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geet likhta hun tu (by vb)

by vb on October 29, 2013, 10:07:09 PM

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Geet likhta hoon tu andaaz badal leta hoon
Sher kehta hoon tu aavaaz badal leta hoon

Cheekh partay hen tu misray he mita deta hoon
Aah bhartay hen tu alfaaz badal leta hoon

Meri ghazlon k sabhi qaafiyay, radeef sabhi
Jo kabhi tujh say hon naaraaz badal leta hoon

Har ake sher main ik raaz chhupa hay lekin
Raaz khultaa ho tu hum-raaz badal leta hon

Wo ghazal jo teri soorat ko saraahay, us k
Sher saaray nahi, par ba’az badal leta hoon

Har ake geet ka unvaan badal jaata hay
Aap anjaam, main aaghaaz badal leta hoon

Jaanta hoon main teray dil k taranum saaray
Jo tujhay dard day wo saaz badal leta hoon

Sochta hoon k agar tujh pay fida hen nazmen
Teri tasveer say bayaaz badal leta hoon

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Re: geet likhta hun tu (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2013, 10:15:30 PM »

wonderful superb dheron daad


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Re: geet likhta hun tu (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2013, 10:56:23 PM »

bas waaaaaah hi waaaaah.....
Jaanta hoon main teray dil k taranum saaray
Jo tujhay dard day wo saaz badal leta hoon

Sochta hoon k agar tujh pay fida hen nazmen
Teri tasveer say bayaaz badal leta hoon
Applause


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Re: geet likhta hun tu (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2013, 11:36:19 PM »

raaz khulta ho to hum raaz badal leta hoon

Waaah !!!! Dil khushi ho gaya!! Badi hi alag aur dilchasp ghazal kahi ... dheron daad VB ji aap ko !!


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Re: geet likhta hun tu (by vb)

«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2013, 11:47:09 PM »

shukriya aap sub ka...


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Re: geet likhta hun tu (by vb)

«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2013, 12:05:24 AM »

Har ake sher main ik raaz chhupa hay lekin
Raaz khultaa ho tu hum-raaz badal leta hon
waah Applause


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Re: geet likhta hun tu (by vb)

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Re: geet likhta hun tu (by vb)

«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2013, 03:18:28 AM »

Meri ghazlon k sabhi qaafiyay, radeef sabhi
Jo kabhi tujh say hon naaraaz badal leta hoon

Bahut khoob VB jee


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Re: geet likhta hun tu (by vb)

«Reply #8 on: October 30, 2013, 02:05:49 PM »

shukriya...


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Re: geet likhta hun tu (by vb)

«Reply #9 on: October 30, 2013, 09:00:01 PM »

Waaaaaaaaaaah! kya kehne Vb ji... behad khooooooooooob... dheron dheron daaad....


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Re: geet likhta hun tu (by vb)

«Reply #10 on: October 31, 2013, 08:09:28 PM »

aqsh jee... buhat shukriya aap ka...


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Re: geet likhta hun tu (by vb)

«Reply #11 on: October 31, 2013, 08:47:51 PM »

Meri ghazlon k sabhi qaafiyay, radeef sabhi
Jo kabhi tujh say hon naaraaz badal leta hoon

kyaa kehne janaab..... waaahh

Wo ghazal jo teri soorat ko saraahay, us k
Sher saaray nahi, par ba’az badal leta hoon

ab ye kyaa baat huii.... kisi ko tareef karne ka mauqaa to dijiye..

Jaanta hoon main teray dil k taranum saaray
Jo tujhay dard day wo saaz badal leta hoon

laajawaab.............

Sochta hoon k agar tujh pay fida hen nazmen
Teri tasveer say bayaaz badal leta hoon

bahot khoob..... bahot khoob... bahot hi khoob... ho zore kalam aur ziyaadah... daad ke phool aapke liye.

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