Gazal Urdu-hindiSamander ker diye mere havale bana kagaz ka safina

by R.M. Dixit on November 09, 2010, 02:51:56 PM

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R.M. Dixit

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Gamon ke saye main hans - hans ke jeena
Bari muddet main aaya ye kareena.

Samunder ker diye mere havale
Banaker mujhko kaagez ka safeena.

Jiger sulge, lahoo uble baden main
Mager aaye na maathe pe paseena.

Galet hum koste rehte hai unko
Falek ka aap bhi chalni hai seena.

Sabhi hain paara-paara resha-resha
Para hai kin garebanon ko seena.

Kahan 'Akhter' kahan Firoz-bakhti
ki paaker kho diya un-sa nageena.


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.adeeb

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Re: Gazal Urdu-hindiSamander ker diye mere havale bana kagaz ka safina

«Reply #1 on: November 09, 2010, 04:07:39 PM »

Janab Dixit sahab bahot behtreen ghazal aapne share ki hai. Aapki pasand bahot achhi lagi. Thanks for sharing such a nice ghazal.


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zidd

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Re: Gazal Urdu-hindiSamander ker diye mere havale bana kagaz ka safina

«Reply #2 on: November 10, 2010, 05:51:59 AM »

Quote from: R.M. Dixit on November 09, 2010, 02:51:56 PM

bahut khoob kaha dixit sahab...
daad kabool ho

regardds


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R.M. Dixit

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Re: Gazal Urdu-hindiSamander ker diye mere havale bana kagaz ka safina

«Reply #3 on: November 10, 2010, 02:39:13 PM »

Quote from: .adeeb on November 09, 2010, 04:07:39 PM

Janab Dixit sahab bahot behtreen ghazal aapne share ki hai. Aapki pasand bahot achhi lagi. Thanks for sharing such a nice ghazal.

Shukriya Mohterm, aapne Gazal ko
   Saraha apni daad se navaja. Tahe dil
   se
   aapki daad qabool ki humne. Nic of U.
   Bye Bye.

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R.M. Dixit

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Re: Gazal Urdu-hindiSamander ker diye mere havale bana kagaz ka safina

«Reply #4 on: November 10, 2010, 02:45:01 PM »

Quote from: zidd on November 10, 2010, 05:51:59 AM

bahut khoob kaha dixit sahab...
daad kabool ho

regardds

Shukriya Ziddi Miyan. AApne hamri
pesh ki gazal ko ehmiyet aur daad se
nawaja. So nice of u.


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zarra

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Re: Gazal Urdu-hindiSamander ker diye mere havale bana kagaz ka safina

«Reply #5 on: November 11, 2010, 07:50:52 PM »

dixit ji. waqai bahaut hi nafees kalam share kiya apne. shukriya.


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R.M. Dixit

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Re: Gazal Urdu-hindiSamander ker diye mere havale bana kagaz ka safina

«Reply #6 on: November 12, 2010, 01:52:45 AM »

Shukriya Zarra, aapne hamare
pesh ki gazal ko ahmiyet di
aur bare sunder alfaaz se daad
inayet ki.
Maaf kijeye Zarra is 'F' hai or 'M'
bataiyega plese.


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Gazal Urdu-hindiSamander ker diye mere havale bana kagaz ka safina

«Reply #7 on: November 12, 2010, 05:58:21 AM »

RM dixit sahab daad hazir he bahut badhiya peshkash~


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R.M. Dixit

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Re: Gazal Urdu-hindiSamander ker diye mere havale bana kagaz ka safina

«Reply #8 on: November 12, 2010, 05:45:47 PM »

Shukriya Janab shukriya apne
hamari pesh ki gazal ki kadra ki
daad di. Hum tahe dil sedaad qabool
kerte hain.


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