gazal

by seema muntezir on April 14, 2008, 01:59:40 PM

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seema muntezir

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gam-a zindgi ka bhojh ab uthaya nahi jata
papdaye hua hothon se muskaya nahi jata

khyar khavahon ke shaher main rahene to aa gye
itni jaldi khoff dil se bhulaya nahi jata

koi to apna bhi vajood hota hoga
ta-umra abhinaya main patra nibhaya nahi jata

jin darakhton ne dhan liya kat jana hi
un darakhton ke siron ko jhukaya nahi jata

jin makano ki chokhton main derwaje hi nahi
un makano pr tala kabhi lagaya nahi jata


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seema muntezir

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Re: gazal

«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2008, 12:59:20 PM »

thanks to all my readers


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abdulqadeer

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Re: gazal

«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2008, 09:48:46 AM »

kabhi kabhi teri palkaun pe jhil milaun mai..
tu intezaar kare aur bhool jaun mai..
samandaroon me pahonch kar fareb mat dena..
tu kahe to kinaroon pe doob jaun mai..NM

abdul qadeer from dubai


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Talat

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Re: gazal

«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2008, 10:54:58 AM »

Very Nice Seema and Addul Qadeer, keep writing !


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Shikha12

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Re: gazal

«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2008, 11:04:59 AM »

Nice work Seema.. And,

Beautiful Reply Abdul Qadeer ji..


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Roja

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Re: gazal

«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2008, 04:47:28 AM »

jin darakhton ne dhan liya kat jana hi
un darakhton ke siron ko jhukaya nahi jata

jin makano ki chokhton main derwaje hi nahi
un makano pr tala kabhi lagaya nahi jata

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Seema.

@Abdul Qadeer ji, aapne b accha reply diya hai.