*Gazal*

by Roja on September 03, 2007, 03:06:35 AM
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TOUSIFSHAIKHH
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«Reply #90 on: March 18, 2009, 12:22:39 PM »
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Behtareen likhayi:
And thnks fr reading my ghazal.
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«Reply #91 on: March 18, 2009, 12:27:11 PM »
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Quote from: TOUSIFSHAIKHH on March 18, 2009, 12:22:39 PM
Behtareen likhayi:
And thnks fr reading my ghazal.

Thank you very much for the appriciation... Usual Smile
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«Reply #92 on: March 18, 2009, 02:08:38 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 16, 2009, 02:42:06 PM
Mayank ji, aapne mera likha pada aur tarif ki... bahut bahut shukriya...
( malli ke likhayi mein kuch improvement nazar aayi k nahi?  tongue3 )

Roja jee aap pahle bhi achchah likhti thee, aur ab bhi achchha likhti hai.n Usual Smile

-Mayank
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«Reply #93 on: March 20, 2009, 03:28:39 PM »
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Quote from: Ghaafil on March 18, 2009, 02:08:38 PM
Roja jee aap pahle bhi achchah likhti thee, aur ab bhi achchha likhti hai.n Usual Smile

-Mayank

Thanks onceagain Mayank ji. Yu hi saat dete rehna.

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«Reply #94 on: March 20, 2009, 03:38:40 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 18, 2009, 12:00:49 PM
Raah andha dikha raha hai mujhe
Swaad ghoonga bata raha hai mujhe

Khud ko lagne laga hu mai tabla
Ek anadi baja raha hai mujhe

Kal samajta tha aaina mujhko
Aaj pattar bata raha hai mujhe

Vo angooti ka vaida karke
Ab angoota dikha raha hai mujhe

Mai na Gandhi hu, Mai na Gautam hu
Dard kyu aajma raha hai mujhe.

WAH WAH, BAHUT KHOOB

ABB JAB CHAIN SEY SONA CHAHATEY HAI
WAQT KU JAGA RAHA HAI HAMEY
TODD CHUKEY HAI ABB HUM SARI BANDISHEY
RISHTA KU JATA RAHA HAI HAMEY


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #95 on: March 22, 2009, 03:42:11 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on March 20, 2009, 03:38:40 PM
WAH WAH, BAHUT KHOOB

ABB JAB CHAIN SEY SONA CHAHATEY HAI
WAQT KU JAGA RAHA HAI HAMEY
TODD CHUKEY HAI ABB HUM SARI BANDISHEY
RISHTA KU JATA RAHA HAI HAMEY


JASBIR SINGH

Thanks.... Applause
Nice lines Jas ji..
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«Reply #96 on: March 22, 2009, 03:51:20 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 18, 2009, 12:00:49 PM
Raah andha dikha raha hai mujhe
Swaad ghoonga bata raha hai mujhe

Khud ko lagne laga hu mai tabla
Ek anadi baja raha hai mujhe

Kal samajta tha aaina mujhko
Aaj pattar bata raha hai mujhe

Vo angooti ka vaida karke
Ab angoota dikha raha hai mujhe

Mai na Gandhi hu, Mai na Gautam hu
Dard kyu aajma raha hai mujhe.
Nice lines Roja jee Applause
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«Reply #97 on: March 23, 2009, 11:18:57 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 22, 2009, 03:42:11 PM
Thanks.... Applause
Nice lines Jas ji..


thanks roja

jasbir singh
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«Reply #98 on: March 24, 2009, 02:13:38 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on March 22, 2009, 03:51:20 PM
Nice lines Roja jee Applause

Thank you very much for reading me Rahim ji.
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«Reply #99 on: March 24, 2009, 09:28:28 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 18, 2009, 12:00:49 PM
Raah andha dikha raha hai mujhe
Swaad ghoonga bata raha hai mujhe

Khud ko lagne laga hu mai tabla
Ek anadi baja raha hai mujhe

Kal samajta tha aaina mujhko
Aaj pattar bata raha hai mujhe

Vo angooti ka vaida karke
Ab angoota dikha raha hai mujhe

Mai na Gandhi hu, Mai na Gautam hu
Dard kyu aajma raha hai mujhe.

wah wah roja ji kia baat....aapki ghazal ka har shair daad ke qabil hai yaqeen maniye bhut khoob kaha hai aapne, bhut sachchi tasveer kheenchi hai aapne, hum apne andar nhi jhanka karte balke doosro ke aib dhoonte rhete hain, bhut bhut mubarak ho apko aise hi likhti rhiye aur hume aaina dikhati rhiye,,,

mein na ghandi hun  aur na gotam hun
dard kiyun aazma rha hai mujhay.....
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«Reply #100 on: March 25, 2009, 02:37:22 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 24, 2009, 09:28:28 AM
wah wah roja ji kia baat....aapki ghazal ka har shair daad ke qabil hai yaqeen maniye bhut khoob kaha hai aapne, bhut sachchi tasveer kheenchi hai aapne, hum apne andar nhi jhanka karte balke doosro ke aib dhoonte rhete hain, bhut bhut mubarak ho apko aise hi likhti rhiye aur hume aaina dikhati rhiye,,,

mein na ghandi hun  aur na gotam hun
dard kiyun aazma rha hai mujhay.....



Bahut bahut shukriya Aslam ji...  Usual Smile
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«Reply #101 on: March 25, 2009, 02:57:00 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 18, 2009, 12:00:49 PM
Raah andha dikha raha hai mujhe
Swaad ghoonga bata raha hai mujhe

Khud ko lagne laga hu mai tabla
Ek anadi baja raha hai mujhe

Kal samajta tha aaina mujhko
Aaj pattar bata raha hai mujhe

Vo angooti ka vaida karke
Ab angoota dikha raha hai mujhe

Mai na Gandhi hu, Mai na Gautam hu
Dard kyu aajma raha hai mujhe.

Waah bhai Roja!
Pyaara! Baaqiyee dilaaweyz! Kyaa baat hai Roja dear! "Vo angooti ka vaida karke;
Ab angoota dikha raha hai mujhe!" Kyaa bayaan-e-haqeeqat hai!! Bhai waah!
             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #102 on: March 25, 2009, 03:54:25 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 18, 2009, 12:00:49 PM
Raah andha dikha raha hai mujhe
Swaad ghoonga bata raha hai mujhe

Khud ko lagne laga hu mai tabla
Ek anadi baja raha hai mujhe

Kal samajta tha aaina mujhko
Aaj pattar bata raha hai mujhe

Vo angooti ka vaida karke
Ab angoota dikha raha hai mujhe

Mai na Gandhi hu, Mai na Gautam hu
Dard kyu aajma raha hai mujhe.

Kya baat hai..bohot khoob Roja !!
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«Reply #103 on: March 26, 2009, 02:18:01 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on March 25, 2009, 02:57:00 PM
Waah bhai Roja!
Pyaara! Baaqiyee dilaaweyz! Kyaa baat hai Roja dear! "Vo angooti ka vaida karke;
Ab angoota dikha raha hai mujhe!" Kyaa bayaan-e-haqeeqat hai!! Bhai waah!
             - abd bundeli


Bahut bahut shukriya aapka.. aapne padkar tarif ki yahi mere liye fakr ki baat hai. Yu hi saat dete rehna Uncle ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #104 on: March 26, 2009, 02:19:59 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 25, 2009, 03:54:25 PM
Kya baat hai..bohot khoob Roja !!

Thank you very much Talat  Usual Smile
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