Geet koi suna hi dalo

by SURESH SANGWAN on February 02, 2018, 03:05:03 PM
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गीत कोई सुना ही डालो
हाल दिल का बता ही डालो

सुन सके ये ज़मीं आसमाँ
शोर इतना मचा ही डालो

मात खा रहे चाँद सितारे
नज़र का टीका लगा ही डालो

राज़ कब तलक राज़ रहेगा
आज परदा हटा ही डालो

जल रहा तन बदन सूरज सा
साथ दिल भी जला ही डालो

जा रही है छलकती कब से
जाम आँख से पिला ही डालो

कब तलक यूँ फिरोगे उड़ते
घोंसला तो बसा ही डालो

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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2018, 05:39:10 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai.
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2018, 10:28:55 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 03, 2018, 06:23:34 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 02, 2018, 03:05:03 PM

गीत कोई सुना ही डालो
हाल दिल का बता ही डालो

सुन सके ये ज़मीं आसमाँ
शोर इतना मचा ही डालो

मात खा रहे चाँद सितारे
नज़र का टीका लगा ही डालो

राज़ कब तलक राज़ रहेगा
आज परदा हटा ही डालो

जल रहा तन बदन सूरज सा
साथ दिल भी जला ही डालो

जा रही है छलकती कब से
जाम आँख से पिला ही डालो

कब तलक यूँ फिरोगे उड़ते
घोंसला तो बसा ही डालो

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Waah.. Waah..

Bahut Khub.
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2018, 06:50:59 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2018, 08:51:07 AM »
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वाह वाह बहुत खूब अति sunder Applause Applause Applause :clap:हमे भी अपने दिल की बात कह डालो
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Bas waaaaah hi waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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