bata raha hai mujhe

Khud ko lagne laga hu mai tabla
Ek anadi baja raha hai mujhe

Kal samajta tha aaina mujhko
Aaj pattar bata raha hai mujhe

Vo angooti ka vaida karke
Ab angoota dikha raha hai mujhe

Mai na Gandhi hu, Mai na Gautam hu
Dard kyu aajma raha hai mujhe.


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