geet ban kar wo ham-nafas ab tak (by vb)

by vb on October 23, 2013, 10:44:26 PM
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Raat dhalti hay din nikalta hay
Ye jahan bhe kabhi badalta hay?

Geet ban kar wo hum-nafas ab tak
Dil k aatish-kaday main jalta hay

Sang-e-mar-mar say taraasha paikar
Shayari say kahan pighalta hay?

Baadbaan manzilon ko kastay hen
Kon moujon k saath chalta hay?

Chhorti hay mataa-e-husn kisay?
Dil tu muflis ka bhe machalta hay

Hum ne pi hay, nashay main hay saaghar
Larkharaata, kabhi sambhalta hay

Chaand kitnaa udaas hay, vb!
Dakheyay, kis gali main dhalta hay

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«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2013, 10:48:01 PM »
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Geet ban kar wo hum-nafas ab tak
Dil k aatish-kaday main jalta hay

Sang-e-mar-mar say taraasha paikar
Shayari say kahan pighalta hay?  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Baadbaan manzilon ko kastay hen
Kon moujon k saath chalta hay?

Chhorti hay mataa-e-husn kisay?
Dil tu muflis ka bhe machalta hay

Hum ne pi hay, nashay main hay saaghar
Larkharaata, kabhi sambhalta hay

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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2013, 02:30:40 AM »
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Geet ban kar wo hum-nafas ab tak
Dil k aatish-kaday main jalta hay

Sang-e-mar-mar say taraasha paikar
Shayari say kahan pighalta hay?

Behtreen,Bhai Waah.!Waah.!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 24, 2013, 03:35:31 AM »
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Raat dhalti hay din nikalta hay
Ye jahan bhe kabhi badalta hay?
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Geet ban kar wo hum-nafas ab tak
Dil k aatish-kaday main jalta hay
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Sang-e-mar-mar say taraasha paikar
Shayari say kahan pighalta hay?
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Baadbaan manzilon ko kastay hen
Kon moujon k saath chalta hay?
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Chhorti hay mataa-e-husn kisay?
Dil tu muflis ka bhe machalta hay
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Hum ne pi hay, nashay main hay saaghar
Larkharaata, kabhi sambhalta hay
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Chaand kitnaa udaas hay, vb!
Dakheyay, kis gali main dhalta hay
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2013, 01:54:33 PM »
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bahot bahot bahot khoobsurat ghazal... aru is sher par main qhurbaan...
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Dil tu muflis ka bhe machalta hay
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Waaaaaah behtareen peshkash vb ji... in ashaaron ke kya kehne... hazaron hazaron daaaaaaaad..

Sang-e-mar-mar say taraasha paikar
Shayari say kahan pighalta hay?

Baadbaan manzilon ko kastay hen
Kon moujon k saath chalta hay?

Chhorti hay mataa-e-husn kisay?
Dil tu muflis ka bhe machalta hay
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sksaini4 jee! shukriya aap ka..
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mkv jee! aap ka bhe buhat shukriya
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Advo.RavinderaRa jee! pasand karnay ka shukriya...
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Sheba jee! shukriya aap ka...

rang-o-khushbu k raig-zaaron men
kon vb ki baat karta hay?
us k jazbon ka ehteraam karo
aaj jo shakhs tum pay marta hay

hum kya hen.... khuda jaanay...
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RAJAN KONDAL jee! thanx...
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